Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 04/05/07 13:11
Chapter: When We Grew Up

absoluteley Amazing as with HPATGWL i read this ages ago and it was fanatstic and it is even better 2nd time round!

Have you written the 10 chapter fic? You should! I Would definateley read it!

Reviewer: clarealexandrea
Date: 03/31/07 8:42
Chapter: When We Grew Up

Please write more.... I beg you... aww I loved this story so much and I read the other HP and the Girl Who Lived... I remeber starting to read it at 11.30 am and not finishing it till about 2.30... then I started to read this.. I have had about hours sleep so sorry if I made any bad mistakes...

Reviewer: tiffanykapoor
Date: 03/22/07 13:05
Chapter: When We Grew Up

this story rocks..........
do write that 10 chapter fic.....i would love to read ....and so would a lot of others........this story is one of my fav....
love ur stories keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 02/23/07 11:40
Chapter: Unhappy Birthday

this story's getting dark... hmm..

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 02/21/07 11:46
Chapter: Unwelcome Present

aaah..that was dreadful!

Reviewer: xxMexx
Date: 01/30/07 20:28
Chapter: When We Grew Up

I...well...I...its just....your....WOW. Thats all i can say. WOW

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 01/28/07 1:14
Chapter: When We Grew Up

i Love both of your stories and am sad to see them finish. You Are a great writer

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake
Date: 01/27/07 13:48
Chapter: When We Grew Up

You better write that little ten-chapter fic, I need something to keep me busy while I am waiting for the last Hary Potter book!
I love how you wrote out that story!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 01/24/07 4:05
Chapter: When We Grew Up

Wow!!!! I'm speechless!!

What can I say? It really was marvellous. The whole thing was great. I liked the way you included Neville in everything that the quartet did. And th ending was just great.

I really liked the way you took little things from HBP into account like Felix Felicis, etc. I couldn't have wished for more. In the last chapter I started to get really confused with the names. Especially with two Remuses being there.

You deserve all the praise you receive. Your writing is just marvellous.

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 01/21/07 20:40
Chapter: The World's Greatest Wizard

you know you would think that people would be able to understand that moldy-voldy is the only thing that casn kill harry, i mean the prophecy says so (for either MUST die at the hand of the other). so bellytricky couldnt kill him obviously. anyway...10/10 for that golden phoenix WHOO HOO!!!

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 01/20/07 14:40
Chapter: Interesting Behaviours

oh man my computer broke from that chapter hitting my screen, guess ill go buy a new one nnow to finish the GREATEST STORY EVER!!!!!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 01/19/07 23:29
Chapter: When We Grew Up

good story. but i personally think you could have embellished the final battle a bit more. don't you think that's the largest part we're waiting for? otherwise, good writing and i like the new aspect of ellie.

Reviewer: Soggney
Date: 01/16/07 10:18
Chapter: When We Grew Up

Loved both of your stories.
I don't know if anybody pointed it out, but you ended your fics with the word 'scar'.
Just like J. K. Rowling is planning.

Anyways, your fics is right there with the other HP books, although sometimes it feels a little out of place, but that is just because of the HBP.
Another reason is that I think you rushed over the final battle. There going to be 6 and a half books to get to there, it has a little anti climax. Also at the end, the description of the paintings is a little hard.

Nevertheless, it's awesome.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 15:22
Chapter: When We Grew Up

Amazing, I loved this story. The ending was a bit confusing, I think it would be easier with family trees. Would you mind making a list of all the adults and there kids? I think that would help. You could just be like Harry and Ginny - and then list the kids names if you like. Then if you would please send it to me via Private Messages. I loved this story, I think you can tell from my comments. Tata for now!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 15:13
Chapter: To Brighter Days

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! That's all I can say.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 12:44
Chapter: N.E.W.T

YAY! I want you to know I am wasting yet another day readin you stories. They are fabulous!!!!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 11:52
Chapter: Ginny In Danger

YAY SHES ALIVE!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 11:39
Chapter: Caught In The Lion's Den

I KNEW SOMETHING WAS UP!! HAHA!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 11:26
Chapter: Hurting Hermione

NOOOOOO!! YOU DID NOT JUST KILL THEM!!!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 11:20
Chapter: Presents

AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

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