Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/29/06 13:38
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

Sweet. James really is sweet.

Author's Response: yeah he is!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/29/06 13:33
Chapter: Quaffles and Quarrels

Curiouser and curiouser.....

Author's Response: keep reading...

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/29/06 13:28
Chapter: Four Years Later

I like it, James being his cocky self & Lily turning up her nose.

Author's Response: Yeah, I love that about them!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/28/06 5:49
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

oh, poor James! Well done, great chapter, but just to let you know, James was actually a chaser, it's on Anyway, well done, I liked it none-the-less. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks- I know about the chaser thing, but I decided to go a little OOC! I'm pretty rebellious, you know ;)

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 09/26/06 17:50
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

Good! That was an exciting chapter!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 16:04
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

I was just reading the reviews and I agree. I hate Aron Anderson. (I don't care if I spelled his name wrong.Gits don't deserve their names to be spelled right)

Author's Response: Haha, Aaron is a pretty interesting character....

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 16:00
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

Great chapter...... only James is a chaser, not a seeker. Adding you and your story to favs.

Author's Response: aah, I love being on favs, thanks a lot!! And yeah, I had heard that James was a chaser, but I made him a seeker anyway. That's all a little confusing- he's a seeker in the movies and JKR never really clarified it in any books... anyway, I just see him as a seeker. A little bit of OOC I guess.

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 15:53
Chapter: A New Love for Lily

You are an awsome writer. Normally I don't like to read about Lily going out with anyone but James but I really want to see what happens at the game.Whoa thats a run on sentence. My grammar teacher, Mrs. Long, would kill me. =)

Author's Response: It's ok, I almost failed my 9th grade grammar test!

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 15:45
Chapter: Danger at Dusk

That one was good. I hve never read a fanfic with that in it and I like the idea.

Author's Response: thanks! Prisoner of Azkaban is my favorite book and that little sub-plot has always interested me. I was excited to write about it.

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 15:37
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

Loved it! =)

Author's Response: thanks (again!)

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 15:24
Chapter: Quaffles and Quarrels

What Sirius said at the end of this chappie was funny. Another great one =)

Author's Response: ha I like that quote too.

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 14:57
Chapter: Four Years Later

That was a good chapter. I like the flyer for quidditch tryouts.=)

Author's Response: haha me too, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 14:45
Chapter: A New Beginning

great chapter=)

Author's Response: thank you very much!

Reviewer: flowerfairie64
Date: 09/24/06 14:29
Chapter: The First of September

Dang this chappies name reminds me of a song. Anyways great story=)

Author's Response: Thanks- what song??

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 09/24/06 11:47
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

You are a wonderful writer, I really like this story so far. I feel really bad for poor James though! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Mischief_managed01
Date: 09/23/06 20:44
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

so cute i luv it
but its a little rollercoasty (is that even a word/)


Author's Response: Thanks, I love it when it gets rollercoasty!

Reviewer: Lizeypoo
Date: 09/23/06 20:09
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

I hate Aaron Anderson :' (
love your story! update soon!

Author's Response: If you think you hate him now...

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 09/23/06 18:40
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

This So Good :D
Cant Wait For More

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: hopelives4ever
Date: 09/23/06 17:49
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

Poor James! Lily doesn't know how much she's an influence! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: She doesn't know... but she's going to find out soon!

Reviewer: Dragon_Spirit
Date: 09/23/06 14:01
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

asome man that was really cool and i am going to rad more so i don't know but i thik that that means you sohould write more!

Author's Response: Don't worry, that's the plan!

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