Reviews For Through the Fire
Reviewer: DannieR_luver
Date: 07/12/05 21:57
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!I absolutely loved this chappie!Your longest one,but definitely your best!It actually sounds like it was written by J.K. Rowling herself!I swear, I was crossing my fingers from the time when Harry entered Hogwarts to the time he woke up!I give this chapter,no this story a 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10!u r a total 0=)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/12/05 19:42
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

I have tried to review this story several times but I have had trouble logging in a lot. Anyways, excellent job. AMAZING! Brilliant. I can't even find words to describe how much I love this story. Can we hope for a sequel? Do you have any other stories? You totally rock. Peace, Sauce

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/12/05 17:00
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

this story is really cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 07/12/05 14:51
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

Iarehampster is back, and...I am not lame in the sack? That works, because it is the truth, lol!!! Well, now that the fic is over, I need to write the lingest review, because I need to. First off, I love the depiction of Hogwarts during the Final Battle, felt like the Jedi Temple in Star Wars Episode III. Your depiction of Malfoy is perfect!!!!! I am sad that the fic is over, one question, what about the Epilogue, you mentioned something about it, or is that going to come with PWF or what? When all the Hogwarts students came a very classic sort of Super hero song started ringing in my head. The Wizard League, better than the Justice League, the Wizards League!!!! HBP is almost out!!! I hope withing the pages of that book JK will finally prove Harry and Hermione were ment to be!!!!!!!! Well, my question is answered. PWF is not a sequel to OLAD, but I'm so excited about it, when can I expect it? Can't wait till you release it. Also, is there like an Oscars for Mugglenet Fan Fics, like best for each catagory or something, if so, I would totally nominate this fic!!!!Although School is over, I'm a little sad inside, why? SUMMER READING!!! I hate it, one book I got is sooooooo boring, I read it in one night so that I would get it over with. Oh well, at least I've read the books, all that remains is the reports for them, Godda***t! I liked the suspense with the fake Dumbledore death, very creepy!!!! The battle was awesome, the way you wrote was JK-ish, very cool as well. I don't think this shall be the longest review for this fic, but I think I still hold the record last time I checked... Well, I think I will just waste space by writing about useless stuff. Okay, here I go!! (Two hours later...)... and that is how I found my first penny!!! Well, nice ending, very happy. When you started writing about the dream, I got worried, I thought PWF will be the sequel!!! Happily though, that is not the case. I love the graphic writing you put into it, the blood and the throat and hermione, fantastically well written. Well space wasting time again: (Two hours later...)...and that is my most embarrising moment!!! When Harry left Ron and Hermione, it felt so movie-ish, with the dramatic music and Harry walking in slow motion. Very dramatic, in a way. I can't run out of things to say about this chapter, it is the best of all the chapters. Well I'll waste space one last time: (Another two hours later...)...and that is what happened at my first day at school. Well, post PWF as soon as you can, I'm patient. You rule, as always. Until you post PWF, I'll just read HBP(W00t!!), play Video Games, and e-mail friends!!! Stay Cool, and have a awesome summer!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, I definitely think you hold the record for the longest review. =D
The epilogue - for now, it's still tentatove whether I'll write one. I might get back to this and write it, but for the time being, that's the last chapter. =)
PWF - again, not soon. =( I'm rewriting it all over. Change of PoVs. Anyway, it won't be here until at least fall, maybe even Christmas.
I can definitely relate to the boring books. I don't get summer reading, thank God, but we do have to read during the school year. One of my books for this year, tittled 'El Poema Del Mio Cid', is actually a gigantic poem. The book is like 250+ pages! And it's written in this fancy, middle-age spanish that I do not get at all. * rolls eyes * School sucks.
Hehe, glad you liked the suspense in that part. For that matter, I'm glad it was credible. =)
I liked writing that dream sequence. It's one of Harry's worst fears, and I got to write in a style that's a bit more darker than my usual stuff.
Lol, I imagined a lot of parts from this chapter as movie sequences. Like at the end, when Hermione was holding Harry as the curse hit him, I imagined that sound, like his heart thumping, and flashes of what was going on...very cool, lol. =D
Glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and the whole story, for that matter. =D Thanks so much!
w00t, HBP in 3 days!

