Reviews For The Awakening
Reviewer: Stellaluna
Date: 06/30/06 21:12
Chapter: The Awakening

I had NO idea what that was about the first time I read it. So, is there magic? Please tell there's magic. As other's have said if that was real, I'd probly go mad. Literally mad. It was well written though. Kinda sad since Hermy, Won-Won, Sirius, Lupin, and all those other characters aren't real.

Author's Response: Well, it seems like you've got have of it right. Not only are all of Harry's friends non-existant, but the entire Wizarding World is, too. Magic is not real. It's as if he was in the normal world, like us, where magic is only in fairy tales. Scary! I hope you liked it anyway (:

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 06/30/06 14:33
Chapter: The Awakening

heaven forbid that shud be the actual thing! i cant fathom how disappointed i wud be if all the harry potter books turned out to just be Harry's delusion! anyway, this was very well written. good job on writing a substantial version of my greatest fear (well, after spiders, that is)!

Author's Response: Lol, I don't know about you, but I think I would be disappointed enough to hunt down JKR and make her write a proper ending! That's interesting, this is your greatest fear? It certainly is horrifying to think about... so let's hope that doesn't ever happen to Harry OR you! Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 06/30/06 13:18
Chapter: The Awakening

Waaauugh!!! What the heck is going on!!!! Isn't there more!!! Okay, that was good but extremely frustrating and terrifying. I don't like the idea of it all being a dream!! EEEAAAAHHH!! Okay, I'm alright. But still... whoa. That was almost more than my obsession could take. :0

Author's Response: Okay, I fear for your health now! :P No, there is not more. I wrote this as a one-shot, so that it's sort of like the last chapter of the series (with 'scar' as the last word and everything). Just a little idea that I had, as freaky as it is. I hope you enjoyed it at least a tiny bit though! (:

Reviewer: MistressOfWolves
Date: 06/30/06 2:32
Chapter: The Awakening

Yea, I'm confuseed at what is going on. Why is Harry where he is? Why isn't he going to Hogwarts? This is terrible, when I say terrible I don't mean the fanficiton is terrible since the fanficiton is ver very good indeed, but this makes me nervous.

Author's Response: Perhaps if you went back and re-read it would make a bit more sense! Basically, Harry was a normal person just like us. He got into a car accident right before his eleventh birthday, which caused him to go into a coma. And for the next 6yrs, he dreamed everything that happened in the books... get it? So when he wakes up in the hospital, 6yrs later, he's completely confused because he thinks everything - even magic - is real, but of course it isn't. Creepy!

Reviewer: Xalbrend
Date: 06/30/06 0:42
Chapter: The Awakening

That had better not happen for real.

Author's Response: Heh. I agree... hope you like it (:

Reviewer: hp_freak17
Date: 06/29/06 21:49
Chapter: The Awakening

That was a very good story, but that's how everyone thinks it's going to end, and I really am getting tired of hearing that. I don't mean to be critical or anything, I'm just saying that this was a very common theory. But, well done! I love how you wrote it. You are a very good writer, and you should do some more stories!

Author's Response: Well, I did write this about a year ago, so maybe everyone just stole my idea! Lol, I'm just kidding. I personally haven't seen any other fics like this but I hope you think it stands out in some way! Thank you for the compliments, I certainly do have other stories - 3, in fact, and other ideas already developing. Thank you for reviewing (:

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 06/29/06 19:12
Chapter: The Awakening

Poor Harry. How cruel for it to all be a dream, but then again maybe itís a blessing because with Voldemort around it was sometimes more of a nightmare. On the brightside, he gets to know his parents (fulfill his hearts desire from the Mirror of Erised) and the fate of the world is no longer up to him. It's weird for Harry to want something he never liked before. This is a really good one-shot, but I would like to know more. JKR isn't giving us another book after book 7, but you could tell us what happens next. No pressure though, it's just a suggestion. Anyway, good job and keep writing.

Author's Response: Yay, an optimist! As horrible as it is, at least Harry doesn't have to worry about anyone plotting his murder. And yes, it's ironic. Unfortunately, continuing this probably won't happen. Sorry to disappoint you, but this really was meant to be like a (weird) last chapter, not a story. Anyway, I really think I lack the creative skills to continue this anyway. I'd hate to ruin it! I'm glad you liked it, though, and thank you for your great review.

