Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 07/19/07 13:47
Chapter: The Second Return

sigh... I wish I had a house like that!

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 07/19/07 13:35
Chapter: Return to Godric's Hollow

That's sad.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 07/19/07 13:26
Chapter: Freeing Neville

Eeeew! I really don't want to know what his hands do fer her!!

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 07/19/07 13:10
Chapter: The Best Summer

tsk tsk... Fred and George have to do better than that!

Reviewer: HarryPotterLover_01
Date: 07/13/07 20:26
Chapter: When We Grew Up

i loved thsi story and once agian i waited until the end to comment.....you are brillant! i loved this one even more then the last...you did well at tying up the loose ends and brings alot of emotion into the story.....loved how malfoy finally got what he had coming to him...i was dissapointed at the death of Luna and frieds but the story certainly would not have as much of an inpact if they were to remain alive...also i loved the chapter where Ginny and Dean were kidnapped and inpersonated( not because they were) but because it was totally unexpected! GOOD JOB!!! i am definalty looking forward to reading ur one-shots and other stories by u in the furture...keep up the good work and have fun.....thank you for your wonderful stories!
Charlene

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 07/13/07 2:09
Chapter: When We Grew Up

i realy liked the story and i think it would be cool if you write another to go with this one it would be asome!!!

Reviewer: lilstrywrtr
Date: 07/05/07 12:58
Chapter: When We Grew Up

love it!! one of my faves!!

Reviewer: lilstrywrtr
Date: 07/02/07 13:52
Chapter: Unwelcome Present

Within seconds the dementors rushed down to the unsuspecting people who were spilling out of closing pubs and clubs. Screams filled the air as the terrified people stared at the unfamiliar creatures that were now bearing down on them......... i thought muggles couldn't see dementors

Reviewer: miss_potter_obsessed
Date: 06/22/07 16:10
Chapter: When We Grew Up

I would ne interested!!!! Write it!! lol This is probably a rather late reveiw but I don't care because I feel the need to shout about my new found love of your fics!!!!! (actually I found it hile reading the other one) : ) Keep on writing more amazing fics!!!

Reviewer: MrsH
Date: 06/20/07 11:19
Chapter: Death Eater Encounter

One of the things I like about your stories is the way you put things into context with translation of the Latin spells for those who didn't suffer through the years of parochial school Latin I took, and the photos on your author's page. Thanks!

Reviewer: wolverine_arnab
Date: 06/14/07 5:38
Chapter: Ginny In Danger

hmmm,u were pretty good at this...but dont u think u stressed too much over Ellie??how come she has all the powers when harry has none..unless u count love as his sole power.....
i am getting confused duh,andrew nd james were both brothers right???how come ellie is the only one other than the headmaster who has the ability to go newhere nd evrywhere in Hogwarts???Eliie nd Harry r frm the same blood line..i thot harry might inherit sum of'em as well... srry for telling u all these,its ur story,nd u can write it in watevr way u want...srry once again

Reviewer: wolverine_arnab
Date: 06/14/07 5:35
Chapter: Ginny In Danger

hmmm,u were pretty good at this...but dont u think u stressed too much over Ellie??how come she has all the powers when harry has none..unless u count love as his sole power.....
i am getting confused duh,andrew nd james were both brothers right???how come ellie is the only one other than the headmaster who has the ability to go newhere nd evrywhere in Hogwarts???Eliie nd Harry r frm the same blood line..i thot harry might have similar powers...
Sorry,i shudnt hav told u all these,its ur stroy,nd u can write it in neway u want...srry once again...

Reviewer: ZGirl LunaLuver
Date: 05/22/07 23:38
Chapter: Wedding Bells

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! At one point, I laughed so hard I choked!!! Well done!

Reviewer: Gombo
Date: 05/14/07 12:59
Chapter: When We Grew Up

My first review goes to you! :D
You have written a quite nice story, i like that you give Harry a blood family member, even thou I find it highly unlikly to happen in the real version of Harry.
Your story was nice, but it was very sweet, to sweet, if you get my mening. The ammount of time used in define the releationships between the pairs are VERY large compared to what you have used to define the plot. It is mostly a romance with very little real plot, there is no clue as to why Voldie survived the rebounded Killing Curse, there arnt a real meaning with the propesy of Ellie, she does sacrifies annything, (at last not during this story), all in all, the story was worth the read, but I wont be reading it a 2nd time, im sorry to say.

Good luck with your writting in the future, and may the muses be with ye! :D

- Gombo

Reviewer: SapphireAster
Date: 05/04/07 2:40
Chapter: When We Grew Up

I loved it!

You have an amazing ability to make me see the scene before me. You are truely a gifted writer!!

Reviewer: tubawiz
Date: 04/29/07 5:02
Chapter: When We Grew Up

this story rocks, could you post a family tree along with your last chapter (I know that's what the photo's were about, but some of the grandkids' names were hard to keep strait

you are one of my favorite fan fiction authors, and I wish you well.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 04/25/07 13:27
Chapter: When We Grew Up

I have really enjoyed all of the intertwined stories that you have written. Ellie is a great character and Harry deserves to have someone like that in his life.
If you write the "ten-chapter fic" I am sure everyone would say thank you for another enjoyable read.

Reviewer: photoman4u
Date: 04/22/07 4:14
Chapter: When We Grew Up

I have read many stories in this site and this is the first review I have wanted to write...

You have done an excellent job of keeping in the writing syle and format of Rawlings. Yet you have added a plot that is incrediable and rivals her's.

I am a grwon adult that still relishes the joy of reading HP.. LOL I have shared these two stories of yours with many other potter fans and they too have relished them...

So THank YOU!!! and I hope to read many more stories of yours...

Reviewer: stareywomen
Date: 04/15/07 12:20
Chapter: When We Grew Up

You should make a fic with these characters and have it just like this one!!

Reviewer: GrayGreenEyes
Date: 04/07/07 12:48
Chapter: Caught In The Lion's Den

DANG......

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