Reviewer: Slian Martreb
Date: 11/30/05 22:31
Chapter: A one-shot

Ha. Honestly? Not as bad I thought it would be. What am I saying? It was actually pretty good, really. I might have made changes on some of the language, but all of the instances are quite believable. I like the reference to 'Weasley is our King.' Neat way to stick that in there. Very good for a ship you don't sail! You should be proud. And, oh. I LOVE the title. Lol

Author's Response: Hmm, what can I say to this? For a ship I don't sail, it was a lot of fun to write. I'm glad you liked the title. And remember, the word for my brain is "warped."

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 11/01/05 11:37
Chapter: A one-shot

Definitely an interesting take on things - I enjoyed it. This stryline could have been clumsily done, but you managed it very well - well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, Rita. I was worried about the storyline myself, and am relieved to hear it worked for you.

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