Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 03/25/07 17:30
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

aww. update soon, mm'kay? Luved it to bits! I thought it was really sweet of James to do all that stuff for her, and the speech was... undescribable. That was kinda mean of Lily to just...well... leave him there after all that! Humph. she makes me mad sometimes.

Author's Response: haha. We all know who she picks in the end though, so I guess it's ok...

Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 03/23/07 10:55
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

wow!! great chapter... i hate aron for spoiling their moment
update soon

Author's Response: me too...

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/23/07 9:31
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

This was soooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!! Squeeee! Okay, I think I'm done hyperventilating now. :) I was cheering for James the whole way.... I kinda feel sorry for Aaron, but he should a better boyfriend. I'm glad Lily is finally admitting to herself that she likes James... I can't wait for an update! *gets down on hands and knees* Pleeeeease update soon!

Author's Response: Aaron is a horrible boyfriend!!! Haha.

Reviewer: my name is naima
Date: 03/23/07 7:55
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: haha thank you!

Reviewer: alex_the_man704
Date: 03/23/07 6:48
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

great post!
i love this story!
write as soon as u can

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 03/22/07 20:29
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

Ugh when are aaron and lily going to break up anyways great chapter

Author's Response: You'll see!

Reviewer: Lilyputton
Date: 03/22/07 19:43
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

I love this story!!!!! :D
Keep up the good work!
It is one of the best Lily/James fics I have read, and I have read too many to count!

Author's Response: That's quite a compliment, thanks!

Reviewer: farmergirl
Date: 03/22/07 16:32
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

that chapter was brilliant! loved it sooo much!you write amazingly. keep it up and please write more :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: binteridhwan
Date: 03/22/07 13:41
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

omg!!! i so love this fic!!! its like the best james/lily one ive ever read and thts saying something as ive read thousands!!! u go girl!!! (wait u r a girl arent u ??) :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!... and yes I'm a girl.

Reviewer: Pick Up A Potter
Date: 03/22/07 10:01
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

This is a really good story you sould be proud of yourself

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!

Reviewer: Part Veela
Date: 03/22/07 4:55
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

omg this is like my favourite ever fanfic and i have read millions!!! It's so cute and u got the personalities of the characters exactly as i imagined them to be!
Keep writing coz i cant wait to read more i think i might go insane waiting hahaha!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

Reviewer: moonys_mate_356
Date: 03/21/07 23:40
Chapter: An Unhappy Christmas

Oh my, the ending of that chappie was just too cute!

Author's Response: I love that ending too! ;)

Reviewer: moonys_mate_356
Date: 03/21/07 23:32
Chapter: Quaffles and Quarrels

Ooh...I'm happy that you were able to incorporate Malfoy and his lot into the story...I also loved the way the emotional conflict within Peter was staged! You seem to see in many stories that he was a good person when he was a student at Hogwarts, but then he randomly chose to be a Death Eater, on the other hand, presented him with the offer of having the "Slytherin" kind of power early on...thank you!
Also, for future reference, Sirius's eye color is grey...that's usually a Black family trait to have dark hair and light eyes, so I think Bellatrix shares the same quality...(just saying, though) ^^

Author's Response: I don't focus on Peter in this story, but I think it's really important in J/L fics to show how he was insecure and how it might have been possible for him later on to cross over to the wrong side. Thank you for noticing!! As for the eyes.. I think I remember reading Bellatrix's eyes were dark, but I can check...

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 03/21/07 21:45
Chapter: A Night in Hogsmeade

can ijust say that i absolutely love this story!? i think that your version or idea of james and lily is almost perfect! of course no one could get it quite perfect except for jkr but i think you come extremely close! i really liked the chapter. especially lily's question. i liked james' answer even more it was adorable. i wish i knew a james potter! keep going b/c its really great

Author's Response: wow... Please don't tell me I come close to JKR, that's too much of a compliment (and a lie!) haha... I'm so happy you like it though!

Reviewer: joeboo
Date: 03/07/07 19:44
Chapter: Cheers

Please hurry up with the next chapter

Author's Response: it's up!!

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 03/07/07 16:11
Chapter: Cheers

I really like your story and please write some more soon but when will he tell her about Aaron?!?!?!

Author's Response: I guess you'll have to read to find out!

Reviewer: Stefanie
Date: 03/04/07 15:12
Chapter: Cheers

Great story.. can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Maddi3
Date: 03/04/07 0:05
Chapter: Four Years Later

Another great chapter :) I wonder how Ophelia will do at Quidditch? ;)

Author's Response: thanks... I actually haven't written a lot about Quidditch, but the way I see it, it's safe to assume that Ophelia is great at it. She's one of those girls who is great at everything she does.

Reviewer: Duke26
Date: 03/03/07 19:13
Chapter: Cheers

Wonderful story. I've read a ton of James and Lily fics and I must say that this is absolutely awesome! Please keep writing.

Author's Response: thank you!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 03/02/07 14:50
Chapter: Cheers

UPDATE! NOOOOOOOOWWWW PLEASEEEEEEEEEE! and maybe make the next chapter a little longer? please and thank you.

Author's Response: LONGER? that chapter was an absolute beast! haha.

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