Author's Response: Thanks!
This story is sad but great although how you switch between first and third person is a bit confusing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I got a lot of flack from both sites it's posted on about switching...it made sense to me but I guess it's something to work on.
i lurved it!!!!!!!! i started bawling when i read this! you really capture the emotion Remus is feeling w/ this fic!!!! 10/10 :)
Author's Response: Thanks glad you enjoyed it!
ohh i loved it! it was so sad it brought a tear to my eye. the song goes well with the story. nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Look for more stories coming soon!
Awww so sad. but this is good. you should write more than a one-shot. Write a story! i bet it would be good. oh and cool penname!
Author's Response: Thanks! I now have another one shot posted and another one in queue. There is a James-Lily story that is much longer that I am writing, but I want it completely finished before I post so people don't have to wait forever for me to update. Lily is a tad bit wild out of school so people may or may not like it. But if you are over 17 and want to read it early, let me know I'll hook ya up with a sneak peek!