Reviews For The Prongs Complex
Reviewer: greennotebook
Date: 01/05/07 16:38
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

Hey- this is the first review I have EVER left, so I don't know if this is the typical way things are done, but I wanted you to know that I loved this story. I think the ending is perfect, and that you are right about not having a prequel/sequel. This is definitely just right standing alone. Great job!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 12/26/06 20:15
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

Ahh, gotta love this story. This is my second review, but I just like this story so darn much! :]

And I think it's best if you leave it as a one-shot; I don't think it would be nearly as heart-warming and happy if it had something added to it.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 12/06/06 16:23
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

I read this before but i had to read it again. it's one of my favorites. great job. i was laughing the whole time.

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 11/14/06 20:26
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 11/14/06 20:25
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 11/14/06 20:16
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

I loved it! It was original but made sense,with james climbing the wall,falling several times.I don't know if you intended this but its sort of a metaphor for James' chase of Lily through the years.I also like that you did it from Remus' POV, liked the dry humor, and loved the bit at the end with Lily at the window! I really think you should do a sequel about heir date, you can't just leave the two of them hanging after all their hard work! Great story though!

Reviewer: _Lily__Evans_
Date: 11/02/06 17:23
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

with 70 revies I'm sure you've heard this enough, but this is an amazing story! This is without a doubt going into my favs! I love how you made this through Remus's perspective. And you're ending was adorable! Amazing! Keep writing!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/23/06 16:14
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

aw this story is so sweet. i love it!
and geez james really would do everything to get to lily eh? why not just ask her out in the common room the next morning? haha
you captured his (and the other Marauders') characters so well! a story worthy of jk rowling, i think!!
i love it, keep writing! :]

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/23/06 16:13
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

aw this story is so sweet. i love it!
and geez james really would do everything to get to lily eh? why not just ask her out in the common room the next morning? haha
you captured his (and the other Marauders') characters so well! a story worthy of jk rowling, i think!!
i love it, keep writing! :]

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/19/06 18:01
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

ah ha...very funny...love it.

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 08/28/06 11:38
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

i loved the ending! that was great...i loved it!

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/11/06 12:33
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

this was truly the one of the best j/l fan fics ive ever read! i loved it and im glad that youre not going to write any more to it, it ruins the simplicity.

Author's Response: *smiles* I think so, too. Thank you!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 07/10/06 15:47
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

Completely hilarious and very cute. I was laughing out loud for most of it, a rare occurence!

Reviewer: Crazy Addict
Date: 07/10/06 14:07
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

This story is sooooooo funny!!!!! I was laughing the entire time!!! I thought it was really cute too.

Reviewer: Crazy Addict
Date: 07/10/06 14:07
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

This story is sooooooo funny!!!!! I was laughing the entire time!!! I thought it was really cute too.

Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 07/08/06 14:27
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

good story.

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 06/29/06 8:38
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

I'm reviewing ;-)
Because this fic was wonderful. I'll be repeating myself because of the SBBC discussion, but never mind.

First, the title of your fic is just fabulous! I could never come up with something like that in a shower....it's got a nice ring to it, but you can also sense some humour in it...

The characteristics of the Marauders and Lily are brilliant. Lily isn't bookish!Lily, but Lily with a little fun and cheekiness. The last part where she goes up to the boy's dormitories is love. It's so ironic - but at the same time, it fits in humourously with the rest of the story.

I loves Remus's dry sense of humour ('I'll turn into a fluffy puppy next full moon!) and Sirius was funny as well, as being a bit of an idiot at the same time. Peter isn't pathetic, and I think you were very far away from cliches, which was superb!

James's poem for Lily made me smile - and I'll definitely read this story again if I'm feeling down!

Reviewer: Periwinkle
Date: 06/28/06 13:42
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

Liz, darling, I don't know what to say. I really don't. I'm speechless.

This story was so damn good, girl! Everything about it fit together so well, and the ending was so spectacular.

You can check the SBBC discussion thread in a while, as soon as I discuss it!
It's definately one of my faves, and you made me love J/L again!

Reviewer: Marmaduke
Date: 06/27/06 5:15
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

This is the cutest and funniest story I have ever read. It is without doubt the greatest Lily/James Fic ever!!!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 06/26/06 0:07
Chapter: The Prongs Complex

The fact that you started this story off with James failing a few times is really interesting. I mean, most people portray as the type of person who can never lose, which ends up being the case, but it's great to see him having to try more than once to succeed. Another thing I really enjoyed about the beginning of this story is the way you don't actually say exactly why James is trying to climb the wall, aside from Sirius talking him into doing it. That bit of mystery really piqued my interest because I wanted to know why James was trying to climb the wall. Of course, when I found out that it was because he was trying to find a way to get to Lily, I totally understood his rather idiotic, though romantic, behavior.

What did seem slightly odd to me was the idea that he would've even been able to climb up there. It is just odd that the founders wouldn't have thought of that type of thing when they created the other obstacles, such as the stairs turning to slides, that kept the boys from entering the girls' dormitory. Of course, maybe they never considered that a wizard would use a Muggle means of climbing up the wall and that's why James succeeded. Either way, it's such a great idea that I'm really glad it worked.

Once he actually made it to the window, I loved what James did. The banter between him and Lily was really great, and I love the fact that she caught him before he actually fell the first time when he lost his hold. I mean, you don't make James an utterly charming person that Lily can't refuse but, instead, do a wonderful job of keeping him in character by making him sound fairly full of himself. The fact that Lily was ready to shut the window on him is nicely done as well because it keeps her in character as well. My favorite line of the whole story came during their exchange, and it was when Lily said:
"Ill wait while you go get it. Go on. Down, boy.
That just fit Lily so perfectly that I couldn't help laughing just as much as Sirius and Remus did when they heard it from their spots at the base of the tower.

That was another part of this story that I really liked. The fact that it was told from Remus' point of view so that it encompassed more than just the exchange between Lily and James. Getting to see the reactions of the rest of the Marauders who were waiting for James was just brilliant. It made me relate to the story so much more because I could put myself in their shoes and enjoy James' wooing that much more.

Finally, your ending was such a great way to wrap up the story. What better way to end it than to have Lily mimic James' actions just to have a chat. I mean, she could've just as easily gone up to his room using the stairs from the common room, but the fact that she chooses to do what he did is a nice way of showing that she really was equal to him in ability. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and love that fact that the closing line was given to Lily in a story that showed more of the Marauders than it really showed her. Nicely done!

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