Reviews For The Awakening
Reviewer: POTCgirl1337
Date: 08/27/06 0:32
Chapter: The Awakening

Ohh, really great story! I loved the whole coma thing. But to be honest, if JK does that I might just have to send her hate mail, lol! Just wondering, who was that boy that died in the crash? Was it anyone we would know?

Author's Response: Hm actually, I didn't think too much about the other boy that died in the crash. I mostly just focused on Harry's experience, so I left details like that up to my readers to interpret. But thank you for reviewing! I'll gladly help you write any hate mail if she does end it this way, lol. (:

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 08/15/06 12:11
Chapter: The Awakening

If JKR ends the series that way, I will kill her. Luckily, it's only fanfiction. don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with it. Your story was good. But if the HP series ended like that... :-(

Author's Response: *Laughs* I think that's why the series won't end like this - because JKR does not have a death wish. Thank you for the review (: I'm glad you liked it despite the fact that it would suck as a real ending!

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 08/10/06 11:43
Chapter: The Awakening

Awwww..... *tears* it was so sad... i loved it but i dont know how you wrote it! i wouldnt be able to! i want so badly for that world to be real even if it is only real to fictional characters that i would be devistated if JK ends the book with anything like this... but i was very good!!!

Author's Response: Lol, maybe I'm just cold-hearted! Seriously, though, it was sort of weird writing as if it was all a dream, but I just had to pretend that I, as a normal person, were in Harry's shoes (if that makes sense). I mean, something like that could happen today (dreaming that magic is real). But I'm glad you liked it even though it made you sad! :D Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Malika Potter
Date: 08/02/06 21:44
Chapter: The Awakening

This story is really good! Please write more!


Author's Response: :D Thanks. It's actually just a one-shot, sorry!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 07/28/06 7:28
Chapter: The Awakening

Woah! That was pretty cool. What inspired you to create this plot? It's very out-there, but I enjoyed reading it. That would be weird--finding out your whole life was a figment of you imagination. Excellent job, though! :-)

Author's Response: Wow, *another* review. That's nice of you :D Actually, my sister had been talking about an idea for a regular fiction in which the girl dreams up her life while in a coma, and one day I just thought, "Oh! What if that happened to Harry?!". Thanks for reading and reviewing (again). I appreciate it!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 07/26/06 21:32
Chapter: The Awakening

I love your banner!!! The story was well-written, verrry interesting...nothing much I can say that no one else has.

Author's Response: Haha I love it, too. She did a great job. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Sootyface
Date: 07/21/06 12:27
Chapter: The Awakening

This is really good. Me likes!! I've read a few people's versions of Harryinacoma, but most of those were humor...your version is really original, and your descriptions are excellent.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! I haven't read other "Harryinacoma" fics, so I can';t really compare them to mine, but it's great you think it's unique (: I really appreciate you review.

Reviewer: Stellaluna
Date: 07/16/06 16:01
Chapter: The Awakening

And after the shock that he was ONLY dreaming. Harry writes about his adventures at Hogwarts and goes under the pen name of J.K. Rowling. XD Ok, that's a little far-fetched. lol

Author's Response: Haha. So JKR is really a guy! :D Thanks for the laugh, I hope you liked it.

Author's Response: Oh my god!!! Stellaluna! I remember now! I used to LOVE that book. I had a little Stellaluna stuffed animal and everything. Awesome username, lol.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 07/15/06 9:53
Chapter: The Awakening

Strange story. As much as I liked this fic (turning a wild theory into a fic is great), I hope that it doesn't become canon. The last chapter of book seven shouldn't be this.

Ironic, isn't it, that Harry actually wishes that his scar was ... real?

Author's Response: Ah, yes. You're definitely not alone in thinking that. And the irony of it all is probably the best part, in my opinion (: Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lely
Date: 07/13/06 14:23
Chapter: The Awakening


Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the pleasant review. Maybe next time you could be a bit more tactful. I don't expect everyone to like my stories, but I do think that reviewers should be nice and mature about it. I don't think that's too much to ask.

Reviewer: KJ_bookworm
Date: 07/11/06 18:08
Chapter: The Awakening

A very interesting idea. It was a good story but everyone would freak if JK Rowling did this. "It was all a dream"

Author's Response: "Freak" is probably an understatement. I'm glad you like it (:

Reviewer: nazgulslayer66
Date: 07/05/06 15:19
Chapter: The Awakening

oh, that's good. very good. i like that a lot. the concept that he could have imagined the whole thing is very interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 07/02/06 21:45
Chapter: The Awakening

wow...that was so twisted. It's almost like that ending for that soap opera (Dallas) where the guy/girl dreamt it all! lol.

Author's Response: Haha, I have never heard of that soap opera, but it would have been interesting to watch. "Twisted"... I like that description! Thank you.

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 07/02/06 15:06
Chapter: The Awakening

this is such a good story!! wow!!!! this is good!! im speakless!!!!!

Author's Response: :D Thank you

Reviewer: lilweasley14
Date: 07/01/06 23:11
Chapter: The Awakening

what a strange twist! i really like the idea tho.. good fic!

Author's Response: Hehe... good, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks.

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 07/01/06 16:25
Chapter: The Awakening

If JKR were to write a last chapter like that, she should use this one! Excellent!

Author's Response: I wish! Lol. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Pearl_Moon
Date: 07/01/06 15:25
Chapter: The Awakening

wow. that was such a fantastic twist. i hope that doesn't happen in the books though ... i'd be gutted! 10/10 for everything. luv ya!

Author's Response: Eek... that'd be terrible! (The gutting, I mean). Thanks for the awesome rating! (:

Reviewer: atrum infractus
Date: 07/01/06 14:37
Chapter: The Awakening

Wow. I hope it doesn't end like that...but wow. It was definitely orginal!

I do have one question- did you do any research on comatose states? I'm curious if this story is actually possible.

Author's Response: Cool, thank you. I did a bit of research, but nothing extensive. From what I understand, comas can indeed be caused by severe head injuries (like Harry had in the accident) and can resemble deep sleeps. The only thing that probably wouldn't be possible is when Harry got out of bed, because his muscles hadn't been used in six years. But I was more focused on conveying the message I wanted and making this a good fiction overall to worry too much about the uncertainties of comas. Although I do think it, for the most part, realistic (:

Reviewer: bratface0201
Date: 07/01/06 11:22
Chapter: The Awakening

ooh freaky. way cool. i dont like the end paragraph that much tho.

Author's Response: Hm, I wonder what you didn't like about it...? Thanks for the review, though (:

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 07/01/06 10:58
Chapter: The Awakening

oh. my. god. this was amazing! totally weird and different, and it really made me think, oh god, poor harry! that must feel so strange! but honestly, it would be so wierd to wake up and find it had all been a dream. excellent job, this deserves it's place in the featured section.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I've been pretty shocked ever since it was made a featured story, especially when so many people started reading it. I'm love that you think it's weird, lol, 'cause I wanted it to be that way. I appreciate your review! Thanks :D

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