Terrific chapter! Really excited to read about the dance :)
Almost died laughing while reading this chapter! Fantastic humor
Author's Response: Oh wow, please don't die! :-D
Glad to see Sirius back to normal! Great chapter!
Amazing chapter. I like the idea for a ball and enjpyed how you wrote Sam's character at the very end. Tongue in cheek humor right there!
Author's Response: *laugh* Gotta love it! :-D
Poor Sirius! I feel so bad for him! :( Another fantastic chapter
Awesome battle! You are a fantastic writer!
Dramatic end to the chapter! I'm assuming that this will be the first time of the thrice defied. Great job!
Author's Response: Indeed! Hai ragione. (That meant "You're right!")
I really loved the idea of kind of a pick up game of Quidditch! Funny and entertaining.
Wonderful chapter. Nice to see Lily back to normal. That was actually a pretty good idea that James had!
An extremely short chapter with a horrible cliffie at the end! Cant wait to read more of this fic!
Not really an enjoyable chapter but fuenerals have to happen. Interesting about Stacey running.
Fabulous chapter! Dumbledore isnt really one to take action unless the hard proof is right in front of his crooked nose. Poor James and Lily! :(
A very sad chapter that almost made me cry! Decently written but as you said a little choppy.
Author's Response: yeah, I guess that came about when I edited and took stuff out too much.... Sigh.
Hehe! I had a good laugh reading this chapter.
Love this chapter! Have to say this is one of the best James/Lily fan fics I have read in a very long time.
Interesting! I think Stacy is coming across as a character that I love to hate!
Amazing chapter! Nice little cliffie at the end. Wonder who they are?!?!
Creative prank! I could see the Marauders doing something like that. Loved it
Kind of a short chapter. Lily just can not make up her mind about James!
Terrific chapter! Stacey should be an interesting chapter to add to the story.