Sweet. James really is sweet.
Author's Response: yeah he is!
Curiouser and curiouser.....
Author's Response: keep reading...
I like it, James being his cocky self & Lily turning up her nose.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love that about them!
oh, poor James! Well done, great chapter, but just to let you know, James was actually a chaser, it's on hp-lexion.org. Anyway, well done, I liked it none-the-less. 10/10
Author's Response: thanks- I know about the chaser thing, but I decided to go a little OOC! I'm pretty rebellious, you know ;)
Good! That was an exciting chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!
I was just reading the reviews and I agree. I hate Aron Anderson. (I don't care if I spelled his name wrong.Gits don't deserve their names to be spelled right)
Author's Response: Haha, Aaron is a pretty interesting character....
Great chapter...... only James is a chaser, not a seeker. Adding you and your story to favs.
Author's Response: aah, I love being on favs, thanks a lot!! And yeah, I had heard that James was a chaser, but I made him a seeker anyway. That's all a little confusing- he's a seeker in the movies and JKR never really clarified it in any books... anyway, I just see him as a seeker. A little bit of OOC I guess.
You are an awsome writer. Normally I don't like to read about Lily going out with anyone but James but I really want to see what happens at the game.Whoa thats a run on sentence. My grammar teacher, Mrs. Long, would kill me. =)
Author's Response: It's ok, I almost failed my 9th grade grammar test!
That one was good. I hve never read a fanfic with that in it and I like the idea.
Author's Response: thanks! Prisoner of Azkaban is my favorite book and that little sub-plot has always interested me. I was excited to write about it.
Loved it! =)
Author's Response: thanks (again!)
What Sirius said at the end of this chappie was funny. Another great one =)
Author's Response: ha I like that quote too.
That was a good chapter. I like the flyer for quidditch tryouts.=)
Author's Response: haha me too, thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: thank you very much!
Dang this chappies name reminds me of a song. Anyways great story=)
Author's Response: Thanks- what song??
You are a wonderful writer, I really like this story so far. I feel really bad for poor James though! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
so cute i luv it
but its a little rollercoasty (is that even a word/)
Author's Response: Thanks, I love it when it gets rollercoasty!
I hate Aaron Anderson :' (
love your story! update soon!
Author's Response: If you think you hate him now...
This So Good :D
Cant Wait For More
Author's Response: Thank you!
Poor James! Lily doesn't know how much she's an influence! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: She doesn't know... but she's going to find out soon!
asome man that was really cool and i am going to rad more so i don't know but i thik that that means you sohould write more!
Author's Response: Don't worry, that's the plan!