Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 20:09
Chapter: Conversations

Still love this fan fic! Wonderful writing

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 17:46
Chapter: More Cleaning

I'm just one of those people that will read a story and give reviews for every chapter. You may get sick of reading these reviews for every chapter. Oh well. I really liked this chapter especially how you are developing Lily and James' relationship slowly. Too many fan fics rush it I think.

Author's Response: Hahha. I was beginning to wonder- when there were all these alerts in my mailbox I was wondering if the last chapter got validated and I didn't know, but it was just you. :-D But, thanks soo much! I'm glad you liked it soo much!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 17:24
Chapter: The First Detention

Entertaining first detention! Poor James, Lily seems prone to violence towards him!

Author's Response: Uh, duh! *laugh*

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 17:17
Chapter: Beside the Lake

I thought this was a sweet and well written chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/28/07 20:45
Chapter: The Fight and the Punishment

I enjoyed reading this chapter but it was kinda short for my taste. Loved it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/28/07 20:32
Chapter: Back at Hogwarts

Amazing chapter! I am really enjoyin this fan fic.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/28/07 20:17
Chapter: The Trainride

Fantastic chapter! I loved it when James was bested by a little first year. I laughed sooo hard!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/28/07 19:40
Chapter: The Unbelievable Head

Sounds like an intersting story. I love reading Lily and James fics!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 10/27/07 19:27
Chapter: NEWTs

NOO. I can't believe this story is amost over.. =( But I really did love the POVs. Something different. Soooo update soon, please?? =D

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 10/27/07 13:41
Chapter: NEWTs

OMG!!!! I'm sooooo scared for the ending. Once this story ends, I;ll have almsot nothing to look forward to!

Well, actually, I have billions of other james/lily fics to wait for, but i'll miss this one!

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Oh, stop it! I'm sure you've got plenty to look forward to, but I'm glad you'll miss this one! Thanks!

Reviewer: IchLiebe
Date: 10/26/07 10:24
Chapter: NEWTs

I absoultley love this story it's the only one i follow. once you are done writing this one will you be making another james/lily story so it could be more acurate now that the 7th book has come out? I really think you should, it would be great

Author's Response: Teh only one? Whoa... thanks! OI... a whole new J/L? Nah... I'd use too many things from this one. I'll got through this one though and update somethings.

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 10/22/07 8:54
Chapter: NEWTs

i cant belive the last chapter is next! *sniffles* this has been an amazing story and ive loved really enjoyed reading it. one chapter to go... congrats on finishing.

Author's Response: Yup, almost over... thanks for reading!

Reviewer: prongs_babe_317426
Date: 10/18/07 11:35
Chapter: NEWTs

Oh my gosh, I love this chpater and story! I'm really sad that it's ending...oh well, be sure to write more stories, you're a really good author! Can't wait 'til the nexy chappie!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks much!

Reviewer: black sabathings
Date: 10/18/07 0:37
Chapter: NEWTs


Author's Response: Short and sweet. I love it. ;-D

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 10/17/07 18:03
Chapter: NEWTs

hehe i liked the ending alot! I also loved how u uded all of those character's thoughts. Im still lvoin this story!

Author's Response: Thanks much!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 10/16/07 15:38
Chapter: NEWTs

Hey, I finally caught up! Yay! Good job, too bad there's only ganna be one more...
Hehe, we had a Physics test today and my mind started wandering, and when I noticed it was wandering it reminded me of this chapter :P
So I'm looking forward to that last chapter, but not to the story ending. Kinda bittersweet like that :-/

Author's Response: *laugh* Who said fiction didn't apply to real life? Oh... wait... no one. Whoops. :-D Glad you've FINALLY caught up. *laugh* Thanks for editing- And Maybe I'll send you the last one to Beta.

Reviewer: wanderingLily
Date: 10/13/07 0:47
Chapter: NEWTs

I loved the chapter! I don't want the story to end(but of course I also want an update ASAP)

Keep on writing.

Author's Response: *laugh* Dont' worry- you're not alone. A lot of people don't want it to end. :-D

Reviewer: lilianpotter1234563
Date: 10/11/07 18:20
Chapter: NEWTs

aww!!! i love this!! i love your story sooo much!! im so sad that it's ending :O(

Author's Response: Aww... thanks sooo much!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 10/11/07 13:11
Chapter: NEWTs

As far as I remember, uncle Alphard died and left Sirius a small fortune somewhere in seventh year, so you're right! And considering the dates given in DH for Lilly and James's deaths, you're quite right with your time-line.
Yikes! Only one more?

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Awesome! Glad I got those write- I didn't make it clear that Alphard is dead, so.... Not quite on the money, but. Hey. I'm glad you liked it! And.. once again... glad those dates are on the spot too. :-D

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/11/07 0:44
Chapter: NEWTs

Awsome chapter! i love that you showed the different point of views! i cant believe its almost over...its kind of depressing...this is one of my favorite out of my favotite fics...if tht makes sense...i still love sirius tho. sirius is the best! i cant wait for the final chapter! and yet at the same time i dont want it to come...kinda like with the 7th hp your story is positively amazing! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked them- I did too! Whoa... this story has been compared with Deathly Hallows?! Whoa.... THANKS!

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