Reviews For Through the Fire
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 01/19/05 15:48
Chapter: Bliss...

Great Story! Great Banner!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like this next chaper. =)

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 01/18/05 16:16
Chapter: The Masked Ball

They are like 17 and they are getting married? ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?!?!? Aside from that it's agreat story. I feel so bad for Ron

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, I guess so. I never really found that odd...they're in love. And besides, they are just engaged. It could be a long time before they marry, you know. =)
Ron is a very miserable character in my fic. I feel sorry for him, too when I write, but I favor H/Hr, so, Ron will just have to take all that for the sake of my fic. =D
Thanks, and I hope you continue reading.

Reviewer: smartashermioneiluvher
Date: 01/18/05 5:01
Chapter: The Letter

i love this but i am afraed that hermione ends up with someone else other than harry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: What do you mean? :S Hermione is firmly staying with Harry. She isn't going anywhere, and no one else will win her over now. =D
Thanks!

Reviewer: MissAmanda
Date: 01/17/05 20:55
Chapter: The Letter

Awesome job! I swear, I love your story. The only thing wrong is you don't update enough! Keep up the Good Work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it. =)
Ah, well....that's the result of being a student packed with homework and having a tendency to take a whole day writing a mere third of a chapter. =D I really wish I could update sooner...I really would. But, school comes first for me. =(
Thanks!1 I hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Juicy_Couture
Date: 01/17/05 20:43
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Wow. It took me two days to read the first chapter. I'll review more! Great job!

Author's Response: Lol! You got there in the end, though. That's what matters. =)
Yay! I hope you do. =)
Thanks!

Reviewer: mudblood79
Date: 01/17/05 12:59
Chapter: The Letter

"Her daughter wasn’t even engaged, and she was already thinking about grandchildren? Talk about overeager…and people think teenagers are the ones that rush into things." That reminds me so much of my ex-girlfriends Parents.

Author's Response: Hehe....there's loads of people like Hermione's parents, I bet. That's not such a rare thing to see. =)
Thanks for reading! I hope you continue to do so.

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/17/05 0:02
Chapter: The Letter

w00t!Unlike my usual comments I'd like to say this. It is quite amazing what emotion you put into your chapters. I'm not sure if this is how you wanted to display Harry but here's how I see him. Harry isn't exactly the brightest bulb in the building, but he tries to please Hermione, and thats all that matters! I would like to apologize about bringing my love life into these reviews. Reviews should not be written like that. I shall never mention Betsy Nass again... Now onto the usual comments. Yadda Yadda Yadda your fic rocks! Yadda Yadda Yadda Update Soon... No means of offense, but I really don't like these three word reviews. To me for a review you need lots of comments, and suggestions, I admit, I have done ONE three word review, but it was because my bro needed to use the Comp. for homework, but the next day I posted a more thourogh review. I only noticed one spelling error through the entire thing (Rona and...) but of course I probably make more spelling errors than anyone on Mugglenet, I live of of the Spell Checker!! Man are Hermione's parents As*hol**! First of they say that Ron would be a better husband, than they say that Hermione doesn't know what love is. The letter was written perfectly! No one could have done a better job if Jo Rowling wrote it herself! It's also pretty cool how you tell everyone when to expect the next update. So I shall end my review my usual way. Update Soon...

Author's Response: You see Harry perfectly, then. He's a bit off sometimes, but he tries his best to keep Hermione safe and happy. =) Isn't that sweet?
It's okay, you made me laugh with that. =D That's perfectly okay, don't worry.
I agree. I personally like long reviews that offer a lot of thoughts towards what happened in the fic, and that point out things that perhaps aren't written, but are hinted, you know? Your reviews are great, by the way. =)
You'd be surprised how much help I get from the Spell Checker. I make misspellings like that one you pointed out all the time. =D The thesaurus rocls too, when I can't think of a different word.
Thanks! I tried my best to make the letter seem realistic enough...I wanted her parents to seem very controlling of her life and disdainful towards her judgment. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks again!

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/13/05 22:12
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Sorry about submitting the review twice, didn't know if it had posted it or not, oh well!

Author's Response: Lol, that's fine. =D

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/13/05 22:10
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

I just don't think Harry can die. If he dies, Voldemort will live forever, like the prophecy said, Neither can live while the other survives... If harry DOES Die, then there should be some romance between H and Hr., I'm NOT talking about going all the way. Just one of those big Romantic Kisses like in the movies. Ya know, like the Alley Way one in Spiderman, and that kiss Anakin and Padme' shared when they got married, one of those nice long ones... (MMM...Betsy yeah...MMM) Huhhh? What? Was I just fantacizing/dreaming about the girl that I drool at every time she walks by me in the hall? I-! UH-! Da-! ER-! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You Heard Nothing! Nothing I Say! *Ahem* Sorry about that episode I just had. Anyway I still don't think Harry Will die, but of course even if Harry dies, if He and Hermione share a bit of Romance before his final hour it would still be a Harry/Hermione fic... Hmmm... Anyway, I'll ponder that, and good luck in school! I just had to type up a science report and a History report, IN THE SAME NIGHT! I know how it feels to have school work overwhelm you so that you can't do the things you like, like in my free time I play Final Fantasy X-2 (w00t!), work on my Transformers Fan Fic, Dream about Betsy... Anyway, update as soon as you can!

