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Name: pammiez_x3 (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 23:29 · For: When We Grew Up
good story. but i personally think you could have embellished the final battle a bit more. don't you think that's the largest part we're waiting for? otherwise, good writing and i like the new aspect of ellie.

Name: Soggney (Signed) · Date: 01/16/07 10:18 · For: When We Grew Up
Loved both of your stories.
I don't know if anybody pointed it out, but you ended your fics with the word 'scar'.
Just like J. K. Rowling is planning.

Anyways, your fics is right there with the other HP books, although sometimes it feels a little out of place, but that is just because of the HBP.
Another reason is that I think you rushed over the final battle. There going to be 6 and a half books to get to there, it has a little anti climax. Also at the end, the description of the paintings is a little hard.

Nevertheless, it's awesome.

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 15:22 · For: When We Grew Up
Amazing, I loved this story. The ending was a bit confusing, I think it would be easier with family trees. Would you mind making a list of all the adults and there kids? I think that would help. You could just be like Harry and Ginny - and then list the kids names if you like. Then if you would please send it to me via Private Messages. I loved this story, I think you can tell from my comments. Tata for now!

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 15:13 · For: To Brighter Days

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 12:44 · For: N.E.W.T
YAY! I want you to know I am wasting yet another day readin you stories. They are fabulous!!!!

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 11:52 · For: Ginny In Danger

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 11:39 · For: Caught In The Lion's Den

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 11:26 · For: Hurting Hermione

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 11:20 · For: Presents

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 19:26 · For: The Best Summer
I'm excited - sequel sequel! Great chapter, and I'm off to read more! Tata for now!

Name: oddacity (Signed) · Date: 12/06/06 20:15 · For: When We Grew Up
NIFTY story if i may say so! sometimes i'm a sucker for a happy ending.. and i am glad you were able to pull off the feat of a happy ending well. good job.

Name: oddacity (Signed) · Date: 12/05/06 19:56 · For: Graves
i've been so busy reading your story to fit in a review! very vivid and hilarious picture at the end of the chapter... it's also quite faithful to the series in the juxtaposition of high and low emotional points rounding out the same chapter.. and that's enough big words for tonight!

Name: harrygal (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 11:59 · For: When We Grew Up
loved it

Name: I so want 2 b magic (Signed) · Date: 11/17/06 12:34 · For: When We Grew Up
Wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! it was so good the first time i had to come back and read again. this story has made me laugh and cry. you are a brilliant writer and i hope that you will write more brilliant storys like this one. once a again, bril story :)

Name: hpfreak94 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/06 10:35 · For: When We Grew Up
I LOVED every chapter until this I have to say. Ginny and Ellie of all people are so ........ what's the word temoermental maybe, BUt I love it other wise

Name: SnowyHedwig112 (Signed) · Date: 10/30/06 5:14 · For: When We Grew Up
YES YES!!!! You're fics are awesome, and I know I may sound like I'm sucking up, but I SERIOUSLY think they sound like Jo's writing!!! YES!!! WRITE THE FIC!!!!!!!! WE'LL HAVE MORE TO READ THEN!!!

Name: bigworm0808 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 22:16 · For: When We Grew Up
This series was the best i have ever read, the two main fics in it were amazing and the best things i have read on this site. I have read them like 5 times each. Ellie is a great character and i wish she was in the HP books. I look forward to reading more of your fics.

Name: Hp_4_eva (Signed) · Date: 10/29/06 17:28 · For: N.E.W.T
I want to mention to you some innacturacy here: you said thet for the potions exam that they had to brew Amortentia and Felix Felicis, but Amortentia takes a month and Felix takes six months, so that must have been one hell of a long exam.

Name: Phoenixfighter (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 14:30 · For: When We Grew Up
Please write
Will read

Name: Phoenixfighter (Signed) · Date: 10/27/06 13:40 · For: Unlocking The Door

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