That was amazing.
ooohhh, I so get where you/Harry/the narrator is coming from. I feel pressure like that too, sometimes (but not quite as severe, of course). I love it; please update! hey, will there be one by a certian misunderstood werewolf in the near future, by any chance?
lol, my bad. i meant think of that. =-(
I giv that a rating of 10. why? The question is why the hell wouldn't i? wonderful m8! wonderful. Nice order, nice format. Makes me thise why didn't i think of that?!? All Hail, King of Serpants
*claps for you* That was wonderful, truley wonderful. I have recently studied poetry in my classes and I'm awed by your intellect of this poem. I'm afraid my submitted poem isn't as good as yours. You are a truley wonderful writer, keep up the good work.
I realy loved what it was saying! and I am surprized no one has reviewed(unless someone has just posted one while I was reading the poem) but me, so far. um I think you could make it flow a bit better in a few areas. and that would realy just make it perfect for me. um I'll give you a 9/10 ( what I would want to give you would be a 8.75 but no such thing exists) so good fortune be unto you and your many jounys and writings (yes I know my spelling sucks! lol!)