Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/03/08 18:33
Chapter: Getting Back at the Boys

Yet again I'm going to ask you to borrow your idea! This is just so utterly hilarious! I, of course would note that I got the idea from you and it would not be exactly the same. I just felt I had to ask before even creating an entirely different prank, because your the first author I've seen have Lily and her friends prank back aat the marauders.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/03/08 16:18
Chapter: A Few Words, If You Please

AH! CLiffies are NOT NICE! They are absolutely NOT NICE things to leave your frantic readers with!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/03/08 16:10
Chapter: That Laila Girl

Oh! Poor Lily! You know, that Layla girl can go jump in the lake! Maybe then the giant squid can take care of her for Lily!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/02/08 6:51
Chapter: This November Day

Um...Sirius is an idiot! It seriously took him that long to comprehend what Lily said? And you really like illiteration, huh?

Author's Response: "illiterationn?' no- I don't like that. I NEED to be able to read. I do like "alliteration", however. It's decidedly delightful and definitely dear to me. :D

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/02/08 6:44
Chapter: Coming Out of It

Yay! Sirius got dumped in cold water! I was waiting for that! Wow, Lily really can be an evil little red-head. Right now, she's really starting to remind me of Ginny. Those Potter men must really like those firey red-headed girls... Anywho, I know this seems really wierd, but I just have this hunch that even though they hate him, the marauders and all the other peoples are gonna dump Snape in cold water. The lake perhaps?

Author's Response: Oooh... good guess. Good idea... but no. Sorry. That doesn't happen.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/01/08 19:52
Chapter: The Passing Days

I have to say, evil, murdering bitch that she was, I feel a bit sorry for Stacey.

Author's Response: Ouch... but glad you feel some remorse. She wasn't completely horrible.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/01/08 19:36
Chapter: More Bad News

NO! Nonononononono! Nikeia can't be that injured and Voldemort can't be at Hogwarts! That is evil! That is horrible! That sort of long word meaning preposterous that I don't feel like looking up in the thesaurus right now! Moldyshorts (or bald-e-moron as my sister and I like to refer to him) is not allowed to get into Hogwarts!

Author's Response: OooH! It's okay- it's okay. Breathe... "Bald-e-moron"!? Nice. I like that one. And yeah, I know, he's not technically allowed to get onto the property, but, come on- how else would i have created that plotpoint?! Poetic license.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/01/08 18:37
Chapter: Another Detention

Hey, would you mind terribly if I 'borrowed' that idea with the Lily assaulting Snape thing for my story? I would of course remember to leave all the credit of it to you in my authors note, but I just think it's a really nifty idea. You know, in the sixth book when Snape makes Harry go through all of those? Well wouldn't it be hilarious if he came across his mum in those? I mean, even Harry knows how rule-abiding Lily was.

Author's Response: *laughs hysterically* Oh my gosh!~ I would not mind a bit! As long as it's properly noted, that is. *laugh* That's the highest form of flattery- mimicry. Hehe. Tell me when it's up!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/01/08 18:24
Chapter: A Few Discussions

That was an awesome few chapters! I had a feeling Stacey was a no-good--hemhem--never mind. Yeah, I had noticed that James Sirius and Remus all end in 's', and Peter doesn't, and I say it's because Peter is a little rat that can go and jump off a cliff!

Author's Response: Ouch.. that's harsh. Be fair- Peter hasn't betrayed anyone yet. But yeah- glad you liked them all.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/31/08 18:57
Chapter: The Fight and the Punishment

Hehehehe. Snape got what was coming to him! Lily and James didn't deserve detention! Snape should have gotten way more points taken away, and at least a weeks worth of detention for saying that to Lily! Little git...

Author's Response: Eh- they still fought, so they deserved something. Plus, I need to get those detentions in there. They're fun. :D And he did get detention- I just never wrote about 'em.

Reviewer: johnnydepplvr
Date: 05/31/08 17:33
Chapter: The American

i agree with u 100%

Author's Response: About what? Being American?

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/31/08 13:41
Chapter: Back at Hogwarts

I really like this story! You're one of maybe three authors that I've read stories from that actually puts the heads in a dormitory of their own! And James is soooooo lazy! He won't even get off his a$$ to do rounds with Lily without being told twice...or more

Author's Response: Yeah, I think i kinda stole that idea- it's not a canon thing- but I liked it, so.... :DrnrnYup= it's James. He's a guy. What do you expect?

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/31/08 13:28
Chapter: The Trainride

Everyone knows they like eachother, even if it's supposed to be a secret. Okay, so for James it's not so secret, but Lily, oh boy! I can't wait to see how James wins her over in this story! It seems to be different in every story, and it just keeps getting more and more exciting!

Author's Response: Haha- it's good that it's different. If It wasn't, it would be kinda bad... and boring.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/31/08 13:22
Chapter: The Unbelievable Head

Actually, I've read that you didn't have to be a prefect to be head boy or girl. The story's really good so far, and I can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks much! Glad you liked it- I did too.

Reviewer: Accio Brain
Date: 05/27/08 15:51
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love the The Princess Bride reference! This was a really fun chapter!

Reviewer: Accio Brain
Date: 05/26/08 18:17
Chapter: Betrayal

Oh my goodness! This chapter was awesome!

Reviewer: SIngingBrdwy
Date: 05/12/08 16:38
Chapter: More Bad News

Very good ending! I liked that!

Author's Response: Hehe. Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: liliana-rosy-daykin
Date: 05/12/08 8:56
Chapter: The End

I liked this fic a is entertainig, humorous, romantic, and makes o very good reading.

Reviewer: SIngingBrdwy
Date: 05/11/08 8:01
Chapter: More Bad News

hey, emily! ive sent u a few email before....but after rereading this chapter, i realized what an amazing author u are. thank u!

Author's Response: Awww! Thank you!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/01/08 10:46
Chapter: Conversations

I like how you go on about your NitPicker. XD
I'm a girl, sorry. XD

Author's Response: Haha. He's a crazy guy. :-DrnThanks! Glad to hear that you're a girl.

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