Reviewer: XoDramaCutieXo
Date: 07/12/05 12:20
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

Oh....my.....goodness! That was....AMAZING! I have to say that my heart was pounding the whole time and when I read about Dumbledore...then Harry getting hit, omg I was crying! OMG OMG OMG! Amazing! And you really helped me with this chapter. I've been stuck writing the Final Battle in my fan fiction and your story helped me! Thanks and oh...my....gosh....AMAZING! I loved this whole story! Its a shame its over, I really like it! Excellent job! Love DramaCutie

Author's Response: I'm glad the Dumbledore bit was convincing. I thought it would be too obvious that it was a trick, but then again, to me nothing in the story was ever a mystery, obviously. =)
I'm glad I helped. I drew my own inspiration from other fics that include the Final Battle, and I agree, it can be an enormous advantage.
Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bubbliepeaches
Date: 07/12/05 11:23
Chapter: It All Comes Down To This...

wow! omg that i have to say was amazing! and im the first to review it. you did a terrific job i only wish that this was the real book it was so well writtin WOW good job and dont stop writing im looking forward to reading new storys of yours!!!!

Author's Response: Hey, the first review for the last chapter. =D Thank you very much! I'm extremely glad that you liked it; I was a little worried about the ending.
I'll be writing more stories, but for now, I'm just taking a break. You can read the other one-shots I've written, though, if you're still looking for other stuff by me. =)
Thanks again!

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/11/05 22:45
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

hi i dont have anything to write

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/11/05 22:39
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

this is the best story iv ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and since im a H/HR person i really liked it

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/11/05 22:35
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

this story is really cool though iv gotta admit it was better when ron was angry @ them

Author's Response: You think so? I beg to differ, my friend. =) But nevertheless, thanks for reading! Glad you like the story!

Reviewer: hpfannaticalltheway
Date: 07/10/05 3:52
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

ooooooooooo final battle coming up! the big question, willl Harry live or die? I'm hoping he lives, but then it would be awesome if he died, and really, well, er, deep, i suppose? looking forward to hbp but want to read all the fanfic on mugglenet first (which i know is impossible since i tried to do that a while ago but its just too hard because u find that u really love a story but its really long, and then it takes ages to read and u get obsessed with it and can't read anything else...well you get my point! This story was one of those, and was probably the second story i eva read on mugglenet!) wow that was a long bracket! soz im like hypped on caffine and yeah i have to go to skool tomoz but i dont want to and i dont want to go on thursday either (worst days with subjects, u know)anyways om blabbing on and on and on but u know its because of the cafine, right? anyways i thought this chapter rocked! by the way, r u still going to look into betaring that story i sent u a while ago?its ok if ure not going to but i was just wondering.i dont know that i would be able to just let go if i was ron! if the person i loved didn't love me but was with me and then cheated on me, i think that i would be unable to forgive them eva, even though i would probably move on and have other relationships, i would neva be able to be friends with them still! but then, this is the golden trio, the special cases! i don't know mb i would be able to. anyways this derseves way more than a ten! (even though i found quite a few typo's like u writing her instead of him, like "he wrapped her arms around her" etc etc.)

Author's Response: Well, I think you've already read the last chapter, but if not--spoiler alert!.
I suppose it would've been deep if Harry did die, but I couldn't do that to poor Hermione. And he'd just mad eup with Ron...I tried to, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. =)
I'll beta your story soon...I'm sorry I haven't. I was working on finishing this one, and just enjoying summer.
Well, maybe in reality it would have been different for Ron. Like, if he lived in a normal world, there wouldn't be any mortal peril threatening all of their lives...that kind of thing really changes your way of viewing things, you know? Knowing that Harry, his best mate, or any one of them, could die soon made him realize that there are other, more important things, to worry about.
In a world such as ours, it might have taken him a longer time to realize that, and forgive them.
Anyway, thanks for the review, and for reading!

