Its sooo good!! You have lot of talent...
When is coming the next chapter?? :D
Author's Response: soon, I hope!! Like I said, I have an evil evil project to finish and then I'll get working.
i think this is my favorite story right now. i check like everyday to see if you've updated. sad, i know. but don't make me wait too long for the next chapter, please!
Author's Response: Oh, wow, I'm sorry that I'm gonna have to to keep you waiting for a bit longer!! I just got back from a weekend away with my friends, and I have this little thing called a business project to deal with... it's evil. After I finish, the next chappie will be up.
aww. update soon, mm'kay? Luved it to bits! I thought it was really sweet of James to do all that stuff for her, and the speech was... undescribable. That was kinda mean of Lily to just...well... leave him there after all that! Humph. she makes me mad sometimes.
Author's Response: haha. We all know who she picks in the end though, so I guess it's ok...
wow!! great chapter... i hate aron for spoiling their moment
Author's Response: me too...
This was soooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!! Squeeee! Okay, I think I'm done hyperventilating now. :) I was cheering for James the whole way.... I kinda feel sorry for Aaron, but he should a better boyfriend. I'm glad Lily is finally admitting to herself that she likes James... I can't wait for an update! *gets down on hands and knees* Pleeeeease update soon!
Author's Response: Aaron is a horrible boyfriend!!! Haha.
that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha thank you!
i love this story!
write as soon as u can
Author's Response: Thanks!
Ugh when are aaron and lily going to break up anyways great chapter
Author's Response: You'll see!
I love this story!!!!! :D
Keep up the good work!
It is one of the best Lily/James fics I have read, and I have read too many to count!
Author's Response: That's quite a compliment, thanks!
that chapter was brilliant! loved it sooo much!you write amazingly. keep it up and please write more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
omg!!! i so love this fic!!! its like the best james/lily one ive ever read and thts saying something as ive read thousands!!! u go girl!!! (wait u r a girl arent u ??) :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!... and yes I'm a girl.
This is a really good story you sould be proud of yourself
Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!
omg this is like my favourite ever fanfic and i have read millions!!! It's so cute and u got the personalities of the characters exactly as i imagined them to be!
Keep writing coz i cant wait to read more i think i might go insane waiting hahaha!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Oh my, the ending of that chappie was just too cute!
Author's Response: I love that ending too! ;)
Ooh...I'm happy that you were able to incorporate Malfoy and his lot into the story...I also loved the way the emotional conflict within Peter was staged! You seem to see in many stories that he was a good person when he was a student at Hogwarts, but then he randomly chose to be a Death Eater post-Hogwarts...you, on the other hand, presented him with the offer of having the "Slytherin" kind of power early on...thank you!
Also, for future reference, Sirius's eye color is grey...that's usually a Black family trait to have dark hair and light eyes, so I think Bellatrix shares the same quality...(just saying, though) ^^
Author's Response: I don't focus on Peter in this story, but I think it's really important in J/L fics to show how he was insecure and how it might have been possible for him later on to cross over to the wrong side. Thank you for noticing!! As for the eyes.. I think I remember reading Bellatrix's eyes were dark, but I can check...
can ijust say that i absolutely love this story!? i think that your version or idea of james and lily is almost perfect! of course no one could get it quite perfect except for jkr but i think you come extremely close! i really liked the chapter. especially lily's question. i liked james' answer even more it was adorable. i wish i knew a james potter! keep going b/c its really great
Author's Response: wow... Please don't tell me I come close to JKR, that's too much of a compliment (and a lie!) haha... I'm so happy you like it though!
Please hurry up with the next chapter
Author's Response: it's up!!
I really like your story and please write some more soon but when will he tell her about Aaron?!?!?!
Author's Response: I guess you'll have to read to find out!
Great story.. can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thank you!
Another great chapter :) I wonder how Ophelia will do at Quidditch? ;)
Author's Response: thanks... I actually haven't written a lot about Quidditch, but the way I see it, it's safe to assume that Ophelia is great at it. She's one of those girls who is great at everything she does.