Reviewer: jbk
Date: 08/19/06 23:16
Chapter: A one-shot

although a little sexual, style of writing was pretty good!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BRWC
Date: 08/12/06 9:02
Chapter: A one-shot

BEST. FANFIC. EVER. Seriously, you are like a God in my household, my roomates and I are constantly quoting the “I wish I could have seen Snape’s face when he blasts apart THAT rosebush" line. My roomate even has you in her MySpace as 'Who I'd like to meet.'

Oh, and the 'scourgify' bit? Brilliant.

Author's Response: SWEETEST. REVIEW. EVER. Seriously. I'm now wondering what context causes you to quote that particular line, of course; it sounds like quite the lively household! And a houseful of fanfic fans, at that!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 08/10/06 12:58
Chapter: A one-shot


Author's Response: This doesn't really constitute constructive criticism, which is what that little box is for. And I have to wonder -- if this is what you thought of the first one, why did you go on to the other two?

Reviewer: Necromancer
Date: 08/09/06 14:21
Chapter: A one-shot

I love the story. It's great. Don't change a thing.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ginnybutcuter
Date: 08/08/06 11:58
Chapter: A one-shot

this is the weirdest story i have ever read.

Author's Response: What can I say? It was written on a dare.

Reviewer: pupluv5
Date: 08/04/06 8:08
Chapter: A one-shot

horrible...boring...doesnt have much to do with sex. pls put in more action...not as sexual as i short, crappy...

Author's Response: Well, you know, that's all the sex that it's allowed to have on this site. If you want smut, you need to go elsewhere. However, since you did say what you didn't like about this story, I suppose this must rate as semi-constructive criticism.

Reviewer: fawkes_07
Date: 07/28/06 0:41
Chapter: A one-shot

"I prefer tadpoles, thanks."


Ok, THAT was funny.

Author's Response: I love it when people twig on that line. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twistedtinkerbell
Date: 07/27/06 19:13
Chapter: A one-shot

u gotta write more.. u just gotta... that was sooooooo funny,i nearly wet myself laughing lollol

Author's Response: Happy reading! I have a few more around here. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 90glassslippers
Date: 07/24/06 21:21
Chapter: A one-shot

An unlikely pair, but I enjoyed the story.

Author's Response: I love rarepairs. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: FantasyFan09
Date: 07/24/06 0:22
Chapter: A one-shot

aww...this isnt a pairing ive ever seen before, but it was kind of darling. : D there was some cute flirty dialogue, and really well done details. just seemed to move very quickly, thats all. overally though, it was tres' cute.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think they're cute together too.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/19/06 21:34
Chapter: A one-shot

Cute. Ron/Draco isn't usually a ship I read, but this story was just... sweet, even though it had some adult aspects. Draco did seem a little occ at the beginning, but I guess we never really do see into his mind in the actual books. Ron, on the other hand... I dunno about him liking Draco so fast (R/Hr shipper here... :D). He wasn't terribly ooc, though, and I found this fic quite enjoyable.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear this could be sweet, even through adult aspects, to a R/Hr shipper! Trying to figure out how to keep an infatuated Draco IC was most of the fun part here; I tried to make him scheme and plot and sneak his way to what he wanted, but what he wanted was the real challenge. Poor Ron. He always seemed a little conflicted to me.

Reviewer: mistress Of Snape
Date: 07/17/06 21:19
Chapter: A one-shot

I love this story, cant wait to read the others!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: naughtykitty
Date: 07/16/06 19:45
Chapter: A one-shot

all three of the blue eyes storys are good

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lovedraco
Date: 07/03/06 17:22
Chapter: A one-shot

yay!!! this is funnnny!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: shanneib0920
Date: 07/02/06 17:53
Chapter: A one-shot

it was very well written, loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Camron Tawney
Date: 06/22/06 22:32
Chapter: A one-shot

that was cute its a hard couple to persue i loved it they matched so well

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm still trying to figure out why they're so darned cute together.

Reviewer: I Love Severus Snape
Date: 06/22/06 11:34
Chapter: A one-shot

Oh. My. God. I didn't think it remotely possible for me to even like this pairing, but I think now I'm going to ship it. This pairing is beyond believable the way you wrote it, and Draco's determination to get Ron really shows through. I love that you followed canon, because that just ups the believability. Both Ron and Draco are in character, which is rare for a pairing like this. I really like Draco's little prodding hints to Ron that he likes him, especially where he keeps suggesting that Ron has been with other guys. My favourite part is: “Eat slugs, Malfoy.”

“I prefer tadpoles, thanks. Ever tried them?”
It adds a touch of humour to the story and really lightens up the mood between them, however unnoticeably, methinks. I also really like the part that goes: "Maybe I like you."

. . . "Maybe I don't like you."

"Maybe I fancy you."
There's just, ah, something about it that made me reread those lines repeatedly. I think it’s the way you had Draco present that information to Ron that really made me like that part. I can just feel Ron's surprise at that comment.

There's not much else to say except that I'm blown away. I'm going to go read the rest of this series now. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Ooh! What a lovely long rich review! Thanks!

Don't they make the neatest little couple? They've given me all sorts of things to draw on, though I doubt Jo had that in mind, somehow. I found the pairing very hard to take seriously when the challenge was issued, and that may be where those bits of levity came in -- or maybe that's just Draco himself, and Ron. And now they seem to be my OTP. I just have to figure out how to get them back together and still keep it in canon.

Reviewer: Fredweasleysgirl
Date: 06/20/06 12:57
Chapter: A one-shot

love ur story!keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Remuss Rose
Date: 06/14/06 1:24
Chapter: A one-shot

A bit different but that does not mean it could not happen LOVED it write more soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure Severus will let me.

Reviewer: x0shelby
Date: 06/10/06 6:43
Chapter: A one-shot

aww that was cute. sort of a weird pairing, and my first time reading a Ron/Draco fanfic. but it was good.

Author's Response: Thanks! Caution: that pairing can really grow on you. Happy reading!

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