Aaaaaarghhhhhh! I really hate reading unfinished stories but I just couldn't help myself. The moment I read the first paragraph, I was hooked!!! Please, please, pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee, update soon, add like 100 chapters more...:-)
Author's Response: maybe not 100 chapters, but it's going a bit more...
ahhhh dun dun dun
Author's Response: haha!
Wow..that was good!!!
I found ur ff and read it straight through well done!!!
It was sooooooo good, thankyou for writing that...just one problem....
wats going to happen next????!!!!!
Keep on writing!!!
Author's Response: thanks... the next chapter is in the queue!
Oh wow this is good!!!
Im adding it to my favourites
Author's Response: thanks, keep reading!
Great story...... I read the whole thing tonight. Cant wait for more updates.... Just an idea for you when or if you revise your story - add a chapter about the Marauders creating the "Marauders Map". I think that is the only thing missing from your awsome story.... Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah I had wanted to include that originally, but there's just so much to write about that it becomes overwhelming. Good suggestion though.
your story was good but what happen to snape he was kinda important in James's school life. Update Soon!
Author's Response: I dedicated an entire chapter to the incident where James saved Snape's life... as for the rest of the story, I kinda just left it to the imagination. There's so much to write about and so little time to fit it into the story. It is clear though that James has a big hatred for all Slytherins, whether it be through Quidditch or dealing with Sirius's family.
Coooool, love the story line
Author's Response: thanks!
Aww it's almost the end of the school year thats so sad I thought James and Lily would get together toward the beginning/middle not the end of the year thats so sad
Author's Response: haha, yeah well it's more of a story this way.
o god bellatrix!!! i wonder what sirius will do when he finds out.
please please please please please please please please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: the next chapter is in the queue!
OMG!!!!!!! that was soooo freaky!!! just when they are about to make up, something bad happens!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, scandalous!
I don't like this cliffy!
Plz cont soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next and what is bellatrix planning!!
Author's Response: you'll find out soon!
ARG!! you can't end there!!!!!! Just like that?!?!?!?! EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I can, and I did. Sorry, but cliffies are just so good!!
omg whats going to happen?? update soon. it was really good btw
Author's Response: thank you!
I hate when people do that, i mean leaving us in such a moment. You're evil, you know :) can't wait to se next chapter :)
Author's Response: I know I'm evil- thanks! ;)
This is ridiculous, hasn't it been a week or more since you posted that chapter? Do they always take that long? I'm new so I haven't had to wait for one before, but more than a week??
End rant lol
Author's Response: It has been a week I think! I've only had this problem a couple of times, and I've had to re-submit the chapter... I'll give them a few more days and then I'll try again.
they're taking forEVER to approve your next chapter! darn moderators...
Author's Response: I KNOW! It's been like 4 days! Sorry about that, I'll keep my fingers crossed...
I clicked the next button and cried! The story is so fantastic!
Author's Response: haha!! Dry your eyes, the next chapter is in the queue!
Oh, dear... The poor guy! Lily was such a jerk!!! Ugh, sometimes she pisses me off! Update sooon!!!!! *Stares at screen... Nothing happens, so starts to freak out* AHHHHHH!!!!!
Author's Response: The next chappie's in the queue, so don't freak ;)
please be quick writing the next one! i no that seems harsh because uv only just posted this one but i love it so much!!!
Author's Response: It's not harsh, this one is super short.. but it's coming very very soon, I promise.
i hope things will brighten up in the next chapter!!
Author's Response: maybe they will, maybe they won't... ;)