Reviewer: Thisismypenname
Date: 04/11/13 20:41
Chapter: Ghoul Are You?

ok. that i did not see coming...wow you are a good writer

Reviewer: c-hep
Date: 06/04/12 22:54
Chapter: When We Grew Up

amazing, both the girl who lived and unspeakable power, absoloutly captivating and always keeps you guessing down to the last chapter, written in teh true style of J.K. Rowling herself. thanks for writing such a fantastic story for the entertainment of us all! keep it up :)

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 14:26
Chapter: To The Quidditch Pitch?

Oh, what a wise,wise Dumbledore...err,author.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 14:25
Chapter: Career's Advice

The last paragraph really nailed our heroes.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 1:05
Chapter: Hermione's Surprise

Loved the poem - I would have married Ron, and we have nothing in common.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 1:04
Chapter: The Broken Curse

I thought you did a fine job on the song.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 1:03
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Enjoyed the paragraph about how the women all prepare for the ceremony. I've already read some chapters past this one and think it's great how you have a sense of humor about the strange things we females do.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 1:00
Chapter: The Second Return

In this chapter and the previous I liked the personal touches you put into the family residences.

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 05/01/11 0:58
Chapter: Return to Godric's Hollow

I had a dream about this chapter.

Reviewer: npramod
Date: 01/29/11 9:58
Chapter: When We Grew Up

Wow...I enjoyed every single chapter....not a dull moment in there.....kudos!

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 12/24/09 0:23
Chapter: Final Chapter Author's Notes

I'm sorry to say that even though I really liked this story, I still liked Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived better. Still, Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power was a really good story.

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 12/23/09 21:54
Chapter: Presents

That's a pretty big cliffhanger...you do tend to do that a lot. Nice story, though.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/12/09 14:56
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Awww, I always cry at weddings. Good job on describing the wedding. I'm sure Molly is thrilled.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/28/09 12:24
Chapter: Graves

I take it that was a wizard bachelor party? Very funny, with the exception of visiting the graves. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/28/09 12:01
Chapter: Unwelcome Present

Wow--that's a lot of muggles under attack. It's interesting how Ellie and Harry are connected through their scars. I'm glad Harry has his own penseive. It seems easier to relay informations that way. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/28/09 10:27
Chapter: Fatherly Advice.

James' letter was sad in many ways. He knew he was going to die soon and he seemed to accept that. It made me think again, just how much sadness was Harry expected to take. The talk from Remus and Arthur was in a much lighter vein. Kind of cute in a way. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/28/09 9:00
Chapter: Coming of Age

After reading about Harry's presents I almost feel like I won the lottery--so much money and property to think about. I'm happy that Potter House was restored. --I forgot to say that before. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/25/09 13:34
Chapter: The Second Return

That was a really good chapter. I loved touring Potter Hall. I loved the bathroom. I want one like it. I was reminded once again of all that Harry lost at the hands of Voldemort. His life should've been so different. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/25/09 12:56
Chapter: Return to Godric's Hollow

I loved the di Vinci quote. I'll have to remember that. I liked the interpretation that Lily was a healer. To be honest I never knew what Lily did. Were they in hiding all the time after Harry was born? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/25/09 12:22
Chapter: Freeing Neville

I was only watching the Quidditch game from the sidelines but it was a lot of fun. I guess in Ellie's case blood is thicker than love, if that makes sense. I wonder what they'll be up to in Godric's Hollow. Great chapter.

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