Reviewer: dargon12
Date: 12/01/07 21:40
Chapter: Prologue

YOO
someone tell her to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 11/16/07 8:29
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Suspicion

The man's Lucius, right? What on Merlin's name is he doing in America!! The evil creep! I hope he gets skinned alive!
Argh! There are too many questions!!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 11/16/07 8:11
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Reflection

Chapter 11. I'm rather sure now, the Harpies are nasty!! The creeping sensation that they're the real bad guys just keeps growing... Can't wait to read more! And this Deirdre OC seems very interesting as well. I can't help but trust she'll be of help for Lanette!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 11/16/07 8:01
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Reflection

I have the slight feeling this Harpies are the REAL bad guys. Just finished chap. 9. And I just wish I could read faster!!!
Love your fic!!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 11/16/07 7:51
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Unfamiliar

Unfamiliar... the last paragraph... Oh my gosh!! Just awh! Lovely, I just can bring myself to deescrib e my liking of it with mere words. Very much curious of what happened exactly with Ginny, too. But I guess I only have to keep reading!! I won't tell you to keep the amazing work, because I just know you will!! *beams*

Reviewer: Hectate
Date: 10/06/07 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Suspicion

brilliant is all i can say for now. But i will return i promise and review in a more detailed manner. Congratulations on writing such an interesting story, so far

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Legacy Unknown

Isn't Rewenoa Ravenclaw

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Legacy Unknown

Isn't Rewenoa Ravenclaw

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Legacy Unknown

Isn't Rewenoa Ravenclaw

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Legacy Unknown

Isn't Rewenoa Ravenclaw

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 10:41
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Of Labyrinths and Destiny

Was Circe the scorceress

Reviewer: Belgareth
Date: 09/21/07 10:29
Chapter: Prologue

The thestral is bred by Hagrid in the Forbidden Forest. If the name is in another book I have no idea.

Reviewer: dargon12
Date: 06/10/07 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Suspicion

when are u going to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice chapter!

Reviewer: the fischer king
Date: 03/11/07 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Suspicion

you rule!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 02/04/07 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Unfamiliar

I love how you wrote Ron and Hermione quarreling, yet quietly suffering for the love they hold for each other through their time of separation.

Ron is very much in character, and I love how he's grown up into the Gryffindor that I've always hoped was there. Yet, you also keep Hermione true to her nature and she seems to have grown up immensely over time.

I don't necessarily ship Ron/Hermione, but this chapter is so well-written. I really liked the ending - very descriptive, warm, and fuzzy. It shows how much they've both grown, and there's really no need to quarrel or apologize for two people in love like them.

You did a great job with the subtleties of Ron and Hermione's romance. I.e: Ron giving Hermione a gold watch which had once belonged to his grandfather, and it was really creative how you mentioned the watch at the beginning. It captures the readers attention and makes us recognize that this watch was mentioned for a reason. Great foreshadowing!

Reviewer: Phoenix5225
Date: 02/03/07 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Unfamiliar

Haley, this is an absolutely delightful chapter. Hermione's charictarization is wonderful, only she would use the words "no need to fret". Pulling all of her memories out is an original way to share the past few months with us, as opposed to simply using the hard return and the word flashback.

I love the interaction between the couple at the end. Neither Ron nor Hermione would ever spout poetic verse, even in the face of war, so their unspoken connection is perfect. It's as subtle here as it has been throughout Jo's series, and had it been told from someone else's point-of-view, it would have been just a hug between best friends. Only because it's Hermione's POV do we know what is truly going on between them.

You never cease to amaze, my Queen. :-)

Reviewer: jmegray
Date: 11/08/06 16:43
Chapter: Prologue

Not sure how long this story has been up but I just found it, Falcor is of course from the Never Ending Story.

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 10/19/06 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Suspicion

Love the story! I'm so glad to read a fic w/ Hestia in the plotline!!! Great characters, and I loved the separate scenes between the members of the trio. The war preparations are shockingly realistic, but you've offset the daily grind of war preparations w/fantastic storylines. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: jtwpotter
Date: 10/07/06 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 6 - The Menagerie

Okay Im completely hooked now!

Reviewer: LadyDragon3113
Date: 10/04/06 15:23
Chapter: Prologue

Falcor is from the neverending story he was the dream dragon

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