Er, there were a lot of grammer/tense issues in the first half. You wrote "shined" instead of "shone" twice when referring to moonlight. And you forgot the "s" in "tears" when you were talking about Remus. It was cute the way Harry called Sirius "Paddy". I liked that. The end was sort of overdone. Overall, not a bad job, but...
This is, by far, the best fic I have ever read on MuggleNet. I literally started sobbing. Sirius is my second favorite character, and I miss him very much, so you can understand. About the point where baby Harry started screaming, “Paddy!”, I knew I was not going to make it through the end without pitching a spaz, so I grabbed a box of tissues and read the rest. Needless to say, I bookmarked this page. *applause*I only wish the author would writer another fic just as good, only about Remus this time… *grins*
*sniff sniff* I loved it. it was sad but a good interpretation of what sirius was feeling on that hallowe'en. 10/10
WOW This is such a beautiful story, sad like the people said before, but still beautiful. 10 out of 10 for you my friend.
That was so sad, but wonderfully written. 10 for you!
Author's Response: Thanks glad you like it. Well this story IS under the category Dark/Angsty so if I actually made you feel happy, the story would be a failure, wouldnt it? Thanks for the review both of you guys, and thanks for the 10.
OMG, that was so sad :( beautifully writen though..