Reviews For I Wanna Go Back
Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/05/07 4:48
Chapter: Chapter 3

I dislike how he smoked pot and that he got it from Lupin's robe...UGH

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/05/07 4:45
Chapter: Chapter 2

This is getting way to depressing. Plus I bet it will just turn worse and worse.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/05/07 4:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

So dark already...Harry has NOBODY left in this world to live for...at least that is what appears to be true. He might as well die right now.

Reviewer: AmericanMerlin
Date: 10/15/06 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 8

AUGH - Bring back the darkness - you waver to sap - this chapter can be much better is the angst holds on for another chapter. Ginny has to work harder to bring him around mentally.

Reviewer: AmericanMerlin
Date: 10/15/06 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 4

So far - this is the most powerful writing I have seen on the net. You have mastered the passion of the storyteller - I hope you can keep true to this tone. Take deep to your heart this web that you create to build more.
Peace

Reviewer: Lord Lys
Date: 09/26/06 22:13
Chapter: Chapter 5

By the way, Lews Therin Kinslayer sounds better. HP Kinslayer just doesn't quite flow.

Reviewer: Lord Lys
Date: 09/26/06 21:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

He stepped put from behind a tree? A tree?! What is this, Looney Toons? Come on, we need a little more plausibility and originality than that. Evil wizards can't generally hide behind a tree and then just pop out.

Reviewer: dementor_slayer
Date: 04/08/06 20:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

u suck beacuse of what u did 2 harry/kinslayer

Reviewer: dementor_slayer
Date: 04/08/06 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

u suck beacuse of what u did 2 harry/kinslayer

Reviewer: The ShaneAvenger
Date: 04/08/06 12:35
Chapter: Chapter 11

Good Story. I only had 2 problems with it. 1. The last chapter was a songfic and the song was by Kid Rock. I dont much enjoy songfics and I certainly dont like Kid Rock. So when I read the disclaimer and saw it was his song it made little sense to(to me) do it at all because you had a good story with a good ending but everytime I read part of the song i cringed at it. 2. When Harry was remembering all his friends and those who loved him one person was mentioned only once. Hermione. Even then she was only mentioned as part of the trio who kept people "jumpin" as you put it. I was kind of disappointed that she only got 1 sentence dedicated to her and it wasnt even about her as a person. Just as part of the group. Anyway, thats it. Good story overall though.

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 03/12/06 5:06
Chapter: Chapter 4

I agree with the post below mine! OMG!@!!!! Holy testicle tuesday! The Kinslayer is born! I love Harry. GO Harry! Fantastic story. Tom Riddle...I hope he rots like spoiled eggs!

Reviewer: Bon_Y_Bon369
Date: 03/12/06 4:58
Chapter: Chapter 3

this is actually a really interesting and refreshingly creative twist to the HP story universe. I like it very much. Harry does need to smoke more weed though! LOL just kidding. I thought that part was funny though. Anyway. Great storytelling and I hope Harry goes and kicks some tom riddle butt!

Reviewer: dragon_lover_1400
Date: 02/24/06 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 11

wow. it's really good. I'd say just as good or even *gasp* better then J.K. Some chapters made me cry! I think your story is the third that has. wow. 10.999999*goes on forever*/10. did I mention it was really good? yup it's true! : )

Reviewer: dragon_lover_1400
Date: 02/24/06 21:23
Chapter: Chapter 11

wow. it's really good. I'd say just as good or even *gasp* better then J.K. Some chapters made me cry! I think your story is the third that has. wow. 10.999999*goes on forever*/10. did I mention it was really good? yup it's true! : )

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 02/14/06 3:48
Chapter: Chapter 11

Paul, Paul, Paul. This fic was intense from start to finish. I'm not gonna lie...some parts seemed far-fetched, and I don't know that anyone else could have pulled them off, but you kept me hooked with your fanfixion riting skillz. *throws confetti*

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 02/13/06 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 8

I'm dying Pie. Absolutely dying. This story is just...! Anyway, I loved this chapter. I missed the valiant, good-hearted Harry. I hope he totally brings the hurt on to Voldy soon, but if my memory serves, there are a lot more chapters, so....I'd bet get reading.

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 02/06/06 2:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

Dude, Pie, this is so full of raw emotion that you almost had me in tears, and I'm not even lying to you. The flashback part was ok, but the rest of it was just...like I said, raw emotion. I can't believe that you killed Remus too. Do you have a heart, Pie? I guess I'm going to have to keep reading.

Reviewer: Lola
Date: 01/15/06 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 11

Again with praise on your story.. Such a dark and ansty story, But wa good! I cried the whole story, I'm looking forward to future works from you

Reviewer: mad4marauders
Date: 12/15/05 18:10
Chapter: Chapter 11

wow, I just realized how few reviews it seems your story has gotten. Shocking. Very good though. very deep, good story line and very well written. man, I sound like an english teacher. Great job. loved it with a gusto (I love that phrase).

Reviewer: woodwoman
Date: 12/14/05 22:15
Chapter: Chapter 3

Wow... pretty dark, but it's good.

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