awww, this is really cute - I like thinking James has a soft side as well as the mischeivious Marauder - good work, hope to see more some day soon!
Good chapter your a really good writer! update soon!
Interesting. I kindof like it! can't wait for more !
Oh dear me, how intriguing! I think your story has a very nice overall plot and that while some may not be able to carry such a story, you are doing quite well right now. However, I'd just advise not rushing things. You have a whole story to tell something, you don't have to rush it in one chapter. You can always let something carry over through a few chapters. But otherwise, I think you did a spectacular job! And I hope that you'll be updating sometime soon, unless you've posted the rest somewhere else (your DeviantArt account, perhaps?).
Keep up the great work and happy writing!
-- Amanda --
Author's Response: yes, it is up on my deviantart account. i have chapter six posted up there so far, and im currently working on chapter seven..
Ooh, this sounds like a good start. Poor Lily. I noticed that my one-shot is a favorite, and now this is gonna be a favorite for me. Great work, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
i'd LOVE to have the next chapter(s?) do you post on harrypotterfanfiction.com or fanfiction.net? i have the same pen name there...
Author's Response: Well, i can email them to you, i have chapter five completed, or you can check my deviantart account bluetiger-eyes.deviantart.com. All five chapters have been posted up there in my gallery.
Awesome job!! I love it! Update soon and please don't take this off of Mugglenet. You're doing a great job!
update? *tear* please update soon! this is so good!
awwe i really really like this story! one of my new favs. update sooooon !!
I love it! Update soon!
I like where this story is going! It's great! Can't wait for you to update!
Brilliant story, I'm loving it! Update soon!!!
I loved your story! I feel so bad for Lily. James is so sweet. Is Peter starting to do what we all know he will do? Update soon!
I really like this story. It is great to see Lily and James actually get along and have some time in conversation. I would like to see more. 10/10
such a good fic it was great we'll talk later and there is no way you aren't on my favorites for always luv ya 10/10
hey it will always be felicia anyway loved the chapter now finissh your story lol latez
Yay! You updated! I am so happy! Great job! Thanks for the read!
wow i really liked that. i love that side of James and Lily being nice to him as well. wow awesome story i can't wait to read more.
You did a good job writing! It's great! Please update soon! 10/10
That was sooo good! That was really great, you are a very beautiful writer! 10/10...
