hehe hey you. I finally got my account working, so now i get to review!! It's absolutely brilliant, as I've already told you countless times =)
Not too shabby. I really like it and I think it's an excellent work in progress. Keep writing!
Hahaha! That was great! They're so oblivious to the truth, it's adorable! 10/10, Tash
Oh, this is really good! I love Remus and Tonks. There's never really been much about their feelings or anything in the Books, so it's really nice to delve more into the subject! Love it, love it, Tash
I am actually at school this moment and I laughed at the endin!How embarassing.I absoutely love ti
Good chappie! And, good luck in school! The self-to-self fight was funny! Keep up the good work!
lol I loved Remus's arguement with himself I loved the whole thing:D
Nice chapter, 10/10. Update soon!
Nice chapter, 10/10. Update soon!
I love it when people give new twists to old stories. Apparently the aforementioned back of her hand had knocked the firewhiskey bottle off the ledge. Very clever.
I also really like your internal dialogues, with neither realizing the true feelings of the other. Very true to life, the wild misunderstanding of both parties. I like your version of Tonksí clumsiness, with her falling down the stairs.
The only thing I wonder about is Tonks and her liking for firewhiskey. I pictured her as too level-headed to really have it around much, but I suppose thatís a matter of taste to some point.
I havenít got anything to really criticize, it was very good. Waiting for more!
Author's Response: Well, I don't really know any other magical alcoholic beverage...and I've always pictured Tonks as a fun-loving person who probably would have a drink or two just for the hell of it. Personally, that is. I'm glad you liked it!
That was really nice, much better than the first chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one:) 10/10
Hmmm, interesting. I can't see Remus getting drunk though, or really thinking about it. The kiss was quite, uh, unexpected and a little forward, I think. But it could turn into a good fic. Speaking of, are you going to update or not?!?
Author's Response: Okay, since I am SICK of everyone talking about how they can't imagine Remus going out and getting drunk on purpose, I went back, edited, and gave him a reason. Hopefully, this will solve everyone's problems. And, yes, I will update as soon as I finish finals. By the way, would it KILL you, petiteloupegarou, to get some manners? No offense.
This was such a cute chapter! I had to laugh at Tonks' antics, especially the surprise kiss! Update soon!
-angelic smile- More please?
Author's Response: -demonic grin- No...I like watching you squirm.... Just kidding. Ch. 2's almost done!!
FANTASTIC!!! 10/10 Brilliant job done there, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and good luck on your Lab practical! :)
Brilliant! Its funny and sweet! 10/10
ha ha! This is awesome work. Keep the chapters comming please!
Gelo, I think this chap was soooo awesome, pleeaassee keep it coming! cant wait. ~_^
Thanks so much for the constructive crit, people!! Chapter Two is going through that last beta stage, so it should be in queue shortly!! Thanks to those who wished me well on my Biology practical. NO idea why I was so worried--easier than faking a Divination essay.
Ooh and I love the Cinderella touch at the end! Haha was it meant to be Cinderella? Oh well that's what it reminded me of!