As I make my way through this entire category of Hermione/Snape, I am slowly growing to like this pairing! Your fiction only helped. I would like to point out, though, that this fiction felt very short and fast. It feels like it needs some more- well, some more descriptions, battles with selves, and fillers. It would round out the story very nicely, and give it a more realistic feel.
I hope this helps! Still enjoyed the story. :)
That was short but really sweet.
Well, it is about time someone finally said how they felt.
This was good, but not one of my favorites. With Severus/Hermoine there is some leeway with him being OOC but he was just too unlike himself here. It really is a fine line to walk and I think in time it will become easier if you continue with this ship. I was confused as to why it is rated 6-7th yr too. I didn't see anything that would make it such. There was only a simple kiss. Keep at it!
This was good, but not one of my favorites. With Severus/Hermoine there is some leeway with him being OOC but he was just too unlike himself here. It really is a fine line to walk and I think in time it will become easier if you continue with this ship. I was confused as to why it is rated 6-7th yr too. I didn't see anything that would make it such. There was only a simple kiss. Keep at it!
I lik it even thought I really don't agree with this ship. Snape was a little OOC, but it worked in this story! Thanx!
wow! very interesting! this was my first hermione/snape story.
Aww...that is so sweet...i loved it...great job! 10!
Aww...that is so sweet...i loved it...great job! 10!
Oh....I LOVED IT! Perfect 10
Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Hey, this is Ms. Meriadoc Brandybuck, who changed her username. I have several stories. One that is still in queue is a very long chaptered story that has Snape as a very important character; one is an angst about Bellatrix, and there are many more. Thanks!!
This was really good... I'm correct that it's a one-shot??? Snape was ooc, though. He'd never say, "are you kidding." But it was good. 8/10. P.S. Might you review my stories? Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate the comments from you. And yeah, Snape was ooc, but it makes it fun. Besides, why would you always right a character as the author made him? I would love to review you stories! What have u written?
that was great you should definitly write more hg/ss stories
Author's Response: thanks, i would write more, if i could think of some. hm... i have a dream that i could use for it, yes yes, that could work. sorry, getting distracted. thanks again, and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Cuuuute. Great writing on the conflicted thoughts! Awesome! Sev is a bit OOC, but that's what makes it so much fun. Let me know if you do an update :-)
Author's Response: I don't think I'm going to do an update on this one. It took me so long to get this one the way I like it. thanks for the positive thoughts. :D
Really great and sweet. You should definitely do some sort of a follow up for this story - it would be really good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I would like to do a follow up, but I don't know what I would write. I'll try for you though! Glad you liked it!
This really needs more, you know. It's funny how you slip Snape's thoughts in, and they're incredibly funny, some.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Awwwww! So sweet! Very good!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! I aim to please ;)
I love this story and cant wait to read more pleses update soon
Author's Response: Thank you. Unfortunately, this story in particular is a one-shot, so there will be no more chapters. I will try to write more for you though. Thanks again!
Great Story line! I normally don't read Hermione and Snape, but this story is awesome.
Author's Response: thank you! I'm so happy that everyone is accepting my story so well. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Hahahaha! That was great! I know you have read my fic (thanks for the review!) so I know that u know I am a fan of the story about Snape's love life! But anyway, I thought your story was great (I added it to my favorites!) and I wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm surprised that I've gotten so many positive reviews. I've never written any stories before this. I love your fic as well. Thanks! :)
