Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 16:41
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Terrific chapter! Really excited to read about the dance :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 16:17
Chapter: This November Day

Almost died laughing while reading this chapter! Fantastic humor

Author's Response: Oh wow, please don't die! :-D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 10:55
Chapter: Coming Out of It

Glad to see Sirius back to normal! Great chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 8:34
Chapter: The Passing Days

Amazing chapter. I like the idea for a ball and enjpyed how you wrote Sam's character at the very end. Tongue in cheek humor right there!

Author's Response: *laugh* Gotta love it! :-D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 8:26
Chapter: The Thirteen Inch Scar

Poor Sirius! I feel so bad for him! :( Another fantastic chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 8:17
Chapter: The Duel

Awesome battle! You are a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 6:40
Chapter: More Bad News

Dramatic end to the chapter! I'm assuming that this will be the first time of the thrice defied. Great job!

Author's Response: Indeed! Hai ragione. (That meant "You're right!")

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/30/07 6:35
Chapter: A New Day

I really loved the idea of kind of a pick up game of Quidditch! Funny and entertaining.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:46
Chapter: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

Wonderful chapter. Nice to see Lily back to normal. That was actually a pretty good idea that James had!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:42
Chapter: Aftermath

An extremely short chapter with a horrible cliffie at the end! Cant wait to read more of this fic!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:40
Chapter: Goodbye

Not really an enjoyable chapter but fuenerals have to happen. Interesting about Stacey running.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:32
Chapter: Talks with Friends

Fabulous chapter! Dumbledore isnt really one to take action unless the hard proof is right in front of his crooked nose. Poor James and Lily! :(

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:22
Chapter: Bad News

A very sad chapter that almost made me cry! Decently written but as you said a little choppy.

Author's Response: yeah, I guess that came about when I edited and took stuff out too much.... Sigh.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:15
Chapter: Another Detention

Hehe! I had a good laugh reading this chapter.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:09
Chapter: A Few Discussions

Love this chapter! Have to say this is one of the best James/Lily fan fics I have read in a very long time.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 21:02
Chapter: Betrayal

Interesting! I think Stacy is coming across as a character that I love to hate!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 20:48
Chapter: Secrets, Questions, Answers, and Doubt

Amazing chapter! Nice little cliffie at the end. Wonder who they are?!?!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 20:36
Chapter: More Detentions

Creative prank! I could see the Marauders doing something like that. Loved it

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 20:19
Chapter: Could It Be Jealousy?

Kind of a short chapter. Lily just can not make up her mind about James!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/29/07 20:16
Chapter: The American

Terrific chapter! Stacey should be an interesting chapter to add to the story.

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