Ahahahaha that was bloody brilliant. I really, really loved it!
This was spectacular. I really wish you were doing some sort of continuation
This is my favorite oneshot!!
I laughed and laughed! The characters are really well written!
My favorite line:
“Yes,” James promised stoutly.
Lily sighed again. “Fine.”
James laughed delightedly. “Oy, Sirius!”
“Yes, James?” Sirius replied instantly and innocently.
“Read that poem I gave you this morning.”
It's sad that you are not planning a sequel..
please make a sequel this was great could you show their conversation and date even
oh ga, your story is Funny!
I can't STOP laughing!
That was so amazing and adorable!
I love this story! James' character is absolutely right.
I love this story! James' character is absolutely right.
It's really cute. I really like your version of how she agreed to go on the first date a lot better than how it happens most of the time. I really like the characterizations and the humor of it.
Ahh!!! This is so unbelievably good! You seem to be made to write James/Lily fics! This is amazing! “So, you climbed twenty feet, probably fell quite a few times… just to talk to me?” That made me laugh! Well, great job!
The idea of this story is so original, yet I've never seen it written before! Until now, obviously. What a perfect way to end this, especially since it's a one-shot! Absolutely Brilliant!
this story is my fav. lots of storys are good but yours is the only one i can read agin and agin (and agin and agin and agin........) at first i was mad no sequle but i think that in the (very ) end it was a good dision.
Cute fic! I love the end--Lily is so clever! =) Great job! --RP
One word: funny! What can I say? I have a good sense of humor. I think this is a great fic.
I love it! Ahhh! i'm gonna read it again cause i liked it so much!!!
That was pure genious! Very enjoyable.
