Reviews For Christmas Break
Reviewer: gane
Date: 02/28/08 12:31
Chapter: One-Shot

what a male chuvinism accepting story! girls are damsels and men go out to fight!

Reviewer: steviegrules
Date: 10/07/07 18:51
Chapter: One-Shot

that was....weird, i dont know if i missed the point to it or something?
but i suggest rereading it and editing it, there are lots of spelling mistakes, missed words and missing commas

Reviewer: steviegrules
Date: 10/07/07 18:50
Chapter: One-Shot

that was....weird, i dont know if i missed the point to it or something?
but i suggest rereading it and editing it, there are lots of spelling mistakes, missed words and missing commas

Reviewer: Germa
Date: 08/03/07 17:44
Chapter: One-Shot

Its good, but you could have expanded more on the conversaitions and stuff.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/18/06 21:27
Chapter: One-Shot

Okay, it seems kind of incomplete. Like, that seemed as if it should be one chapter of a story, not an entire one-shot. Hopefully the sequel will make that up.

Reviewer: dramaqueen88
Date: 11/29/06 22:30
Chapter: One-Shot

It was good, but it would have been better if there was more to it, like more chapters. I didn't like how it just kind of ended. Please add me to it cause I like the story line and the direction that it's going in.

Reviewer: Grangergirl111
Date: 10/29/06 15:28
Chapter: One-Shot

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT WAS EXTRONADRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: neopetsrule
Date: 08/21/06 14:57
Chapter: One-Shot

It was kinda short I think that it should either have a seaquel or you should add to it.

Reviewer: Ouch
Date: 07/29/06 19:29
Chapter: One-Shot

That was quick.

Reviewer: bookworm247
Date: 07/06/06 8:29
Chapter: One-Shot

dumm deee dumm... going to go check on your other stories! toodles!

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 05/17/06 14:57
Chapter: One-Shot

what an un eventful story! good plot line though, I would have like to see you carry it on.

Author's Response: It's carried on in "Hermione's Trials", which is posted on fan fiction. net

Reviewer: ginny4ever
Date: 12/14/05 9:06
Chapter: One-Shot

Hope you write another chapter!!!

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 11/13/05 19:15
Chapter: One-Shot

Cute. Can't wiat for the next one, you are writing a sequel, right? hopefully...=) very cute! i love it. keep going!!!

Author's Response: i have a sequel written, but mugglenetfanfiction won't accept it =( check it out on penname. ~Tina101

Reviewer: clandestinelyours
Date: 11/13/05 14:59
Chapter: One-Shot

I really like it. I agree with the others, you could go far with this one. Question, Is there more to the necklace than meets the eye? Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: No, the necklace is just a necklace....a gift. Hermione's Trials is a sequel to this one, so it does go farther.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 11/11/05 12:03
Chapter: One-Shot

Yeah, I agree. You really could go far with this one. I am glad there is going to be a sequel. I can't wait to read it! 10/10!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 11/04/05 14:42
Chapter: One-Shot

this is really gd! i know its a 1 shot but you could take this further! 10! lisa xxx

Author's Response: "Hermione's Trials" is the sequel to this one, trust goes farther. I'm thinking of adding an epilogue to Hermione's beta doesn't know that

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