Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: arvenig
Date: 05/28/07 15:53
Chapter: The First of September

Aaaaaarghhhhhh! I really hate reading unfinished stories but I just couldn't help myself. The moment I read the first paragraph, I was hooked!!! Please, please, pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee, update soon, add like 100 chapters more...:-)

Author's Response: maybe not 100 chapters, but it's going a bit more...

Reviewer: glamorgrl111
Date: 05/28/07 12:31
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

ahhhh dun dun dun

Author's Response: haha!

Reviewer: all_that_jas
Date: 05/28/07 6:54
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Wow..that was good!!!
I found ur ff and read it straight through well done!!!
It was sooooooo good, thankyou for writing that...just one problem....
wats going to happen next????!!!!!
Cant wait!!!
Keep on writing!!!

Author's Response: thanks... the next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: all_that_jas
Date: 05/28/07 3:46
Chapter: A New Beginning

Oh wow this is good!!!
Im adding it to my favourites

Author's Response: thanks, keep reading!

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 05/28/07 2:25
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Great story...... I read the whole thing tonight. Cant wait for more updates.... Just an idea for you when or if you revise your story - add a chapter about the Marauders creating the "Marauders Map". I think that is the only thing missing from your awsome story.... Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah I had wanted to include that originally, but there's just so much to write about that it becomes overwhelming. Good suggestion though.

Reviewer: Prongs56
Date: 05/27/07 18:50
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

your story was good but what happen to snape he was kinda important in James's school life. Update Soon!

Author's Response: I dedicated an entire chapter to the incident where James saved Snape's life... as for the rest of the story, I kinda just left it to the imagination. There's so much to write about and so little time to fit it into the story. It is clear though that James has a big hatred for all Slytherins, whether it be through Quidditch or dealing with Sirius's family.

Reviewer: 110293
Date: 05/27/07 18:03
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Coooool, love the story line

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 05/27/07 14:26
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Aww it's almost the end of the school year thats so sad I thought James and Lily would get together toward the beginning/middle not the end of the year thats so sad

Author's Response: haha, yeah well it's more of a story this way.

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/27/07 13:09
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

o god bellatrix!!! i wonder what sirius will do when he finds out.

please please please please please please please please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: the next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: FredsFriend
Date: 05/27/07 10:01
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

OMG!!!!!!! that was soooo freaky!!! just when they are about to make up, something bad happens!!!!!

Author's Response: I know, scandalous!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/27/07 8:11
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Great chapter!
I don't like this cliffy!
Plz cont soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next and what is bellatrix planning!!
Cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: you'll find out soon!

Reviewer: WeasleyChick32
Date: 05/26/07 20:33
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

ARG!! you can't end there!!!!!! Just like that?!?!?!?! EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I can, and I did. Sorry, but cliffies are just so good!!

Reviewer: Cedrics love
Date: 05/26/07 17:24
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

omg whats going to happen?? update soon. it was really good btw

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 05/26/07 17:22
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

I hate when people do that, i mean leaving us in such a moment. You're evil, you know :) can't wait to se next chapter :)

Author's Response: I know I'm evil- thanks! ;)

Reviewer: ArdentIcarus
Date: 05/25/07 2:19
Chapter: The Aftermath

This is ridiculous, hasn't it been a week or more since you posted that chapter? Do they always take that long? I'm new so I haven't had to wait for one before, but more than a week??
End rant lol

Author's Response: It has been a week I think! I've only had this problem a couple of times, and I've had to re-submit the chapter... I'll give them a few more days and then I'll try again.

Reviewer: ArdentIcarus
Date: 05/21/07 23:50
Chapter: The Aftermath

they're taking forEVER to approve your next chapter! darn moderators...

Author's Response: I KNOW! It's been like 4 days! Sorry about that, I'll keep my fingers crossed...

Reviewer: ProufGryffindork
Date: 05/21/07 18:01
Chapter: The Aftermath

I clicked the next button and cried! The story is so fantastic!

Author's Response: haha!! Dry your eyes, the next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/17/07 23:06
Chapter: The Aftermath

Oh, dear... The poor guy! Lily was such a jerk!!! Ugh, sometimes she pisses me off! Update sooon!!!!! *Stares at screen... Nothing happens, so starts to freak out* AHHHHHH!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chappie's in the queue, so don't freak ;)

Reviewer: ginny_w_rox
Date: 05/17/07 14:23
Chapter: The Aftermath

please be quick writing the next one! i no that seems harsh because uv only just posted this one but i love it so much!!!

Author's Response: It's not harsh, this one is super short.. but it's coming very very soon, I promise.

Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 05/17/07 11:09
Chapter: The Aftermath

great chapter!
i hope things will brighten up in the next chapter!!
update soon

Author's Response: maybe they will, maybe they won't... ;)

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