Reviews For Her Moment
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/17/08 20:15
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

Excellent, I love Luna.

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 07/27/06 16:10
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

WOW i think this was great cuz you don't really get to read from her point of view . I lurves it!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Luna really does have that one-of-a-kind way of looking at things that is just so entertaining. There should be much more fanfic from Luna's point of view!

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 06/28/06 22:56
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

aawww, thats great, going inside luna's head. i sorta tried to do that in a chapter of my own story, but i don't think i pulled it off as well as you! so, ron/luna, huh? i will remain a tue r/hr shipper, i support luna/neville.

Author's Response: Well, let's just say that in canon I think Luna has a crush on Ron and leave it at that. :)

I really love Luna just because she's so different. I really would like to try writing her more often, but I haven't had much luck. The skewed logic is just so fun!

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 05/27/06 10:08
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

I like this one.
I really like Luna, and it's fun when people get inside her head.
Now, those pictures may not be real, but if you believe in Monsters Inc., the Abomitible Snowman and Sasquatch, are BOTH real.
Teehee.

Author's Response: LOL! I adore Luna for thinking things just like that without question. I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 11/27/05 18:03
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

this was a fun little story about a GREAT harry potter character, i love one-shot stories that feature lesser characters in the story so this was great.

Author's Response: Thanks, halfbloodprincess22! Luna is always fun, so this was a fun one to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: HereForNow
Date: 10/27/05 17:14
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

Luna is by far one of my favorite characters; you really get some of her eccentricities in there. Moreover, you really seem to encompass what her idea of the interactions between her and the others would be. (Hermione a little brisk, Harry inquistive, etc). Some quick constructive criticism: My one complaint would be the excessive use of "to be" verbs. I think if you used a bunch more action verbs, the story would have moved a lot faster. Instead, a lot of it was "he was" "it was" etc etc. Nonetheless, fun one-timer.

Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughts, I do appreciate the criticism and will certainly keep it in mind! :)

Reviewer: Honeydukes711
Date: 10/26/05 10:36
Chapter: (none needed - only one chapter)

I don't review usually, however, no one else has left one and I didn't want you to think that your story was unappreciated. I too enjoy Luna and think that she is unique. I think that you captured her spirit. I do think the fatuation with Ron is a little off but not to the point of being completely OOC. Thank you for your sharing your story.

Author's Response: i happen to think that luna has a bit of a thing for ron, which is why i included it here. :) i'm glad to hear that the logic behind the flakiness comes through in this story. thanks for the review, honeydukes!

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