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Reviews For Christmas Break

Name: gane (Signed) · Date: 02/28/08 12:31 · For: One-Shot
what a male chuvinism accepting story! girls are damsels and men go out to fight!


Name: steviegrules (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 18:51 · For: One-Shot
that was....weird, i dont know if i missed the point to it or something?
but i suggest rereading it and editing it, there are lots of spelling mistakes, missed words and missing commas


Name: steviegrules (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 18:50 · For: One-Shot
that was....weird, i dont know if i missed the point to it or something?
but i suggest rereading it and editing it, there are lots of spelling mistakes, missed words and missing commas


Name: Germa (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 17:44 · For: One-Shot
Its good, but you could have expanded more on the conversaitions and stuff.


Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 21:27 · For: One-Shot
Okay, it seems kind of incomplete. Like, that seemed as if it should be one chapter of a story, not an entire one-shot. Hopefully the sequel will make that up.


Name: dramaqueen88 (Signed) · Date: 11/29/06 22:30 · For: One-Shot
It was good, but it would have been better if there was more to it, like more chapters. I didn't like how it just kind of ended. Please add me to it cause I like the story line and the direction that it's going in.


Name: Grangergirl111 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 15:28 · For: One-Shot
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT WAS EXTRONADRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: neopetsrule (Signed) · Date: 08/21/06 14:57 · For: One-Shot
It was kinda short I think that it should either have a seaquel or you should add to it.


Name: Ouch (Signed) · Date: 07/29/06 19:29 · For: One-Shot
That was quick.


Name: bookworm247 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/06/06 8:29 · For: One-Shot
dumm deee dumm... going to go check on your other stories! toodles!


Name: I so want 2 b magic (Signed) · Date: 05/17/06 14:57 · For: One-Shot
what an un eventful story! good plot line though, I would have like to see you carry it on.

Author's Response: It's carried on in "Hermione's Trials", which is posted on fan fiction. net


Name: ginny4ever (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 9:06 · For: One-Shot
Hope you write another chapter!!!


Name: RupertsPheonix (Signed) · Date: 11/13/05 19:15 · For: One-Shot
Cute. Can't wiat for the next one, you are writing a sequel, right? hopefully...=) very cute! i love it. keep going!!!

Author's Response: i have a sequel written, but mugglenetfanfiction won't accept it =(....so check it out on harrypotterfanfiction.com....same penname. ~Tina101


Name: clandestinelyours (Signed) · Date: 11/13/05 14:59 · For: One-Shot
I really like it. I agree with the others, you could go far with this one. Question, Is there more to the necklace than meets the eye? Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: No, the necklace is just a necklace....a gift. Hermione's Trials is a sequel to this one, so it does go farther.


Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 11/11/05 12:03 · For: One-Shot
Yeah, I agree. You really could go far with this one. I am glad there is going to be a sequel. I can't wait to read it! 10/10!


Name: lisa_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 11/04/05 14:42 · For: One-Shot
this is really gd! i know its a 1 shot but you could take this further! 10! lisa xxx

Author's Response: "Hermione's Trials" is the sequel to this one, trust me....it goes farther. I'm thinking of adding an epilogue to Hermione's Trials....my beta doesn't know that yet...lol


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