absoluteley Amazing as with HPATGWL i read this ages ago and it was fanatstic and it is even better 2nd time round!
Have you written the 10 chapter fic? You should! I Would definateley read it!
Please write more.... I beg you... aww I loved this story so much and I read the other HP and the Girl Who Lived... I remeber starting to read it at 11.30 am and not finishing it till about 2.30... then I started to read this.. I have had about hours sleep so sorry if I made any bad mistakes...
this story rocks..........
do write that 10 chapter fic.....i would love to read ....and so would a lot of others........this story is one of my fav....
love ur stories keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this story's getting dark... hmm..
aaah..that was dreadful!
I...well...I...its just....your....WOW. Thats all i can say. WOW
i Love both of your stories and am sad to see them finish. You Are a great writer
You better write that little ten-chapter fic, I need something to keep me busy while I am waiting for the last Hary Potter book!
I love how you wrote out that story!!!!!!!
Wow!!!! I'm speechless!!
What can I say? It really was marvellous. The whole thing was great. I liked the way you included Neville in everything that the quartet did. And th ending was just great.
I really liked the way you took little things from HBP into account like Felix Felicis, etc. I couldn't have wished for more. In the last chapter I started to get really confused with the names. Especially with two Remuses being there.
You deserve all the praise you receive. Your writing is just marvellous.
you know you would think that people would be able to understand that moldy-voldy is the only thing that casn kill harry, i mean the prophecy says so (for either MUST die at the hand of the other). so bellytricky couldnt kill him obviously. anyway...10/10 for that golden phoenix WHOO HOO!!!
oh man my computer broke from that chapter hitting my screen, guess ill go buy a new one nnow to finish the GREATEST STORY EVER!!!!!
good story. but i personally think you could have embellished the final battle a bit more. don't you think that's the largest part we're waiting for? otherwise, good writing and i like the new aspect of ellie.
Loved both of your stories.
I don't know if anybody pointed it out, but you ended your fics with the word 'scar'.
Just like J. K. Rowling is planning.
Anyways, your fics is right there with the other HP books, although sometimes it feels a little out of place, but that is just because of the HBP.
Another reason is that I think you rushed over the final battle. There going to be 6 and a half books to get to there, it has a little anti climax. Also at the end, the description of the paintings is a little hard.
Nevertheless, it's awesome.
Amazing, I loved this story. The ending was a bit confusing, I think it would be easier with family trees. Would you mind making a list of all the adults and there kids? I think that would help. You could just be like Harry and Ginny - and then list the kids names if you like. Then if you would please send it to me via Private Messages. I loved this story, I think you can tell from my comments. Tata for now!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! That's all I can say.
YAY! I want you to know I am wasting yet another day readin you stories. They are fabulous!!!!
YAY SHES ALIVE!
I KNEW SOMETHING WAS UP!! HAHA!
NOOOOOO!! YOU DID NOT JUST KILL THEM!!!