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/13/05 22:10
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

I just don't think Harry can die. If he dies, Voldemort will live forever, like the prophecy said, Neither can live while the other survives... If harry DOES Die, then there should be some romance between H and Hr., I'm NOT talking about going all the way. Just one of those big Romantic Kisses like in the movies. Ya know, like the Alley Way one in Spiderman, and that kiss Anakin and Padme' shared when they got married, one of those nice long ones... (MMM...Betsy yeah...MMM) Huhhh? What? Was I just fantacizing/dreaming about the girl that I drool at every time she walks by me in the hall? I-! UH-! Da-! ER-! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You Heard Nothing! Nothing I Say! *Ahem* Sorry about that episode I just had. Anyway I still don't think Harry Will die, but of course even if Harry dies, if He and Hermione share a bit of Romance before his final hour it would still be a Harry/Hermione fic... Hmmm... Anyway, I'll ponder that, and good luck in school! I just had to type up a science report and a History report, IN THE SAME NIGHT! I know how it feels to have school work overwhelm you so that you can't do the things you like, like in my free time I play Final Fantasy X-2 (w00t!), work on my Transformers Fan Fic, Dream about Betsy... Anyway, update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: Well, I would love to tell you what I have in mind, but I can't cos if I do indeed decide to kill off Harry, then you will already know what I'm going to do. =D So...we'll just wait and see.
Yes, those are the kind of, passionate, heroic kisses people always share in the movies after/before they face a terrible villain/situation. =D Daydreaming is perfectly normal, thank you very much. * Ahem * Not that I day dream about anyone, of course. I was just saying... =D
Thanks! Can you believe I have three (and possibly four) tests this week? And it's the SECOND WEEK. Honestly, my teachers are mental. =(

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 01/12/05 10:08
Chapter: Haunted

It's still good despite the lack of H and Hr. That's one of the hardest things in my story, trying to keep the story going while trying to build up a romance. But, you do it so well. Props to you.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's kind of hard. I'm trying to develop this other part of the storyline that I worked on chapter seven, but, being a H/hr fic, I have to give the romanticism some space, too. It's good to know that you think I'm doing well, thank you! That way, I can try to keep it this way. =)
Thanks again!

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 01/12/05 10:01
Chapter: Bliss...

I'm loving it, you are doing so well. I give it a 20 out of 10!

Author's Response: w00t! Thanks! =D

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 01/12/05 9:51
Chapter: Villains Arise

This may seem like a strange question, but please answer honestly. Are you one of the people who are a fan of Harry dying? People think I am crazy because I absolutely am for his death, despite the fact that he is one of my favorite characters and I love him to death. I love your story, you have a great writing style!

Author's Response: It's not a strange wuestion at all, don't worry. =) Yes, I am. I just think that there's too many stories with the hero triumphing against evil magestically.

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 01/12/05 9:39
Chapter: The Poisonous Prediction

I'm totally loving it. Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/11/05 0:20
Chapter: Haunted

Sorry about submiting a review fro ch.1, this review system is kinda screwy. My last review was for chapter 7. Sorry for the confusion...

Author's Response: No problem...I didn't even notice until I read this one. =D

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 01/10/05 19:42
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Sorry about the late review, it's just I was skiing up at winter park. Anyway, to my review. It doesn't matter if there is no H/Hr in this chapter, I just hope that there is some H/Hr in the next chapter. It is a bit odd that Trelawney and Pettigrew have joined forces, but I suspect you have something up you're sleeve... Anyway Update soon...

Author's Response: No problem, the fact that you reviewed anyway is what matters. =) Yes, there will be some H/hr in the next chapter, though it won't be the center of attention. Someone screwed up, I'm afraid. Can we guess who? =D
Well, as I said in the end of the chapter, they both helped each other with their own interests at heart. We'll see what happens next. =D
My next update will take a bit longer cos school's started again for me...so I won't have much time to write. I'll try, though!

Reviewer: smartashermioneiluvher
Date: 01/09/05 14:32
Chapter: Haunted

i like it but i was waiting for alittle love!!!!yet this is still my favorite story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ah well...I think I might get some love in for the next chapter, though it won't be the center of attention. They'll have their hands full with other things. =D
I'm glad you like the story! Thanks!

Reviewer: BestReviewer
Date: 01/09/05 12:20
Chapter: Bliss...

*applauds* very amazing sotry, i absolutely love it...if anyone tells you your story is bad or your not a good writer, don't you pay any attention to them,your a beautiful writer, always remember that. 10/10 BestReviewer

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! =)
As for flames, I've only gotten one up till now, and I found it ridiculously funny. =D So, you needen't worry about my reaction to bad reviews.
Aww...thanks! =) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: hplover21
Date: 01/08/05 12:58
Chapter: Bliss...

i absalutly love the banner!!!! u did a great job on it

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. =)

Reviewer: hplover21
Date: 01/07/05 14:48
Chapter: Bliss...

i had a couple of other stories that i got hooked on, but this story once i start reading i cant get off the computer. my mom will be telling me to get off and i'll be telling her to come back in a half an hour... anyway yes dumbledore was excellent. great job with harry and hermione. there's one thing i dont get though when harry and hermione were walking down the hall to talk to dumbledore why was hermione so upset about accidently landing on harry? i mean it was just an accident. she didnt mean to. well anyways take your time on updating and u are doing an awsome job with the story.

Author's Response: Lol! That happens to me a lot when I write (and read) fics. =D
I'm glad you liked my Dumbledore and Harry and Hermione.
Hermione was worried because she felt ashamed about what she had felt. When she fell on top of Harry, she had liked how it felt, and she wasn't prepared to feel such a thing. She was wanting to kiss Harry more and more, and she wanted him to touch her, and kiss her back. Being the rational Hermione she is, she felt ashamed because she thought she was lusting after Harry.
I'm glad you think I'm doing an awesome job! Thanks so much!

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