Reviews For Through the Fire
Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 03/02/05 23:50
Chapter: Bliss...

Aww...that's a very,very good chapter! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10! 10!!!

Author's Response: Thanks again! Wow, that's a lot of tens...* stares in awe *

Reviewer: Firebolt_91
Date: 03/02/05 23:48
Chapter: Worries, threats, and promises

That's a good chapter!!! 10 10 10!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 03/02/05 15:53
Chapter: Dream

Wow. You're good. You're really good.

Author's Response: * Nods * Well, duh! Lol, jk. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Ronsbiggestfan09
Date: 02/23/05 19:20
Chapter: Villains Arise

omg! you are such a talented writer. this story is so incredibly good! its leaves you hanging! i have almost cried about a million times! keep up the good work! 15/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much! You have? Wow, that's...great. I know I'm doing something right if the emotion in the story reached you like that. =) Thanks!

Reviewer: Peregrin
Date: 02/22/05 14:37
Chapter: I Need You...

Yet another wonderful chapter! You added just the right amount of "fluff" to the story, and kept the suspense level high enough to keep my attention! (Oh, and I have a lot of time on my hands because I don't have a 4th period at my school so I sit in the media center on the internet for an hour and a half every day... fun, right?)

Author's Response: * Bows * Thanks! I'm glad you liked the way it was written. =)
That's cool, I wish I didn't have fourth period. That's math class and the teacher keeps yelling at us to shut up. Ugh, it get's so annoying...

Reviewer: smartashermioneiluvher
Date: 02/21/05 7:23
Chapter: I Need You...


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: elfgive
Date: 02/19/05 19:48
Chapter: I Need You...


Author's Response: No problem, as long as you reviewed. =D Thanks very much, I'm glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Dana_Weasley
Date: 02/18/05 15:39
Chapter: I Need You...

I love the lovey-dovey stuff!!!! This was a great chapter. Please, update soon.and more fluff, please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm afraid chater twelve lacks romance, but hey, we gotta have plot, too. =D

Reviewer: isskibum
Date: 02/16/05 22:27
Chapter: I Need You...

oh my gawd!!!! I absolutely love this!!! Please, please, PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter Twelve was submitted today [Mar/6] so it'll be up tomorrow, hopefully. =)

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 02/16/05 17:30
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Dangit! 101! I wanted to be the 100th reviewer guy, but I guess I was just short! Anyway onto my review! This chapter has really shocked me. You really turned it into a direction I didn't think it would go in, and I guess it's for the better! This fan fic would be so perfect as a movie, in my opinion. I also like how you give us heads-ups on when to expect the next chapter, I've saved fifteen minutes of my daily life because of those heads-uppers, because I used to check every 10 minutes or so, unless I had homework! Oh! Remember Betsy from one of my previous reviews, well it turns out she doesn't like me=( But! I have been heart-broken but not deafeated. I shall continue my role as the Fan Fic reviewer guy-person-dude! Anyway, take your time. In the mean time, I shall count of the days till HBP and play Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic. Also, did you see that picture that was shown on Bloomsbury's count down to HBP site. That picture with the name HARRY and a heart below it. I am out reaged that most people think Ginny wrote that! It was sooooo Hermione! Anyway, your fic rules, as always. Hope you update soon...

Author's Response: Aw, come on, you made history there. The first review after the 100th review. =D
I'm glad you like how the chappie went. After a Detention as gruesome as that, I simply couldn't see them walking around hand in hand like nothing happened. =)
Wow, every ten minutes? =O That's very frequent. =D
Poor you...but that's the spirit, you just keep on trying. Don't let yourself get defeated.
Yep, I saw the picture. I can't believe people think it was's definitely Hermione, who blamed it on Ginny to keep her love secret. =D

Reviewer: mudblood79
Date: 02/16/05 16:58
Chapter: I Need You...

You did a really good job. Speaking of writers block, I found a wonderful way of getting through it. I personally don't believe in writers block. Instead I think of it as the story trying to reach out to me. When I dont know what to write next, I take it upon myself to go back through and edit. Usually what happens is an idea pops into my head. Maybe you should try it. You did a really good job, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you. =) That's a good idea...I get through writer's block by reading back on my story and taking a break until I feel up to writing again.
I'll try your idea sometime, though. Thanks!

