Reviewer: katiebell360
Date: 05/28/07 21:39
Chapter: The Return

it's really good! i luv it! please continue!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 10/25/05 16:30
Chapter: The Return

The beginning of this story builds a frame for the whole story. We know we'll get James and Lily, but their friends are important to the progression of the story as well. I really enjoyed Lily's shock when she saw James as the Head Boy. Maybe she's just a little worried she doesn't dislike as much as she thinks she should. I can't wait to see where you take it. Nice writing.

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 10/24/05 9:15
Chapter: The Return

That was really good! I can feel the excitement build up so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon! Great job!

Reviewer: loonymoony8
Date: 10/21/05 15:46
Chapter: The Return

Aw poor James, rejected again. Am I the first reviewer? Great story, it's wonderful by the way! Can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10

Author's Response: Yep, you're first. =D Thanks for the review, and for reading! Glad you liked it. =]

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