Reviews For Through the Fire
Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/31/05 18:15
Chapter: Through the Fog

Your story is so extremely wonderful, fantastic, brilliant, great, and...right now I can't think of any other good words. I also left a review similar to this portkey.com, but under a different name. I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!! Keep it up! (I express my regrets on Kingsley's death, though.)

Author's Response: Yipee! Lol, thanks very much! Yes, I saw your review there too, so thanks again!
As for Kingsley, well...it had to happen. =( Sorry.

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 05/31/05 17:36
Chapter: Through the Fog

How many times will Hermione and Harry go half way? Eh...oh well. Although it doesn't matter in my opinion, maybe they should have gone skinny dipping? Maybe? Sorry...this was a fun chapter. Poor Kingsley, he just had to die. But the end was good, those one sentence paragraphs. Alot of Foreshadowing me thinks. On a completely random note...I SAW STAR WARS EPISODE III. WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Good film, it is! Anyway, back to the fic. I don't know about British Easter, in America it always changes. Actually, I have one more question, it is not about the fic, but it has been bugging me. Does Harry Potter take place in like the 80's or something? Because in 2004 Ron is supposed to be like 25, am I mssing something? Back to the fic. This chapter was quite romantic and quite cool. I like some action and death in books, gives it a little more realism for some odd reason. Man I would love to have a romantic place like that. Just be there, with that special someone...mmmmm...Sorry, just fantisizing about it. Well, keep up the good work. It seems like it is almost over. I'm guessing about three to four more chapters and then... PWF!!!!!! Also, my fic shall be extremely delayed because I found to many loopholes in it and I have a little crisis that I can only solve myself, Perhaps when it is over I can tell you what it was. Also, I'm just to lazy to change the loopholes in it, so I will most likely do a short two-shot or one-shot fic. Well, take your time as always, I'm patient and have a rockin summer!!!!

Author's Response: Haha, poor you. But they'll go all the way before the story is over, if that's any consolement. =)
D'you know, I actually considered sending them skinny dipping? But my good side ruled in the end. Maybe next time.
Haven't seen Star Wars yet. *scowls* But I will soon, I've just been so effing busy...
Harry Potter...well, his first year takes place in 1991, so the books take place in the 90's. Yep, in 2005 they would be turning 25.
Indeed. After chapter eighteen, if all goes as planned, there'll be two more chapters plus an epilogue, and it's over. =)
Lol, PWF has a bit of a crisis as well. I need to get a crucial detail sorted before I can get on writing it (I've gotten the prologue + the first three chapters done). It's very different from OLAD, which makes it interesting. Harry in that story is much more mature, and sees the world in a very different way than he does in this one. He's been through a lot, the poor guy.
Well, thanks again! Have a great summer!

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 05/31/05 17:03
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

This story is amazing. All of the plots are linked together in one way or another. Please update sooner. And FYI Easter begins after the first full moon in the equinox.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, everything turns out to be intertwined in my story. A lot of times, as you've probably noticed, most things happen as a consequence of another thing that happened in a different plot. (Did that make sense?)
And thank you very much for the info. on Easter. Very helpful. =) Cheers!

Reviewer: DannieR_luver
Date: 05/29/05 23:00
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

This is my absolute FAVORITE story!!!SUBMIT,plz=). You are a total 0=)!!! I would give this a 100 if I could!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!
You know, you read this story at a perfect time. You finshed yesterday, and it just so happens that today (May 30th) I updated!
Also, you sent me an e-mail, didn't you? =) Again, thanks very much, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 05/29/05 20:21
Chapter: The Letter

fist off i'd like to say im sorry and i hope you forgive me. i was wrong, im sorry i judged your story. your right its not all fluff ( and i know that) im glad i gave this story another chance, and i hope you forgive me. you are an extremely taleted writer and i can't wait to keep reading. P.S. my other reveiw was not meant to be rude, im sorry again, very good story and im going to keep reading. P.P.S. i really like how much you make me feel like its a real HP book.

