Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/12/12 4:24
Chapter: The End

im really mad at you cause you didnt put a formal proposal in there you know, with all of their friends? thats how james potter would do it, wouldnt it be?

Reviewer: Gone_2_Honeydukes
Date: 02/23/12 3:45
Chapter: The End

Wow! Just finished this story, and it's fantastic! It's definitely one of the better Marauder - era stories I've read. There were definitely a lot of great plot highlights, and I love how you didn't leave the darker action until the end, but focused more on the finality of the end of their year and their lives after Hogwarts; it feels a lot more appropriate. You're a really talented writer, and stay quite true to the series without sacrificing originality. Your original characters are well thought out and dynamic, and I'm glad Nikeia isn't your typical Mary Sue. She's really unique and her personality suits Sirius so well.
Anyway, I commend you on a fantastic story, it lessens the pain of the series being over :)

Reviewer: Weekendallstars
Date: 02/08/12 6:09
Chapter: The End

I loved this story so much!! You did such a great job it was amazing!!! I'm a freshman just like u were & I'm about to start my first fan fic!

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 11/22/11 2:57
Chapter: The American

Is it just me or did you go back and make a bunch of changes? Like everybody's last names and some chapters and stuff? O.o

Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/03/11 14:22
Chapter: Conversations

Nimbus 2000 only came out when Harry was 11, so you sorta messed up with time there, but in a nutshell, I love it.

Author's Response: Which is exactly why James has a Nimbus 1001... and not a 2000. I did look up broom companies, and assumed that the Nimbus group was around when James was a kid, so..... And thank you so much! Glad you love it. ;D

Reviewer: JamesAndLilyRomance
Date: 08/01/11 15:25
Chapter: America, Anyone?

What happened to Sirius turning into a rabbit?

Author's Response: Oh, it's totally still in there! He never turns into a full rabbit, just gets the ears, the tail and the button nose, even in the original story.

Reviewer: JamesAndLilyRomance
Date: 08/01/11 0:19
Chapter: I Hereby Dub Thee

What happened to Antoine? (sorry if I spelt wrong) I don'teanto be rude, but I liked the original story better

Author's Response: Ah ha ha hah! I know what you're talking about. Antoine wasn't ever in this chapter, even in the original. I realized that right as I finished editing; that I had totally forgotten that there were six boys in the seventh year Gryff dorm. He's included in the dorm sometimes, but at others, I totally only thought of the Marauders and Frank. Sorry about that. :( As for liking the original, I'd love to know what you liked more about the original and what don't you like about the newer. Please tell me!

Reviewer: JamesAndLilyRomance
Date: 08/01/11 0:19
Chapter: I Hereby Dub Thee

What happened to Antoine? (sorry if I spelt wrong) I don'teanto be rude, but I liked the original story better

Author's Response: Antoine's still there. Where have you been missing him?

Reviewer: JamesAndLilyRomance
Date: 07/31/11 2:26
Chapter: The Unbelievable Head

Love the new improvements. Ps I'm one of the few men who actually read this.

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 07/23/11 9:46
Chapter: Bad News

I don't have anything against they way Lily's parents died, but JKR did say in an interview once that James and Lily's parents died "non-sinister deaths" (or something like that), to eliminate Harry's grandparents deaths from the plot. I read that to mean that they weren't murdered, but to each his own :) lovely story!

Author's Response: Huh.... Honestly, I've never read that. So, while I knew James's parents just died, I didn't know anything about Lily's parents. It's really not my favorite thing about the story, but..... Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: volleyballgurl101508
Date: 07/18/11 20:36
Chapter: The Unbelievable Head

I've had this story bookmarked for quite some time, and just re-read it. If it wasn't for all the snape insults and the death of Lily and James' parents I'd swear you were J.K Rowling in disguise. You're a truly talented author, and this story is exactly what I had imagined James and Lily's school years to be

Author's Response: AWWWW!!! That totally makes my day! Thank you so much. ;D "Aside from the Snape insults". Teehee. Really, think about it... If JKR actually wrote a Marauder-era story, she'd have to thrown in a few good insults of Snape. As far as the parents go... I wasn't big on it when I looked back at it, but since Harry doesn't go to his grandparents, they had to be gotten rid of... somehow. Sigh.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 07/06/11 12:58
Chapter: Beside the Lake

That was really sweet, with Frank and Alice - it really made it seem like I was there!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 07/05/11 11:38
Chapter: Back at Hogwarts

As always, well written and enjoyable. I particualarly liked the last chapter, but there was one thing I didn't think was canon - Snape continuously insulting Lily. He made a mistake once, and hated himself after that. He loved her for the rest of his life - the last thing he did was he wanted to see Lily's eyes look at him. I don't think he would have done that, and I don't think she would have punched him. Good writing anyways, though. =)

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 07/05/11 9:15
Chapter: The Trainride

I liked the part when the kids were discussing James and Lily. It was sweet and I liked it very much. =)

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/06/11 14:20
Chapter: The American

we aren't different from the rst of the world, the rest of the wold is different from us.


Reviewer: stacey_elayne
Date: 05/12/11 3:27
Chapter: The American

Lol no offense taken. I have a friend in Australia who finds me a bit odd at times.

Reviewer: Potty4Weasley
Date: 04/22/11 20:06
Chapter: Back at Hogwarts

Hi, the story is great so far!!!!!! Butyou're right, the dorm has got me confused. i tried to find your Bio but it didn't ive me your email, or i ahd the wrong thing. But i'd be keen to look at the blueprints :) Anyway ill keep reading, because i am really anjoting it :)

Reviewer: JamesAndLilyRomance
Date: 04/06/11 8:03
Chapter: Conversations

I am a man who likes reading this!

Reviewer: goldensunshine
Date: 03/04/11 20:18
Chapter: The End

First, I must say that you are an amazing and imaginative author. Through all the tomatoes thrown and tears shed you have had such a great spirit and appreciation for betas and readers. Thank you so much for writing a beautiful and complete story.
Second, I completely agree with the whole Remus and Jo thing. It was too cliche and wouldn't have worked out although I am a huge fan of cliched things. The Nikeia and Sirius however much sense it may make will cause many a gritting of teeth.
With Gratitude,
P.S. Nitwit… oddment… blubber, and tweak

Reviewer: ArcanusRose
Date: 02/26/11 11:11
Chapter: The End

I can't believe it's over..... *sobs* so freakin' sweet. Is it too much to ask for more?

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