this is good...pranks?
it was alright, but a bit confusing. after rereading a sentance once or twice i understood it, but still, a little confusing. it was really really good though and i hope you'll update it soon!
i enjoyed it but you could have made it go on for a bit longer and made more fun waiting for your next story coolies321
Very nice. 3rd grade hey?... It's a good story. I'd like read the rest. I hope you have got something planned
Author's Response: I surely do have something planned! I guess I've just been having a hard time with the second chapter...it's being unnecessarily difficult, I tell you! ciao, deer
interesting...interesting...but what year are they in exactly? 5th or 6th?
Author's Response: They are in their fifth year at Hogwarts. Sorry for the confusion! The story, however, spans across their fifth through their seventh year at Hogwarts. I'll update soon!
I hope the moment for Lily and James comes soon! Great job, you are a really great writer!
Author's Response: Thanks for the complement! Check out my other story too!