Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: hermioneg415190
Date: 12/17/07 9:02
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

please write a second installment this one was awesome

Reviewer: colour_queen
Date: 12/16/07 17:32
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

The best story I've read! It's so great!

Reviewer: colour_queen
Date: 12/16/07 14:58
Chapter: The First of September

So cute! I love it!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 12/14/07 23:54
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

Lovely. =)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/14/07 15:29
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

awwwwwwwwwww that was so cute and sweet. loved it a perfect way to end it!!! but it was a teensy bit shrt. loved it :)

Reviewer: I_love_prongs
Date: 12/14/07 1:33
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

awww!!! so cute :)

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 12/13/07 23:34
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

excruciatingly SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but a nice chapter

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 12/13/07 22:33
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

ahh what a way to end
it was amazing ... good luck with everything hopefully you can write the sequal in the futre!

Reviewer: FredsFriend
Date: 12/13/07 18:38
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

Wow!!!!!!!!!! great chapter!!!!! I'm really sad ur ending this story early, but after the 7th book came out, i've found it hard to write much, so i understand. i hope u put up the second installment soon!!!!!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/13/07 16:36
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

*sniff* good chapter- or should i stay story? i'm disappointed that you're ending this story, but i hope that you'll start your second installment soon!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 12/13/07 14:47
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter


Cant say anything other than that now can I?


Reviewer: loveme
Date: 10/21/07 17:16
Chapter: Black

I love it:) please update more!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/22/07 18:20
Chapter: Black

brilliant story, just SPECTACULAR!!

i cant wait for more! oh my gosh! hehe im like bouncing of the walls here! haha please update soon! you got some serious talent here! I CANT WAIT!


Reviewer: Dan Fan
Date: 09/20/07 15:52
Chapter: Black

Hey, it was great. Please post the next chapter. I am waiting as i read very rarely. This was a nice chapter but dont u think that u made lily a coward. Make it like lily is a great fighter. It was like she is a muggle and james only knows how to fight. U can make lucius also come and he duels with james and bellatrix duels with lily atlest it wouldn't show that lily evans is a coward.

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 09/19/07 19:52
Chapter: A New Beginning

Great start! So many Marauder-era fics are cliche and boring, particularly at the beginning. Good to find one that's not!

Reviewer: unique_normality
Date: 09/19/07 17:43
Chapter: Black

Dude, cliffhanger: those aren't cool

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/10/07 3:03
Chapter: Black

Omgosh this is so good! I bet now James is going to wake up in the hospital wing and Lily is going to be fawning all over him right??? Hope you update soon and good luck in college!

Reviewer: FlyingPheonix
Date: 09/09/07 19:21
Chapter: Black


Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 09/09/07 9:00
Chapter: Black

the chapter is too short! please update b/c it was really good and i wanna know what happens to james!

Reviewer: dobbyforever
Date: 09/08/07 18:28
Chapter: Black

i just read the whole thing
its so good!!
your characters are portrayed really well.
can't wait for the next one!

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