yay!!first to review!!!!! loved this chapter!! i get the impression that remus likes lily...say it ain't so!!!!!!!!!! the only thing you cna do to improve is get that next chapter up there!!!!...i cant think of anything else.....
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Your theory is interesting...I won't say any more. The next will be up very soon to make up for lost time!
Wonderful, as usual! You are amazing. I'm also mad at myself because I must've sat down to read this chapter about five times before this, and every time, someone interrupted me. So I would've had first review, but NO! Tess had to call! Lol, jk.
Anyhoo, I absolutely adore the parts where Lily was like "Move, Potter." And he says "No." That is so something I would do with a guy I liked but didn't want to admit it. And also where Sirius says "I would kiss you but James would probably kill me!" And finally, "Um, I don't know my way out of here so if you could just..." That was great!
I love this chapter, it was highly amusing, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next one! Until then, great job! *Mwah*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is still....in the queue...
Author's Response: Ok seriously. It's been a week and a half. What is going on?!
hi !!!!!!!!!!!! the Usual...love the atory update soon,get lily and james to make up....etc. etc. update soon please!!!! p.s ur story is in my favourites section
Author's Response: Yey! Thank you so much! The thing with Lily and James making up is that they have to sort of hate each other until 7th year but I want to build up their relationship because, and I've said it before (lol Hats), I don't want them to suddenly be like 'Hey! You know something? I've loved you all along even though all I've ever done is like yell at you!'. I want it to be more like they have a history that means Lily finds it hard to trust James and, although he's infatuated with her, he's wary of her and her reactions to stuff he does. The other thing is I want to put loads of fluff in cos it's cute but I have to be true to the realy story. That's why they're kind of rocky. So to be true to the wonderful JKR, everyone's going to have to wait until some time in the 7th year for the mother of fluff lol. I'll try to make 6th year go quickly! Thank you for being lovely xxLivsxx
loved this chapter so much!!! i cant remember if i review'd or not so here goes...i'm a recent member but when i joined i lost this story tyhen i found it again!!! i espically loved the transformation of remus....update soon!!!!! loved this chapter!!!!!! ui dont really know how you can improve.... update soon please!!!!! i need to see what happens!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow thank you! It is so, so good to get stuff like that. It's just so encouraging to know that I'm getting better at something that (thanks to Hattie) I love. Aah there are some chapters I can't wait to get up! Thank you for your niceness xxLivsxx
I totally agree, I see so much of Lily in Ginny, it really goes with that saying that guys end up choosing a girl who is similar to their own mother, which is interesting because Harry didn't even know her. Anyway, I really like this story so far, how often do you post them?? Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review...I don't see that much of Lily in GInny though apart from the obvious similarities. I think that Lily is a little quieter and more thoughtful whereas Ginny just lets everything out. And I think that Lily has this really storng power in her somewhere...I'll try to make that come out nearere the end! I post them whenever I can but I like waiting til I've got a few reviews for the last one. It all depends on having time! Thank you and keep reading. xxLivsxx
omg, my heart was beating furiously the whole time, probably cuz i recognized it from one of my stories that's coming up. that was so freaky! i liked that description of remus, very real, excellent work!
Author's Response: Coolness - great minds think alike and all that. Yeah I didn't want to go over the top with Remus so I'm glad that worked.
very nice beginning! lily's got a great reaction, and sirius is as funny (and horrible) as ever. nice touch! keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah I had to make Sirius a bit mean...even though I love him!
Lol just reminded myself of this chapter so that I could review. I was looking through the version I edited and there are more red "haha"s and "hehe"s than anything else! So, even though you say you hate this chapter, I apparently find it very funny. You know how I came out in Ginny when I wrote "Hiding from Harry"? Well you're coming out in Lily, which is great, because Lily totally fits the random funny comments that you say - don't you just love her? It's made her just the sarcastic, cheeky, Ginny-like character I imagined. And what's to come is so AWESOME! (Trust me - it's awesome)
Author's Response: I really don't see myself in Lily whereas you noticed yourself in Ginny in 'Hiding from Harry'. I don't think I am liking Lily cos I'm a bitch and I really don't see her as that. I see her as someone who is very intelligent, feisty, brave, kind of volatile but at the bottom of it all she is the nicest person you could imagine. I don't think I'm like that cos I'm not nice enough. Anyway yeah. Thank you for being cool. I love you xxLivsxx
First review! Well I have to say that you and your story rock. I reallly do love it. Haha, first they are making out, now they are fighting. Wow, I love it. Aye, well update soon cuz you rock! 10!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for saying that I rock because that is a reason I give people when they ask me why I've done something - not in my fanfic but in life in general. Why? Because I rock. Anyway I am very glad that you liked it so much and if you like them making out then fighting then they'll be lots of stuff coming soon that you should enjoy! Thanks again. Livs xxx
woo- really good! i loved james n sirius! ill carry on with the next chapter now... 10!Lisa xxx
Author's Response: Yey! Thank you! Chapter 4 is in the queue and I'm up to chapter 9 at the moment - which is gonna be a good one (I hope). I've decided to take this all the way through to their deaths if all goes well so I'm glad I've found a new reader!
