it's really good! i luv it! please continue!
The beginning of this story builds a frame for the whole story. We know we'll get James and Lily, but their friends are important to the progression of the story as well. I really enjoyed Lily's shock when she saw James as the Head Boy. Maybe she's just a little worried she doesn't dislike as much as she thinks she should. I can't wait to see where you take it. Nice writing.
That was really good! I can feel the excitement build up so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon! Great job!
Aw poor James, rejected again. Am I the first reviewer? Great story, it's wonderful by the way! Can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10
Author's Response: Yep, you're first. =D Thanks for the review, and for reading! Glad you liked it. =]