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Reviews For All Right, Evans?

Name: Dracoisbeast (Signed) · Date: 09/01/12 23:44 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
The story was pretty good for a first-time fan fic. The last chapter needed work. What happened to Bellatrix? How did McGonagall find the three of them if they were in an enclosed room? It left me questioning the whole of the story, which is not want a reader wants. And the setting wasn't really a good setting for the end of a story. Or a kiss. Choose something more romantic and cozy for the end. I hope for more lengthly chapters next time. I do hope you write more James/Loly fan fics in the future!

Name: Dracoisbeast (Signed) · Date: 09/01/12 21:35 · For: A New Beginning
Is this really your first fan fic? It's off to a great start. I love your style of writing.

Name: redhead101 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/11 18:06 · For: The First of September
this is a really cool book

Name: balla (Signed) · Date: 12/27/10 22:33 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
Great story! loved it.

Name: AReader (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 19:18 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
You know, this dosen't make much sense. How could Bellatrix still be at Hogwarts if she's at least five years older than them? Andyou use the words 'and everthing went black' a lot...

Name: twilightfan101 (Signed) · Date: 07/25/09 16:18 · For: Black
he better not of died

Name: Tigger_tiger987 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/08 13:23 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
Briliant. Absoulutly brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: maryweasly (Signed) · Date: 07/18/08 12:26 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
I love it! i'm gonna post it on my favorites. you should write more often.

Name: lilyrox (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 16:07 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
Oh my god!! That was so good. You've got me on the edge of my seat now. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Name: ringobeatlesfan4 (Signed) · Date: 05/16/08 18:13 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
great job! good luck w/ whatever's going on in your life now (i did read your bio to see about this chapter) and this is a great story. i loved the ending. {Becca}

Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:55 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
lol great story though... erm arent you gonna continue it??

Name: typicalgurl1 (Signed) · Date: 02/14/08 21:07 · For: The First of September

Name: Marvalo Gaunt (Signed) · Date: 01/19/08 17:29 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
aww happy ending loved this story well written bravo!

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 15:54 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
OH MY GOD BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!! I love how you added in almost every other chapter All Right evans!!! Awesome awesome! Why aren;t you writing anymore , oh wait let me read your bio!

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 14:17 · For: Cheers
Oh, I think I love James Potter, not because of all the Quidditch and Head Boy status, he's just got such a magnetic personality. I'm loving this fic, the Marauder era is one of my favourites. This fic has made me laugh, get angry at Aaron for cheating, and even feel sorry for James when he won the match but not Lily. Great stuff!

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 4:56 · For: Defeat Over Victory
oh what a cheery chapter!!!!! kidding!!

i LOVED it! it was FABUOULS!!!!

Name: aries1996 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 15:47 · For: The First of September
i love this story!!!!!!

james dosent seem much of a trouble maker in this story!! i like it. no i dont like it i love it!!!

Name: Nymphea (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 23:06 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
You wrote: Jamesís lifeless hand.
But he wasn't dead...maybe you should say limp or something?
I really like this fic; for the most part it's true to how I think of the characters.

Name: Nymphea (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 18:31 · For: Cheers
eugh...Lily wouldn't drink illegally! And honestly, I don't think James would either. I really like the story so far, but this chapter bugged me.

Name: Afifa (Signed) · Date: 12/20/07 5:00 · For: Lily and James's First Chapter
yayy!! they're together! =D
well, we can't really force you, can wE? but, please continue with the story if you get time later. =)

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