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 02/16/05 16:00
Chapter: I Need You...

Poor Hermione. First she has a vision which must be insane, seeing how she feels about them, than she has detention with Snape, ew, and now she is emotionally shot. GIVE HER A BREAK, WILL YOU!!! Just kidding. Hermione needs a little trauma. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Lol! Poor Hermione indeed. =D Though, I wouldn't have minded having a detention with Snape...the only bad thing about it was, well, the beetle's eyes. =D

Reviewer: mudblood79
Date: 02/16/05 15:40
Chapter: Dream

I'm defintely impressed with your writing style. Keep up the good work. Now on to Chapter 11

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: hermionelily
Date: 02/16/05 15:10
Chapter: I Need You...

That was wonderful! Please update soon, this is a great fanfic

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I am, however, puzzled, because at the time you submitted this review, this chapter was chopped in half, meaning that not all of it was posted. =S
I am, however, honored that you consider even half of a chapter fantastic. =D

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 02/15/05 15:58
Chapter: Dream

i so wana no wot the prophecy is, or maybe i dnt, oh wot the hell! i dnt no! that was a brilliantly cafted chapter, i cant w8 4 a harry/ron conflict! hope u get the nxt 1 up soon! with indying faith (well, not really), james

Author's Response: Ahh, the first reviewer to express that wish. =D * Tries to shut herself up, but can't * You will see the prophecy in a later chapter, so don't fret about that.
The Harry/Ron conflict...well, just think about it this way: both boys just want to avoid speaking to the other, and if Harry were to be presented with the choice of beating up Ron or rushing to the aid of his loved one, what is he most likely to do? =)
I actually re-submitted today (Feb/15), so it might be up later today or, hopefully, tomorrow.
Thanks for reviewing! I'm very glad you like the story, and I hope you continue reading!

Reviewer: Peregrin
Date: 02/15/05 14:05
Chapter: Dream

I swear, I read every chapter in your story in a single day! I'm hooked! I think you put in a good balance of romance and suspense, but I am looking forward to a little lovin' in the next chapter! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Author's Response: Wow, that's awesome! You must've had some free time, huh? =D Thanks very much; I like my story to be romantic, but not just fluff. There has to be something to keep the plotline going, right?
Ahh, don't worry. Chapter Eleven is romance-friendly. =)
Thanks very much! I'm glad you like the story, and I look forward to hearing more from you. =)

Reviewer: kime
Date: 02/14/05 15:57
Chapter: Dream

Great chappie and hurry with your next update. I need to know what happens...

Author's Response: Thanks! I updated on Feb/15, so it should be up around today or tomorrow. =)

Reviewer: Dana_Weasley
Date: 02/13/05 17:08
Chapter: Dream

I love this story!!!! That cliffie is gonna bug me until you write the next chapter... I should have reviewed sooner, but I couldn't stop reading until I hit the 10th chapter. Please hurry!!! I need to know what happens next.

Author's Response: No problem about reviewing until the tenth chapter. =) As long as you review sometime, I'm happy. =D
I re-submitted chapter eleven on Feb/15, because it had been rejected due to incorrect dialogue punctuation (It's commas, not periods, at the end. Ex. "The dog is there," She said, "Put the leash around it!" No wonder the HP books were always like that! =D )
Anyway, it ought to be up soon. =) Thanks, and I hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: elfgive
Date: 02/11/05 16:55
Chapter: Worries, threats, and promises

excellent. I read these two chapters in four days

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you've kept reading the next chapters. =)

Reviewer: XoDramaCutieXo
Date: 02/05/05 10:37
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

I have to tell you that I love this story more than any of the other stories on this entire website! I've been following it forever and I check everyday to see if you've updated! Please continue and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm very flattered. =)
Oh my God, every day? Are you serious? Argh, now I feel bad. =D I take about a week on my chapters, usually, so I'd advise you not to check everyday. I took an extra-long time on chapter eleven, I'm afraid, but that isn't normal, I assure you. I got a writer's block, and I couldn't get it finished quickly.
Again, thank you so much! I'm very glad you like the story. =)

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