Aww. That's heartbreaking. Great story tho. Ily QoS
Wow, this was truly remarkable! I really liked this because it hooks me from the beginning! I do hope there's more but I am also perfectly content with this being it because the ending was great enough to be by itself!
if you don't continue....:@ lol! nah pls continue! i love ur stories!!!!
I'd like a sequel too, maybe one written in Hermione's point of view? I do honestly not believe she wanted to part with him - I mean its Draco *squeee - fangirl* - maybe Lucius forced her? Her friends?? You could name the sequel something with heat not being able to be there without coolness or something, anyway, I'll review if you do ^__^ Happy christmas!
This made an excellent one shot. And I don't know why, but I'm kind of on Draco's side, something I never thought I'd say. But in my opinion Hermione didn't truly love him because Harry and Ron and everything else wouldn't matter to her if she did. I know that in life we're meant to pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off and start all over again, but how many times can we do that before we break? Is it not better to close yourself off, like Draco? There's a song that say's if I lose the highs at least i'm spared the lows, makes sense to me.
this is amazingly well written and touching!!!
I loved this! I owuld love to know if she was so unhappy as him. And I wonder why she dated him in the first place if she was lying to herself.
silly silly girl.
it was put in sipil and elagint word and it was oddly sweet but hermionie and draco what were you thinking
wow, i think you really have something here.
That is so sad! I know when you have your heart broken you feel like you can never let down your walls again, but sometimes, all it takes is for someone to teach you to trust again. I feel sorry for Draco.. :(
This story was incredibly good. You really captured the emotions on the page (well, screen). Bravo! I love the Draco that you created. He seems nearly vulnerable. Keep up the good work!
-Bee
I LOVE IT! I HAVE LOVED EVERYTHING OF YOURS THAT I HAVE READ SO FAR!!!
wow is all i can say. this was a great one shot...sadly i will admit that i would love there to be more but even if you dont write any more, it was great. really powerful and sometimes even though it makes me sad, it is good for the two of them to not end up together!
YOU HHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE 2 MAKE A 2!!! Odds are, you left us at a cliffhanger girly and it's tearing me apart inside! Well, not literally, but still!
Hugs and Kisses for a great story!
note how I said story, not one-shot :P
WAAAA-HAA-HAA-HAAAA! SO SAAA-AADDD! *sob,sob,sobsob* *sniff sniff* great story, great story, it's so bittersweet! i love it!
that was reaaly touchin.... cool!!
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE WRITE MORE ON THIS STORY!......i loved Delightful Pain and Temporary and this one-shot!! an i look forward to reading more from you.....plz keep writing
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE WRITE MORE ON THIS STORY!......i loved Delightful Pain and Temporary and this one-shot!! an i look forward to reading more from you.....plz keep writing
oh my gosh that story was sad! it was really good tho..but sad all the same ..