Reviewer: SilentSempra
Date: 06/29/06 17:40
Chapter: The Awakening

Incredible. You never think of him WANTING his scar- but I guess he would if his entire life had been a coma dream. How would that feel to wake up and realize that Hermione...Ron...Ginnny...Hogwarts itself don't exist. He'd have to start his life over again. (Hint, hint...) You've got talent! Write about his new life...

Author's Response: Lol, I wish there was more, but I feel my creativity ends here. I meant it to be an interesting spin on what the last chapter would be, so I'm going to keep it that way! Sorry (: But I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: xxKatrina
Date: 06/29/06 14:29
Chapter: The Awakening

Very good story. You consider adding more to it, it would make a wonderfull longer story. Although it might lose some of it's greatness ( if that's even a word) If you were to add more to it. But anyway.. Totally loved it.

Author's Response: (: Thank you. I have entertained the idea of continuing this because other people have told me I should, but I really don't think I will because I think it will ruin the effect. Part of why I wrote this as a one-shot was so that it could be like the last chapter and also to leave some things up to your imagination. But I'm glad you still liked it! Thank you (:

Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 06/29/06 14:11
Chapter: The Awakening

What the heck is going on there?

Author's Response: Basically, everything that's happened in books one through six are merely Harry's imagination. He dreamed them up while in a coma caused by the car accident. It's just like if you had an accident one day and dreamed that magic actually existed. Does that help? I hope you liked it anyway.

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 06/29/06 12:04
Chapter: The Awakening

That was alarming! magical community? CAR CRASH! Oh my God!

Author's Response: Nope. It never existed. Eek! Thanks for the review (:

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 06/28/06 21:27
Chapter: The Awakening

AHHH!!! that's so cool this isn't it is it? i couldn't tell by looking at in under the featured stories list!! if it's isn't which i don't think it is i can't wait for you to update keep it up!!!! :D

Author's Response: Actually, this IS it - it's a one-shot. Sorry! I hope you still liked it, even though there's no more. Thank you for reviewing (:

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/28/06 21:13
Chapter: The Awakening

Funny way to end the story! Everything was sort of a dream. Nice tale, anyway.

Author's Response: Funny? That's one I haven't heard before, lol. Thank you (:

Reviewer: Lordban
Date: 06/28/06 16:31
Chapter: The Awakening

Waking up from a dream can sometimes be cruel, especially when you were convinced the dream (be it an actual dream or just your misperception of people and/or things) was in fact reality.

Poor Harry, it's hard not to empathize with him. You weren't very kind with our boy, but since this is a very well written and enjoyable read, I guess you deserve to be forgiven ;)

Author's Response: I know, I'm so mean. But look on the bright side - no Voldemort! So I could, in fact, be doing him a favor... Anyway, I appreciate your review :D

Reviewer: BlastEndedSkrewt
Date: 06/28/06 15:16
Chapter: The Awakening

hmm... interesting, I've never thought of the story that way.... I like it!

Author's Response: Hopefully we'll never have to read it that way either. Thank you!

Reviewer: Ginny_Weasley_Potter
Date: 06/27/06 22:52
Chapter: The Awakening

not going to happen, but well written

Author's Response: Lol, yes, but thank you anyway.

Reviewer: mmcgonagall06
Date: 06/27/06 22:29
Chapter: The Awakening

Oooh. . .no offense - this is a very good story and is very well written - but I hope this isn't how the series ends! It's very original and you're a brilliant writer, but it can't have all been a dream!

Author's Response: None taken! I completely agree (along with everyone else, lol). But I appreciate your review, I'm glad you liked it anyway (:

Reviewer: Lasweetie
Date: 06/27/06 22:03
Chapter: The Awakening

I liked it! I was really confused at first but the idea was brilliant! I too hope that Ms. Rowling doesn't end the series with a dream cop-out because I would have to burn all of my books! You made it seem very realistic! Bravo!

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I sort of jump right into the story, but hopefully it cleared up once you read it all! Thanks for reviewing (:

Reviewer: SearerOfSimplentcy
Date: 06/27/06 19:25
Chapter: The Awakening

CLAp (10000000000 times)
please reaview what i have on my page

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Actually, the fic that you have up here isn't validated yet so I can't look at it at the moment. But I'll try to remember to come back to it once I can access it (:

Reviewer: sirius_s_child
Date: 06/27/06 14:56
Chapter: The Awakening

thats really cool! i never expected anything like that ever for the end!

Author's Response: Good, that's what I wanted it to be - unexpected. Thanks for reviewing (:

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