Poor James! Lily doesn't know how much she's an influence! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: She doesn't know... but she's going to find out soon!
asome man that was really cool and i am going to rad more so i don't know but i thik that that means you sohould write more!
Author's Response: Don't worry, that's the plan!
awsome! James and Lily are my fav!
Author's Response: Mine too! ;)
HA! This is very funny. He won the match and all Lily cared about was "a stupid rib." Evan if you didn't try to make it funny, IT WAS! Congrats and great job.
Author's Response: Thanks! Leave it to James to think of someone's injury as just "a stupid rib"; I really liked that line too!
Cute! I actually had to read the story again because I forgot it but once I got to chapter 3 I remembered how great this story. I love that she got a boyfriend. I love stories that do that!
Author's Response: Yeah, Lily definitely needed a boyfriend. Thanks for reviewing!
That was great, I really liked that! well done, I can't wait for the next chapter! 100000/10, I like the character development you're doing.
Author's Response: I'll use this post to respond to all: Can I just say, I think it's AMAZING that you reviewed every chapter, thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it that much!
That was fantastic! Each chapter you have gotten better and better, it's great, well done! loved it! 10/10
Oh, so cute!!! I liked the chapter the most so far, well done. 10/10
Oh, Poor Peter, but still... anyway, I love the fight, it was really good, same as Lily's thoughts. well done 10/10
Ooooooooooh, rivilary! Very good, I'm liking it more and more each time, well done. 10/10
Very good, I like the introductions of the characters and the marauder's idea for their group name. well done 10/10
Very nice, I know I am going to enjoy this one. Well done, 10/10
OMG! YAY! This is great. I'm a first time reviewer for you, and I really like how you did it. It was awesomely... awesome. At first I thought she was going to meet James... and then you said blonde hair. Very sly! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I love new reviewers! And yes, I am pretty sly, what can I say ;)
Awesome! I love your story as much as I love James. So please please please update soon!
Author's Response: why, that's quite a compliment, thank you!
glad you updated. i liked this chapter especially james' reaction. keep updating!
Author's Response: Yes, James gets pretty jealous. Especially since Aaron is a Quidditch rival (more of that next chapter...)
oooo. I can't wait for more. (poor James)
Author's Response: I know, poor James! But we all know he gets his happy ending, so let's not feel too bad.
great! Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks a lot!
Don't worry, you did do this justice. The story is so well written. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thank you!
don't worry, i think you definitely did the story justice...this is a great story, update soon!
Author's Response: phew, thanks!
I love it- more soon please- i love your unique ideas!
Author's Response: Thank you ;)
