I like your stories, but my favorite one is Temporary. Right more like that, especially like the beginning few chapters. The end was a bit too intense for me, but it was alright.
oh so, beautiful.
great work !
sequal ! (:
beautiful one-shot. But i want a sequel!
oo this was good i like it !!
lol mr. cupp quote " theres no such thing as cold it is only lacking of heat" unquote
**lower lip jutts out**
**bursts into uncontrolable sobs**
it's good but...
its sad that when draco finally falls for someone, they don't fall back.
PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! I LOVED IT! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
This was so sad it broke my heart to see that draco finally loved some one and they broke his heart
that was good really good i loved it
thats an awesome plot but i think you should make it into something more than a one-shot...luv ur writing!!!
i agree with santal ... you are a wonderful writer and provoke so many emtions in your writing! Bravo!!!
I loved this story, and I don't think you should continue it. It's great as it is. =)
Here, to me anyway, you have perfectly captured the essesnce of Draco Malfoy. That [I'm sure you can agree] is a beautiful thing. Thank you!
ok, it IS official. you are THE one that could bring up so many emotions in me using only words.. it was so b e a u t i f u l. i have nothing else to say except that i really but reallyyyyyyy admire all of your works. all of it. well those that i saw lol. really, you are a fantastic writer and don't you ever STOP writing. it should be a crime if you do! generally, i don't read one-shot story but since it was one of your works, i was curious to give it a try. hopefully i did. this one was sad. even sad is too weak to describe the plot. yea. it's more than sad. i don't exactly know the word for it but it was TRULY the-word-which-temporarily-stand-for-sad. i almost felt like crying. yep. i almost had the sudden urge to cry.almost. it's kinda hard to explain how we feel after reading such a wonderful story but i can assure you that it's a deep feeling. i felt like crying but at the same time no.. er..it's weird. anyways, just wanted to let you know that this story was marvellous.
you can whether choose to write a sequel, post a second chapter or leave it like that.. but it would be good though if you could do a second chapter with hermione's pov. i really wanna know what is she really thinking, it doesn't look like it but i'm sure she's suffering too. i don't hate her(well i might if she really is that selfish..) but i would really love to know what's going on in her little twisted mind. =)
uh..i don't get why there are only 30 reviews to this one-shot. really it deserved WAY MUCH MORE comments than that. keep writing such beautiful stories! we love you xxx =)
Wicked kwl!!!!!!!! tat was gr8!!!!!!! xxx
wow... that was very beautiful and sad... a story that told you everything and nothing at the same time... i love how you wrote it :) can i ever contact you? if you would like to contact me my email is email@example.com ... please feel free to email... or not... lol
I liked this one shot, Queen of Serpents. You're a great writer; I admire your work. Well done.