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Name: Gothic Churro (Signed) · Date: 04/10/06 18:50 · For: one-shot
This rather is a summary, more than a real story. This could have spanned over MANY chapters, and really did not meet the criteria of a fanfic. Your choice of words are great, and the sentence structure is excellent. That was why I was expecting so much more from this as I read on. It is a one-shot, but really it should be a synopsis--to something bigger. It would be great, too, you know. There aren't many Lucius Sirius fics out there. (At least that I have seen, but I am new here) It could be original and unique. . . I say continue this on a larger scale. It was nice however. Nice simply.


Name: Midnight (Signed) · Date: 02/11/05 23:02 · For: one-shot
*cries* Oh that was beautiful, I really hope you write another fic along the same lines except that it has more detail in it. This really was written excellently, and it deserves a 10 rating :)


Name: keena (Signed) · Date: 11/27/04 16:23 · For: one-shot
Grrrrrrrrrrrr! This is one of those one-shots that is so good it needs more chapters and detail! Please . . . . ?! Pretty please . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ?! Pretty please with a cherry on top . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .?!


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