i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (0.0) :>)
it's funny i always played catch not catch up...
Anyway The plot is lovely!
Have a Hoppy Birthday! Love the chapter!!!!!!!!
Yay! I like it vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrry much. the plot is coming along hgreat but the flowancy could use some work
I really loved reading through this entire story. I could see your writing style evolve, and it's just gotten better!
Now I get why you set this fic in the end of their 5th year. It makes a lot of sense and I love the plot. :)
Please update soon !!
Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter. I haven't finished reading the whole fic yet, but I wanted to review and say that!
The water scene was a little bit hard to understand who was speaking, but I liked it anyway!
I really love the plot of this story and I think you're a great author. :)
I read the other version, and I must say that I like it a lot more. When I read this one first, the lines in the beginning seemed kind of out of place and I was wondering why you put that in. It makes sense now.
Anyway, I really like this fic, just a little confusing that this is all in 5th year. Oh well. I love Lily&James. :)
Update quickly! You said you had started writing chapter 21. Well, it's only chapter eleven, so update quickly!
This chapter was extremely funny too. Kinda like the end of your first chapter....update!
Omg im seriously crying. No joke. Keep up the good work
Oh my gosh! I love how you made Remus a big part of this story. You made it so he is involved even though he isn't James or Sirius. Love It!!!
I like how you made Mr. Potter's room so important to the girls. It gives the reaser the chance to see what is going on beyoned their knowledge.
I liked it soooo much. You did a great job with the garden thing and threw out the hole thing you made Sirius, James, and Remuses personalities perfect. Also you made Remus more involved unlike some stories you read where he's not really there. I like.
I loved it. Your work is acurate and your a great author.
Love it all! and what that person below me wrote is some what mean (but still partially true) and don't pay attention to the whole disappointed thing, many more fans aren't. well, the wait is, but not you!
it's okay to get mixed up with dates every once in a while, i get mixed up with it a lot! just refer back to the books when your stuck with something. well, can't wait for more!
Hearts, Noel Weasley (i heart the twins!)
I am disapionted in you. In your story says that voldemorts war is just starting wrong. In the first book its says that the war has been going for 11 years. Please reread the Harry Potter more carefully the next time you write a next Harry Potter fan fic thank you for your time
silleri
P.S try and make lily more bright and bubbly thank you