Author's Response: I'm glad you gave the story a chance. In the chapters you're reading, romance isn't the high point, but it picks up, I promise.
I'm glad you feel like its a HP book. I'd never compare it with Jo's work (she's tons beter, obviously), but still, thank you very much. =)
I hope you keep reading, and thanks again!

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/25/05 15:47
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

still a great story!! also, good luck on ur finals!! lol, i should be studying for mine right now

Author's Response: Thanks! I think I did well on my finals. I hope so, anyway. I worked my butt off studying, lol.
Good luck to you, too!

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/25/05 15:38
Chapter: Appearances Can Be Deceiving

luv it!! i was startin to miss the romnce!

Author's Response: Hehe, me too, honestly. =D Romance loosens hings a little, makes the story more fun to write.
Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: hpfannaticalltheway
Date: 05/21/05 23:38
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

hey ive just found this site and ure story is the first i have read all of so far and i think its great! i love the plot and its just great! a friend of mine and myself actually had an idea to write something like that but ures is way better! i love the story can't wait 4 next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! Double yay! I am deeply honored that my story is the first you read from the site! I'm so so so glad you like the story so far, and I hope you continue reading!

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 05/16/05 9:17
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

He hee! Curse everybody not reviewing! I finally finished! lol. I think Allison was about to rip my hair out if I took any longer reading this! lol. She loves this story so I'm reviewing 4 her! Allison: Yes, I absolutely love this story! Caitlyn: Yes, OK, Allison, you can go now. This is my review! Allison: Fine! lol. Great job You are very talented! I love this story and can't wait to continue reading it! Are you going to encorporate the "midnight" scene you had to leave out a couple of chapters ago, soon? 10/10! I love it! Update really soon!

Author's Response: You'll be happy to know, that, because you brought up that midnight scene (hich I'd almost forgotten about, lol), it has been written into ch. 17. =) I hope you enjoy it.
I took long in updating...sorry about that.
Thanks! I'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/15/05 18:55
Chapter: The Masked Ball

OMG!! This story is soooo incredibly good!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! =)

Reviewer: miss patil
Date: 05/15/05 15:02
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Is an awsome story I am loving it!!! Keep writing I am awaiting the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Ch.17, I believe, is submitted exactly fifteen days after you reviewed. =) May 30th. I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: wishbear006
Date: 05/14/05 12:19
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

how great was that....but y did dumbldore lie 2 them? o and the pendant? very interesing...as usual 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! Ch. 17, I hope, will clear your questions. If not, feel free to ask. =)

Reviewer: Mierielle
Date: 05/13/05 18:30
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

I love this story! You're a very good writer! But please, update it really soon. I can't wait!!

Author's Response: Err...I think I kind of, didn't update soon, lol. Sorry about that. I am a slow writer, and sometimes I get stumped on what to write--bad combination. =D But ch. 17 was submitted today (May 30th), so don't worry.

Reviewer: stephen
Date: 05/13/05 14:25
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

great chapter i think it'd really sweet how hermoine comforts harry. great chapter once again u produce a superb chatper 1000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 05/13/05 9:13
Chapter: Villains Arise

I know you've updated since writing this chapter but I have some thoughts I wanted to write down about this chapter. BTW, these are just my takes on JKR's version of HP and suggestions; I love this story anyway! lol. I can't stop reading it! Ok, I don't really think that Sibil would admit to not being able to predict the real future; I think she actually believes she can predict things. Also, the only real predictions she has ever made happened when she was compleatly unaware of what was happening... therefore, I don't think Sibil would be able to predict the outcome of the war and Snape's sides concioulsy. I also have a different view of Snape (although, I do hate him with a passion) but it's very minor. I know from reading this review you are probably thinking I hate this story, so why bother continuing reading this, but I don't! I really do like the story, I just have a couple of things I wanted to mention! I'm giving you a 9 for an EXCELLENT plot and character development! I love this story and can't wait to read more! So sorry and please don't hate me! BTW, there are two people on this account and so if someone on this account reviewed later chapters, it was my good friend, Allison! ~Caitlyn