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/09/05 0:34
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

this story is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: IXIHawkeyeIXI
Date: 07/08/05 9:22
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

Wow. I am so glad I happened to stumble upon this webiste a week or two ago. This has instantly become my favorite story on this website. You do a great job of capturing the characters, I feel as though I am actually reading a Harry Potter book. Sorry this is such a short review, but all in all I just wanted to say that you're doing a great job, and though I will be sad when the story is over, I look forward to seeing how you end it. Hawkeye.

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry about it being short--what you say is what matters. =)
And, speaking of which, thanks very much! I have learned a lot while writing this fic, and I'm still amazed that so many people like it. =) I never pictured myself as a 'good' writer. I am honored that this seems like a HP book to you (and to so many others--I've been getting that a lot). Really, I'm flattered.
Thanks again!

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 07/08/05 9:01
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

W00t!!! Iarehampster is here, and I like to...drink beer? No, that doesn't work either, DANG!!! Good chapter, Hermione uses a formula that I used as well, when I'm angry about something, I say nothing, I just stand there and nod or shake my head. You put so much realism to the romance. So many times these romance fics have sounded to much like fairy tales. But you make each character act like they do in the books. I have a hunch that the final battle shall either happen at the minestry or at Hogwarts, not just at Hogwarts, but inside Hogwarts, all those rooms to fight in, but I know it shall be a cool battle. One more week in Germany then I'm off on the road back to America, then my reviews shall not be late anymore. Those login errors, happen to me all the time, it really gets annoying. Before HBP huh? I was really annoyed with the guesses from the staff about HBP, no H/Hr shiipers. ARRRGGGHHHH, Hermione sooooo wants Harry, although Ginny is my next choice, but a very distant second place. Hermione is the front runner by a long shot. Keep up the awesome work, HBP doesn't come out until I'm back in the so maybe I could get the first review again, w00t! Well, rock on, don't do drugs, and update when you want to, I'll be waiting until then.

Reviewer: bubbliepeaches
Date: 07/07/05 21:23
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

wow i just happend to read this on the day it came out im soooo happy i really love the way you write and im happy the way the story is going i have been waiting forever for this chapter and it was worth it!!! im so glad the way you wrote the whole story and i hope that the *love triangle* is really what happens in the book!! wow i cant wait until the final chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: iuli12
Date: 07/07/05 21:00
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

GREAT chapter!!!! luvd it. i'm so happy you updated!!!!! i also read your one-shot 'Lips and Reason', also one of the best fics i have read!!!!! looking forward to your next update!!! plz let it be soon. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

Reviewer: DannieR_luver
Date: 07/07/05 18:42
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwww,they're friends again!you should totally write a sequel,and tell what harry and hermiones life is after the FINAL BATTLE.oooooooo,i'm so excited!!!!!!keep up the good work,and your rating is...*drumroll*100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10. u r a total 0=)!!!!!! ~Jacky

Reviewer: 0 IcePrincess 0
Date: 07/07/05 16:33
Chapter: The Good and The Bad

Awsome Awsome Awsome total 1000000000000000000000000000000/10 Keep updating. Oh and i put a little thing about this story in my bio i hope you dont mind. AGAIN KEEP UPDATING i need this story to end before a personally go to your home and make you write the rest. LOVE it All Hail Dracos wife(LoL) 0 IcePrincess 0

Reviewer: rupertfan
Date: 07/06/05 1:21
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

it was pretty cool but nasty and me and my friend want 2 know wat happens 2 ron

Reviewer: HermioneandHarryShipper
Date: 07/05/05 19:13
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

This is the BEST H/Hr fanfic I have ever read. It captures your attention and doesnt let go! I LOVE IT! Keep updating!!

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 07/05/05 8:44
Chapter: Expect the Unexpected

great story i couldnt put it down when i started to read it. keep goin and update soon

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