Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: Dragon_Spirit
Date: 09/23/06 13:50
Chapter: Four Years Later

awsome! James and Lily are my fav!

Author's Response: Mine too! ;)

Reviewer: anvil sized hint
Date: 09/23/06 12:36
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

HA! This is very funny. He won the match and all Lily cared about was "a stupid rib." Evan if you didn't try to make it funny, IT WAS! Congrats and great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! Leave it to James to think of someone's injury as just "a stupid rib"; I really liked that line too!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 09/14/06 18:28
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

Cute! I actually had to read the story again because I forgot it but once I got to chapter 3 I remembered how great this story. I love that she got a boyfriend. I love stories that do that!

Author's Response: Yeah, Lily definitely needed a boyfriend. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 1:18
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

That was great, I really liked that! well done, I can't wait for the next chapter! 100000/10, I like the character development you're doing.

Author's Response: I'll use this post to respond to all: Can I just say, I think it's AMAZING that you reviewed every chapter, thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it that much!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 1:04
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

That was fantastic! Each chapter you have gotten better and better, it's great, well done! loved it! 10/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 0:44
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

Oh, so cute!!! I liked the chapter the most so far, well done. 10/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 0:36
Chapter: Quaffles and Quarrels

Oh, Poor Peter, but still... anyway, I love the fight, it was really good, same as Lily's thoughts. well done 10/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 0:28
Chapter: Four Years Later

Ooooooooooh, rivilary! Very good, I'm liking it more and more each time, well done. 10/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 0:21
Chapter: A New Beginning

Very good, I like the introductions of the characters and the marauder's idea for their group name. well done 10/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/14/06 0:13
Chapter: The First of September

Very nice, I know I am going to enjoy this one. Well done, 10/10

Reviewer: anvil sized hint
Date: 09/12/06 16:00
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

OMG! YAY! This is great. I'm a first time reviewer for you, and I really like how you did it. It was awesomely... awesome. At first I thought she was going to meet James... and then you said blonde hair. Very sly! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I love new reviewers! And yes, I am pretty sly, what can I say ;)

Reviewer: james_fever
Date: 09/11/06 6:57
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

Awesome! I love your story as much as I love James. So please please please update soon!

Author's Response: why, that's quite a compliment, thank you!

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 09/10/06 15:38
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

glad you updated. i liked this chapter especially james' reaction. keep updating!

Author's Response: Yes, James gets pretty jealous. Especially since Aaron is a Quidditch rival (more of that next chapter...)

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 09/10/06 13:33
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

oooo. I can't wait for more. (poor James)

Author's Response: I know, poor James! But we all know he gets his happy ending, so let's not feel too bad.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 09/10/06 10:33
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

great! Update soon!

Author's Response: thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Evans and Potter
Date: 08/03/06 15:46
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

Don't worry, you did do this justice. The story is so well written. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 07/03/06 10:31
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

don't worry, i think you definitely did the story justice...this is a great story, update soon!

Author's Response: phew, thanks!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 06/27/06 20:08
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

I love it- more soon please- i love your unique ideas!

Author's Response: Thank you ;)

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 06/27/06 12:41
Chapter: The First of September

This is so great! All the Marauders are so wonderfully portrayed, especially James and Sirius. I want to read more about Lily, she's really cool as well. I'm waiting for Chapter 6 on the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: Thank you, Chapter 6 is up!

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 06/27/06 10:22
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

I'm really loving this story so far! It's interesting to see how Peter is being overshadowed by his friends... and I'm really, really glad that you're not leaving him out of your story. So many authors do that, but you incorporated him, and that's awesome. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: That's probably my biggest pet peeve about fan fics, is when they totally forget that Peter is a marauder! He's such an important character, I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job with him!

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