This is so great! All the Marauders are so wonderfully portrayed, especially James and Sirius. I want to read more about Lily, she's really cool as well. I'm waiting for Chapter 6 on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thank you, Chapter 6 is up!
I'm really loving this story so far! It's interesting to see how Peter is being overshadowed by his friends... and I'm really, really glad that you're not leaving him out of your story. So many authors do that, but you incorporated him, and that's awesome. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: That's probably my biggest pet peeve about fan fics, is when they totally forget that Peter is a marauder! He's such an important character, I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job with him!
lol! that was so funny and i loved how u put ur input with snape prank it was amazing. and the crying scence for the chapter b4 was absolutley amazing how u put she was a strong girl and that she rarely cried and u showed her weekness her love for her family explaining why she saved harry and felt like crying when petunia almost hated her.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like that part a lot too.
i like this whole fan fic. the whole idea of them, and the way you ended with the whole 24hr thing was a really good way to end XD
lol...keep going. i like it a lot ! =]
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
WOW! This is amazing for your first fanfiction. I hope you right more. These six chapters were great, and I loved how you worte things from different character's points of views.
Author's Response: Thanks... I thought it would be more interesting to write from both Lily's and James's points of view.
you did a remarkable job on this chapter and it wraveled out splendidly
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
k, the next chapter isn't worknig- but more soon, this story is great. i love how you use unique ideas-it's like no other.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, considering there are like 5 billion Lily/James fics on this site! And the next chapter isn't working because it hasn't been approved yet... I submitted it 2 days ago so it should be up soon if there aren't any problems.
Awww, James's note arrived at just the right time.
Author's Response: he's fabulous, that James Potter!
It's ah-mazingly great!! MORE SOON OR ELSE!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And threats are definitely an effective way of getting me to post more often ;)
awwwwwwwww
Author's Response: hehe, I know it so was one of those "awww" type of chapters... you've got to have at least a couple of those.
I must say a very nice job! You were awesome. Plz update soon. Can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 5 is in the queue!
I liked the chapter alot, it was very amusing. PLease updaet soon.
Author's Response: thanks, next one's in the queue!
Good chappie! I only have one criticism: The Marauders didn't know what their animagi forms would be, so they couldn't know their nicknames yet. Other than that, I really enjoyed the chapter, especially the Slytherin duel...Brill(iant)!
Good chappie! I only have one criticism: The Marauders didn't know what their animagi forms would be, so they couldn't know their nicknames yet. Other than that, I really enjoyed the chapter, especially the Slytherin duel...Brill(iant)!
Author's Response: Whoops... yeah, I'm not exactly a pro on the whole animagus thing, so I just sort of winged it. Next time I'll double check!
enchanting and humorous:)
Author's Response: muchas gracias ;)
Love this story! You are a natural writer! I also love how you wrote about Lily and James. She'll get to him.
Author's Response: yeah she will! ;)
I love this story! It's one of the best ones I've read. (and I've read a lot of fan-ficts here.) Awsome job. You are a natual writer!
I love this story! It's one of the best ones I've read. (and I've read a lot of fan-ficts here.) Awsome job. You are a natual writer!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I want to be a writer "when I grow up", hehe.
Tis was so good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to see you're still reading!
"The amazingly talented James Potter" hehehehehe, that made me laugh alot. I liked the skipping a few years; that made it better, not so long. Good good. I'm going to add this to my favourites, I like this story alot. Good job! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, this is one of my favorite reviews I've ever gotten, haha! (sorry, I love my reviews!) I'm in your favorites!! YAY!!
