Reviews For Learning to Love
Reviewer: hattiepotter
Date: 05/21/07 14:25
Chapter: A Boy with Black Hair

YES, FINALLY it's up! Man alive, MNFF, what has it taken?! Like a year?! Anyway, I'm glad that your readers will finally be able to appreciate the last chapter in this section of the story. And I am leaving this review to tell you to KEEP WRITING YOU FOOL. It's such a good anti-revision tactic that I may even try it myself ... YOU OWE IT TO THE STORY. DO IT. DO IT NOW. Hat xxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 2:00
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

It's sad that James realizes that he's in love with Lily when she's angry at him. I hope they sort things out and that Lily forgives him soon. This is the best story I've read in a while and I want it to end happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! = )

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:47
Chapter: One Perfect Day

This is actually the greatest story i have ever read yet. (just dont tell sparx i said that because he's really good too-and Secret Lily--ur all so good i could never b like u!!!)

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:34
Chapter: Summer Fires

“Shut up, Evans.” Those words never had so much meaning. (OMGosh, im acting like a blah...sorry! Love the story!)

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:26
Chapter: Final Kisses

I absolutely love your story, you, the beta, the computer, the text, this review box, everything that helped me read this story and comment on it! : P : D

Author's Response: Ahah, thank you very much! I'm glad you like it so much :) I'll try and get the last chapter up right now and then, THEN, we can get on to the next one where it gets REALLY INTENSE ooooohooh :)

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:17
Chapter: Strange and Beautiful

'She reached up and put her arms around his neck. He didn’t look away from those emerald eyes as he slid his hands around her waist. As they kissed, the world around James dissolved…' I love your story!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:07
Chapter: All Things Potter

I bet a million baths wouldn't clear her mind of James Potter!!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 1:00
Chapter: Lost in the Forest

' “Yeah um…I don’t know my way out of here so could you just…”
Lily looked at the ground as he stood up and began to lead her out of the Forest.' That'd be embarrassing! But it's sad that Lily's being so stubborn. She knows that James is being really sweet to her and that she likes him, but she just HAS to deny all feelings she had for him! Makes me mad, as you can probably tell. : [

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 0:53
Chapter: Stormy Weather

That is so sweet! Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 0:46
Chapter: Nice Pyjamas

What did you imagine her pajamas look like? I'm curious! : P

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 05/02/07 13:01
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

when are you going to update?

Author's Response: I tried the other day but it got rejected. I'll fix it and try again this weekend :)

Reviewer: snapeisevil67
Date: 03/25/07 21:05
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

hi i know you are probably tired of hearing my opinion by now but oh well. i can't believe you just stopped a chapter like that!!! please please please post the next one as soon as you can! i love this fic and i am adding it to my favorites right now.

Author's Response: I haven't had a review for ages so I'm glad this (and the last two) was such a good one! It's great that you like it, I don't know when the next part will be up. I might do some over the easter holidays but I have GCSEs soon so it could get quite crazy. Anyway, I'll try to update soon and I'm pleased that you liked it :)

Reviewer: snapeisevil67
Date: 03/25/07 20:21
Chapter: Lost in the Forest

yes, me again but you said you weren't getting enough reviews so i'm gonna start reviewing after every chapter ok. i just finished chapter 4 and i thought is was awesome especially the part where sirius told lily he could kiss her but james would probably kill him. and i relly love the ending("Yeah um...I don't know my way out of here so could you just....") i can't wait to read more.
snape is evil!!!!

Reviewer: snapeisevil67
Date: 03/25/07 20:10
Chapter: Stormy Weather

i just finished reading chapter 3 and i love love love your story so far! it made me laugh so loud that my sister asked me what the heck was so funny. i love the storyline it is one of my favorites so far. keep up the good work!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 02/10/07 19:10
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

Please update!!! your story is so good
i can not wait for more!!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 01/31/07 1:38
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

I love your story so far and can't wait for the next chapters!!!!Keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thank you and I will :)

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 01/19/07 4:29
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

*sob* WAAAAGH!! Did you really have to end such a happy and fluffy fanfic in such a sad and emotional way? Because sad and emotional fanfics make me sad and emotional, and then I get a big puddle on my carpet..

Great fic! Keep writing ;)

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry for your puddle but fear not, the SEQUEL will be up soon! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: 99clouds
Date: 01/18/07 3:35
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

I think your story is really good I especially liked the ending of this one I can't wait for the last chapter

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup. I'm doing my french...

Reviewer: SiriusismyCrony
Date: 01/15/07 2:38
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

I love your story! Thank you for hours of endless entertainment and the fun minutes I have dancing around my house wondering when the next chapter is going to come out. Lovely job!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'll have to update soon then won't I? Ah, you've made a tired girl very happy :)

Reviewer: _mad_moony_
Date: 01/11/07 13:55
Chapter: The Moment Fate Had Been Waiting For

this is soooo kl i love it write more!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks :)

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