Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: sorial
Date: 09/08/07 11:26
Chapter: Black

Black! hmmm.... as in bellatrix or the end of the chapter or mabey it was both eiter way that was some chapter

Author's Response: haha yeah it works both ways... I thought that was pretty clever of me...

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 09/07/07 12:26
Chapter: Black

HahaHA! I loooove Bellatrix. Good luck with college!

Author's Response: ugh I looooove Bellatrix too, she is just so fabulously evil.

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/06/07 19:13
Chapter: Black

AHHHHH! This is so umbelievably good! I absolutely love it! It's so hooking and I love how you still haven't made Lily totally fall for James. Some people do that a load too soon and it really takes a lot out of the story. Well, great job! I love it so much!!! Update as soon as possible!!!

Author's Response: thanks a lot!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/06/07 19:05
Chapter: Black

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol good chapter!! good luck at college!!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 09/06/07 18:59
Chapter: Black


Author's Response: GOOD haha!

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/06/07 18:31
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

This whole story has been great so far! My only concern is that James isn't a seeker in the books, he's a chaser, they messed it up in the movies. Just so you know...

Author's Response: yeah, I know. I just prefer him as a seeker, and it's my fan fic, so I can do that haha.

Reviewer: ohTEE
Date: 09/06/07 18:29
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

When I read the last sentence, I immediately went, 'Aww.'
I have two fiction crushes (aha, don't laugh at me. :P) James Potter and Draco Malfoy (I mean.. he's a cool dude.)
anyways, great story!

Author's Response: don't be ashamed- James Potter is like the perfect boy, haha

Reviewer: FredsFriend
Date: 09/06/07 16:07
Chapter: Black

OMG!!!!!! I love this story!!!! please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks, I'll try to get to work on it soon but college is CRAZY with the hw...

Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 09/06/07 15:32
Chapter: Black

horrible cliff hanger! have just read this great story in one night- keep it up!

Author's Response: haha thanks!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 09/06/07 14:18
Chapter: Black

you are my hero.

Author's Response: thanks! ;)

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 08/27/07 2:03
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Hey, Ive read your first sixteen chapters in one go, and they were all fantastic! Pity Ive come across with the biggest cliffhanger so far. lol I really like the way your characters turned out to be! Not like those sappy stuff, haha. Hope you update soon! This is now going to faves! ;-)

Author's Response: yayyy thank you!!

Reviewer: Ophelia Girl
Date: 08/20/07 11:52
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

update update!!!! pwetty pweese?

Reviewer: ddic8mealuvsnghpboys
Date: 07/09/07 14:21
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

plz update!!!!!!! ive been waiting 4 ever!!!!!!! the suspense is killing me!!!

Author's Response: I did, like a week and half ago... they haven't approved it yet! ughh this is so frustrating!!!

Author's Response: I did, like a week and half ago... they haven't approved it yet! ughh this is so frustrating!!!

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/16/07 15:19
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

It's a good story! Very well written. You're fanfic is very good. one tiny problem, PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: sorry to have kept you guys waiting so long... it's coming!

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 06/09/07 18:21
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

ooooo good chapter update quickly again!

Author's Response: thanks, like i said, it's in the queue!

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 05/31/07 15:29
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Ommgg!!!!!!!! Wooww!!! Update soon!!! The suspense is going to kill me! Im nt going to be able to sleep!!

Author's Response: it's in the queue, don't worry!

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 05/31/07 15:16
Chapter: James's Confession

Awwww Omgg Stuppid Lilyy!! Dnt Worry James..Ill Hav Youu Haha...Im Glad James Walked Off..She Deserved It! FANTASTIC CHAPTER! And the whole story so far..Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you really liked it!

Reviewer: ProufGryffindork
Date: 05/30/07 16:24
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Holy cow... UPDATE!

Author's Response: haha i did!

Reviewer: poshini
Date: 05/30/07 5:49
Chapter: A Peculiar Patrol

Cool!!!!!! Death eater activity so soon in the story!!!

Author's Response: Yeah I like to keep it interesting...

Reviewer: arvenig
Date: 05/28/07 15:54
Chapter: The First of September

Aaaaaarghhhhhh! I really hate reading unfinished stories but I just couldn't help myself. The moment I read the first paragraph, I was hooked!!! Please, please, pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeee, update soon, add like 100 chapters more...:-)

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