Great interpretation of emotions, the poem goes in real deep. Loved the way you expressed their relationship. Keep writing.
This was wonderful. I think you've captured Remus and Tonks very well. I also think you've portrayed their relationship nicely. This was a pleasure to read! Keep it up!
Author's Response: I try, I try.... thank you! :)
Excellent, I love Remus and Tonks as a ship even though not a lot of focus is put on it in HBP. In your poem you used your punctuation and line breaks very well to emphazise certain pauses and words. I want to offer some some sort of contructive critisism, but at the moment I am drawing blank, so I'd take that as a compliment. I'll give it a 9/10 and keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you... I think the idea of Remus and Tonks is very sweet.