Reviews For Dear Lily
Reviewer: GryffinDrChaser
Date: 01/13/07 8:47
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Yay, she went along with it. Great chapter again.

Reviewer: GryffinDrChaser
Date: 01/13/07 8:45
Chapter: Pass the Potatoes

I like how you show James delivering the letters. I also like the twist with Lily finding out it was James. Now will she convince herself it can't be him, or not? Guess I'll have to read on to find out.

Reviewer: GryffinDrChaser
Date: 01/13/07 8:36
Chapter: A Poignant Letter

I like your writing style, it flows really well. Mr. Prongs certainly does have a way with words.

Reviewer: GryffinDrChaser
Date: 01/13/07 8:32
Chapter: Mr. Prongs, indeed.

Great idea for a story so far. I always thought that the marauders wouldn't have called themselves that or their nicknames in front of people.

Reviewer: Angel Feathers
Date: 01/11/07 13:30
Chapter: I do.

Wow. Reallly really good, this is definatly going on my faves - well written.

10/10! :)

Reviewer: Gin iz kool
Date: 12/31/06 14:09
Chapter: I do.

dear chloish
hi i love!!!!!!!!!! your story. guess what my name is Chloe too except it has a accent over the E insted of 2 dots. i always thought that the 2 dots was dutch (the netherlands) oh well
you story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 20:06
Chapter: I do.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so magical! *sigh* Sirius was a realrealreal big git in this. But still, awwwwwwwww.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 19:55
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

What is it?! *gasp* Yay she went! I can't believe he trusted her enough with his invisibility cloak. Well, I can believe it. Sirius is a ^&%^&$%6746 SIRIUS $#2$^%(*& I'm still mad at him. But yay! What does she see?

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 19:47
Chapter: Pass the Potatoes

#$^%@%^&#^$*^ SIRIUS %$@&^*$##$O*(*UY^%$#@# SIRIUS IS SUCH A ^$*$&^86

HE READ THEM OUT LOUD WITHOUT READING WHO THEY WERE FROM? IDIOT! AND NOW SHE KNOWS! AND NOW %#$&^%$*7 SIRUS!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 19:37
Chapter: A Poignant Letter

OH MY GOSH! Mr. Prongs *swoons* I hate it when I get so excited that I can barely read. I wish a boy would do this for me. I mean, he could slip it in my locker. But as I sit here drinking my cup of tea I can’t help but think, "never gonna happen." *sigh*

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 19:24
Chapter: Mr. Prongs, indeed.

OHMYGOSH! SWEET! Okay sweet becaus ethat was one the most perfect prank I've ever read on fanfiction. And sweet because, awwwwwww Prongs.

I love how you kept their character alive while still throwing them into AU. And I would have to read the entire thing before choosing a title. That's what I do wiht my own stories.

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/21/06 19:24
Chapter: I do.

great chapter. great story! I think Lily should have asked who Moony, Padfoot, and Wormtail were- but I guess that wasn't the first thing on her mind.

Reviewer: Luminata
Date: 11/18/06 9:18
Chapter: I do.

the plot bunnies must have been in breeding season, non?

Author's Response: indeed. :D

Reviewer: Breanie
Date: 10/28/06 19:20
Chapter: I do.

this was such a wonderful story and so different from other James/Lily fics i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: draco_slytherin
Date: 10/01/06 9:18
Chapter: I do.

Despite being AU, the story is very beautifully written! Great job!

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/14/06 10:38
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Wonderful!! Sorry, can't stop to chat gotta read

Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/14/06 10:34
Chapter: Pass the Potatoes

You are amazing ! This story has so much verve & vitality. It rocks. Terrrific !!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: 2SiriusB
Date: 09/01/06 19:05
Chapter: I do.

Amazing work with this one. I think it's your best yet! I wish it never ended! Are you coming out with any more??

Author's Response: Thank you! I've taken a rather extended break from fanfiction, but as I'm writing this, actually, I have a word document in which I am nearing the end of page three. It's just a fun little one shot, but I like it so far. So hopefully there will be more soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 08/31/06 12:05
Chapter: I do.

awwww!
Everytime i read this story I think it is soo sweet!
I'm a sucker for cute and fluffy fics!
Samuri Rose x

Author's Response: Aw, thanks sweetie. :)

Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 08/10/06 9:04
Chapter: I do.

This has to be one of the sweetest J/L stories ever! I loved it! And I love your style! Also, I like how your characterization isn't cliche and is real! Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much atkarid! I'm very flattered to hear you say that you like my style for this story, because I think it is one of my stories where it is more defined than say Meant to Be or some of my old unpublished stuff. :)

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