Author's Response: Your views are interesting. Sibyll does strike me, now that you mention it, as being proud of her abilities. Judging by her attitude in OoTP, I'd say she does believe she can predict things. I didn't quite think on that when I wrote, and so she's...uh, different. =)
On the predicting consciously...I think I wrote that she looked into her crystal ball, right? Well, if you're presented a crystal ball to look in for a Divinations final, and you're supposed to tell the teacher what you saw, then you are predicting/seeing those things consciously. I hope that makes sense, lol.
Of course not. Your criticism is onstructive and greatly appreciated. I love to know the different views on things that my readers have, and you've presented yours in an excellent, non-rude way. =)
Thanks very much! I'm glad you like the story, and no, I don't hate you. =)

Reviewer: iarehampster
Date: 05/11/05 19:33
Chapter: The Secret Meeting

Okay, one word, w00t!!!!!!! This chapter was quite interesting. I like how you make the plot more than just a H/HR fic. It's not just: H:Oh Harry! Hr: Oh Hermione! *Kiss*Kiss*Kiss* Yep, much more. You make the plot interesting and exciting. You also don't change what Jo's already written, like Lily's death, you still kept the death, you just made the crystal thing not really a big change. Just a throw, which most people wouldn't notice, because most people throw there arms in the air when the die suddenly. I so want the final battle to begin. OHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'm so excited. Only two more weeks of school. But within those two weeks I have many things. Ich habe eine Deutsche Klasse Final. I have a math final, but I don't have to do it because I've done every single homework assignment all year. Instead I get to take it as a work sheet. I also have an end of the year Science assignment. I have a Tom Sawyer project due in English. At least two more tests in History. The list goes on. I need summer to come!!!!! When Summer comes I will most likely start my Fan Fic, but maybe not, you'll se... Obviously this emerald is going to play an important role in the story, but I think that you might do a plot twist with gem, we'll see... Good luck on your tests, for we'll both need as much luck as we can get! Take your time, until the next chapter, I shall be playing video games, lots and lots of video games, oh! I'll also be IM-ing with Allison...lol.

Author's Response: Exactly my thoughts on the pendant-throw. Voldemort, occupied with his glee at her death, wouldn't have noticed, especially because of what you just pointed out. * Thumbs Up *
I think, by now, you've already finished, right? How did all that work go? I finished school too, thank God. I think I did well on my exams. =)
I'll be looking forward to reading your fic. Expect a review from me. =)
Yes, the emerald, logically, is important. Otherwise, why make them find it? Lol.
Good luck with school, even tho it's probably over. =D Summer has come!

Reviewer: pien
Date: 05/11/05 9:31
Chapter: Give Unto Me Your Troubles

It's getting better and better. Ca'nt wait to see the next chapter!!!:D

Author's Response: Thanks! The next ch. has been submitted today, May 30th. Should be up in a couple of days. =)

Reviewer: pottergranger
Date: 05/11/05 7:05
Chapter: Appearances Can Be Deceiving

This is the best chapter ive read in your story awesome dude good on ya! Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks very much!

Reviewer: pottergranger
Date: 05/11/05 6:29
Chapter: A Dark Future

I think that it has been really good and i rather enjoyed this chapter, However I will only give you a 9 "Honestly guys do you ever read hogwarts a history?" You cannot apperate or disaperate within the grounds of Hogwarts.

Author's Response: You misunderstood there, I think. Whenever a person Apparates in my story, I make them go to either Hogsmad or the outskirts of Hogsmade, but never in the Hogwarts Grounds! =D
Still, thank you for reviewing! I'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Indianfury
Date: 05/09/05 4:46
Chapter: Preparations and Plotting

10/10 I sent you an email with my review since i didnt know how to post it... yet :P

Author's Response: Yes, you did! I have it saved in my inbox. =) Thanks again!

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