I haven't reviewed for this chapter yet, so I will do. I love this one, even though I know you don't like writing action (well, there were also many cute, fluffy moments in this chapter which you know we all love). OMG, the best bit is when Lily kicks James - hahaha. I know that this chapter was a total bum to get up, but now it is we can progress! (Trust me, guys, the next few chapters are seriously great) Thanks very much to Natasha - I've read your reviews and been glad of them - and to Libs, who always keeps up my momentum by nagging me for more chapters - your story is great and your writing is getting more superb by the day! xxx
Author's Response: Hehe thank you Hattie! Aw this is just so much fun! I love it...
Oh, you know, I read Hattie's Always Stick Together. And tell her that I was almost crying because it was so (sappyness, yes, I know) moving. I loved it! Learning to Love gets a fave from me! —Jade
Author's Response: See!?!? Hattie is awesome - now you can see where the inspiration comes from. I urge everyone who's read mine to read hers because she is just so good!
Wow! Very cute! I loved it. “Woah! What’s up with him?” said Lily loudly. This had me laughing. It sounded like something I would say, great work! 10 again!
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! It was hard cos I don't really like writing action-ish stuff so I'm glad that you liked it!
Amazing! You are a truly gifted author! It was really, really good and interesting. I don't know why, but I see a lot of Lily in myself, especially in this fic, she's so real! Update again soon, I'm begging you! Lol, ;D —Jade
Author's Response: Wow - that is high praise indeed! Thank you so much! I feel like I should say that it is kind of all down to Hattie cos she inspired me and she is a really talented author herself. I really love writing this as well and without Hats I'd be missing out on so much - and plus writing's good for the old english coursework. Anyhoo - it's too late to submit the next chapter now before Christmas so hopefully I'll get some more reads over the break and that would be awesome. I'm up to chapter 7 now and they have just gone home for the summer (it's weird writing about 'heat' and 'summer breezes' during the middle of December!) so I really want to get started on thier next year. I've decided to take it all the way through to their death now (if all goes well). Thank you for liking!
I'm dying here! You must update, or I shall promptly go insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it too much, Jade
Author's Response: I will update very soon but chapter 3 is annoying...there's a lot of stuff in it and I'm having trouble getting it through. I'll try my best to get it up before Mugglenet closes down for Christmas.
Love it love it love it. The arrogance of james and Sirius and the mischeivous side of Remus is done well. Update soon...? Just one thing... I get the feeling that L and J are drawing closer.. and they don't get together until 7th year... and isn't this story 5th year? That's all, but I'm sure more will become apprent to me the more I read, and that you hadnt overlooked that fact.
Author's Response: Yeah the whole not getting together until the 7th year still happens but a. I don't know how far I'm taking this fic and b. I didn't want it to be 'OMG JAMES HAS CHANGED! LET'S GET MARRIED AND HAVE HARRY!" So stuff lke that just doesn't happen - well I suppose it could actually because it's true love but yeah...
OMG! Why are there not more reviews on this story!? Coming from somebody who has read a shockingly large amount of LJ fics, this is great! It's really nice to have a break from starting the story off at the beginning of 7th year with them realising theyve become the heads, or meeting at the platform... finally something breaking free from the cliche! And this was funny and wait for it... really realistic! I think you have the characters perfectly. Lily does not fall for him straight away, and is actually the strong minded character she is portrayed as in the novels. And Sirius is spot on. I love him in your story... wait... I love the whole thing! I cannot tell you how happy I am to ahve found this. please, please, please update soon! Lana xxx
Author's Response: ALLELUIA! ALLELUIA! Well wow! Thank you very, very much for reviewing and for being so awesome! You have made me rather happy with your niceness and yeah just generally thank you for loving it! There's more coming as soon as HATTIE has gone through my chapter 3!
Ah yes - that SHOULD have been corrected. Lol. Good thing I'm here, huh? I want to read more of this fic!!
Author's Response: Well yes - and I yours...
Cool just one problem...James was not a seeker as it said in the movies; He was a chaser. :)
Author's Response: Where did I put Chaser?! It was picked up when it got betad...hmm I'll go change it now!
Author's Response: Aha! That was very clever of you - it was in chapter three that it got picked up not in chapter two! Thnak you for that - it has been changed :)
This is great! I'm already very interested! Congrats, Jade
Author's Response: Awesomeness