Reviewer: kaykaykooky
Date: 05/07/06 0:22
Chapter: Aftermath

I love your story! I think it was so cute how Harry and 'Mione' bumped noses! (giggles like a silly school girl)

Reviewer: ronaldweasley
Date: 05/04/06 20:29
Chapter: Aftermath

Ooh, another wonderful chapter! I liked how emotional the meeting of Sirius and Rinna was, it was very good. And then Remus too, and him being such a gentleman to Sirius and saying all those wrong words to Tonks. Overall, it's really good. Okay, I have to agree a little bit, the Harry/Hermione wasn't really needed, but it was cute and fluffy when they bumped noses. I also really like how the twins understood who made the map and then them saying too much and sirius saving them, totally a thing that he would do. You really need to continue, this story is really really good!

Reviewer: DaddiesGrl1919
Date: 05/04/06 18:52
Chapter: Aftermath

Not to be too mean, or anything, I just wanted to say... i think that this story has a really good plotline, and would be a really good story, if it weren't for all the romance. I know, the romance between Sirius and Rinna is critical to the story, but what does Harry and Hermione have to do with it? And i really wish that Remus would not snog Rinna. She was engaged to his best friend. Sirius should have the love of his life back without hurting his best friend.

Reviewer: ronaldweasley
Date: 05/04/06 16:32
Chapter: The Best Laid Plans...

Ooh, I love it. I'm actually looking forward to more of RL/Rinna. Though it'll be interesting when Sirius comes back. Oh, and I know that that's not the right ship at all, but I think it's very good anyways, and like I said before, yeah. Remus is a little different than I imagine him, but I see that part in him^^Great job again!

Reviewer: ronaldweasley
Date: 05/04/06 16:29
Chapter: Disclosures and Intemperance

Well, I'm not good with the way things work around here so of course I put my review in the wrong place. Here it is again, just in case(;

Well, just finished the sixth chapter now, and I have to say that this is a great story, actually one of the best that I have ever read, HP fanfictions I mean. Great job! Oh, and I love this chapter and the flashback and all.

Reviewer: ronaldweasley
Date: 05/04/06 16:00
Chapter: Upward Bound

Well, just finished the sixth chapter now, and I have to say that this is a great story, actually one of the best that I have ever read, HP fanfictions I mean. Great job! Oh, and I love this chapter and the flashback and all.

Reviewer: kaykaykooky
Date: 05/02/06 23:45
Chapter: The Best Laid Plans...

I love your story! Lupin is soooooooo sexy!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/02/06 23:03
Chapter: Aftermath

Another great chapter. The scene between Sirius and Rinna was very emotional. The tension and feelings were very clear. Remus giving up his claim on Rinna was also great, but then I really feel he deserves Tonks. I like how you are starting that also. I wasn't so thrilled with the scene where Hermione and Harry almost kissed, but then I'm totally a Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny supporter. Them bumping heads was funny though.

Reviewer: kaykaykooky
Date: 05/02/06 22:35
Chapter: Explanations and Broomsticks

mphm

Reviewer: ronaldweasley
Date: 05/02/06 22:24
Chapter: Upward Bound

Ooh, I just read the first chapter. Very good! You portrayed Harry being suspicious really well, and the lady too. Great job!

Reviewer: wolfdancer12
Date: 05/02/06 21:21
Chapter: Aftermath

i like/dislike that part where hp/hg thing's going on. It's funny but awkward when they bump noses. hehe! great job!

Reviewer: Sophia Loren
Date: 05/02/06 20:12
Chapter: Aftermath

Two words: Loved it. ;)

Reviewer: wolfdancer12
Date: 05/01/06 8:10
Chapter: Instincts

it's great! it's kinda odd that you started after 3rd book, seeing as there are 6 now, but it's turning out great! i really like Rinna as a character, and she is a really good subject to see the story from. Good job!!

Reviewer: Sophia Loren
Date: 04/17/06 11:52
Chapter: Birthday

I am absolutely in love with your story! I loved that little bit with Harry and Hermione there, but the whole thing with Rinna, Remus, and Sirius has got me completely ensnared in your story. Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 04/13/06 22:24
Chapter: Birthday

That was a GREAT chapter. That was also a very CRUEL Cliffie!! The Quidditch match was very entertaining. I loved some of Rinna's moves. It is nice to see she could keep up with the youngsters. Remus's play with her was also greatly entertaining. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: xCoHoRoIoSoToAx
Date: 04/13/06 16:39
Chapter: Birthday

Wow...

i want more...

its an amazing story...

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 03/17/06 23:49
Chapter: Romantic Intuition

I like every minute of background that we get on Rinna and Sirius! I hope that things don't get too stormy when he does show back up. It would be nice to see her ease some of his pain, and she definitely needs someone to ease some of hers. It is good to see her finally releasing the pain. She has kept too much inside for too long. She will become more human as she lets herself live. I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, Cheshlin, my faithful reviewer! I'm glad you like the background. I have lots of fun writing it! New chapter will be up soon! And it's a long one.

Reviewer: klara_ckraaa
Date: 03/10/06 21:23
Chapter: Romantic Intuition

loved every word of it! so good for sirius to have some love in his live for once, and also for rinna... i only hope they're able to re-establish their relationship once more, and i'm also hoping for more remus/tonks in the next chapter! it was really great to see harry and hermione flirting, too... but i fancy her and ron, anyway. i'm no native speaker but an austrian girl, so i hope you did understand everything i meant to tell you... good night, it's 04:20 am and time for bed... ;)

Author's Response: Klara, I understood every word! Your English is great! 'Danke' for your review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story; I hope you will continue to read!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 02/26/06 23:06
Chapter: The Best Laid Plans...

That was a really fun chapter. Seeing Tonks with an old friend, who just happens to be friends with Remus is great. I don't see Remus and Rinna hooking up. Remus belongs with Tonks! :) It is fun seeing him get a little romance before he realizes how much he liks Tonks more though! Things should get interesting when Sirius ends up back in town. Rinna will have a tough time with it. She will have a tough time the next time she sees Harry, too. I hope that she can properly explain things and finally learns how to feel things again!

Author's Response: Well, Cheshlin, one of my favorite ships is the HMS Lupin/Tonks... so that may give you some hope!

The next chapter is in the queue now, so hopefully it won't take long to post. Thanks again for reviewing. I really enjoy hearing from you!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 02/20/06 0:45
Chapter: Disclosures and Intemperance

It is nice to start getting some answers about Rinna and Sirius. The drunken night with Remus was very interesting. It also gave the most answers. I hope that Rinna realizes how to be honest with Harry. He needs that more then anything. I hope that Sirius doesn't get himself into trouble when he gets back. It should be interesting when the two of them meet for the first time. Poor Remus will be in the background again. Hopefully you'll work the love in for him too. He really deserves it! I look forward to reading more of your story. I'm really enjoying it!

Author's Response: Oh don't you worry, my dear Cheshlin! I wouldn't DREAM of leaving my poor darling Remus bereft of love and comfort!
I am SO VERY glad you are enjoying my story, and thanks so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate that!

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