Fantastic, One bit little piece of my opinion though. I feel that in lots of R/Hr fics the characters say I Love You to soon, they probably wouldnt do that. But this fic is one of the best R/Hr One Shot fics I've read. Well Done. Give me help with one I want to write please, they never get put on
OMG!!!!! i loved loved loved it!!!!
lol!!!i loved it!! it was creative and funny!!
im not surprized its so popular
aaaaw this is great onto my faves beautiful
Very nice! Did you write it so that Hermione fell on purpose? Never mind. GREAT STORY!
i wish i was hermione, exept for the hanging of the cliff part. : )
This is so awesome!!!
Author's Response: thank you =]
boring, not realistic character reactions
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That was so sweet!
Funny how the whole weasley family walks in on it!
Author's Response: haha. yes, thanks you =]
yah its really cute....
Author's Response: thanks very much
As their lips made contact, they swore they saw Filibuster fireworks in their mind's eye. As the kiss progressed, Hermione threw her arms around Ron's neck. Ron took this as a signal to kiss her more passionately. Soon, as they became more comfortable, they were full out snogging. Ron wondered what someone would think if a person caught them, and then he became lost in Hermione.
Slowly, and very reluctanly, they pulled back, but only to breathe. Ron put his arm around Hermione as she leaned her head on Ron's shoulder.
They completely forgot that a rescue mission was on their way.
Mrs. Weasley seemed the most surprised by this. She reagained her composure and said, "Well, you two didn't really seem to fight. It was more like-"
"Flirting," Tonks grinned.
Ron's ears turned a deep shade maroon, while Hermione's face resembled a shiny, red apple.
"Uh... should we go back to the Burrow," Harry suggested. Having known his best friends since he was eleven, he knew that they didn't want to say anymore on the matter.
Everyone nodded, Ron and Hermione the most vigoriously.
They walked hand-in-hand back to the Burrow, completely obilvious to the fact that Fred and George teased them the whole way home.
That's what I was laughing at...yeah not as hard, so you won't get sued. But I think it's totally brilliant! Would you mind if I did something kindda like this in my version of the seventh book, that I posted on Mugglenetfanfiction???
Anyways....I really enjoy your stuff. I know I've said that like a million times, but it's dead honest! I LOVE it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: totally dont mind...you just gotta mention me! lol, jk, but seriously
when I read it [i was so out of it and half awake] so that's why I was laughing so hard. I'll go back and re-read it and then tell you it's sooooo not funny. Would that work? =0
Author's Response: as long as you dont die of laughter, i dont wanna get sued here
Don't worry, I won't! I'm still getting a kick out of it! :P
Author's Response: damn, i really didnt think this story was that funny
This fic is deffiently one of the cutest, funny, and cleaver fanfictions that I have ever read! Great job and I think I'm going to die from laughing! This and you are so on my favorites! =)
Author's Response: YAY!!!! but plz dont die you are my new bestest friend
Almsot exactly what I want to happen in book seven
Author's Response: lol, thankies
Author's Response: thaks cool name
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I loove all your stories! Probably because I love Ron/Hermione and don't really like Harry/Hermione (No disrespect to any H/Hr shippers who read this) as a couple at all. Anyways I love your fics (and disclaimers) and hope you write more soon!
Author's Response: when jo was asked what hermione would see in the mirror of erised, she said, "probably voldemort dead, and her and Ron living happily ever after. Proof.
i can't believe you hate hagrid! yes he loves a giant spider but he is still lovable and he douse take care the trio. he completly devoted to dumbledore and he take care of things most people would just kill. thats part of why i love him so much.
Author's Response: He talks funny, he's a sad drunk, and i really think he'll die