Reviews For Dear Lily
Reviewer: grape_2010
Date: 02/02/06 17:13
Chapter: I do.

Well, the ending kind of ended quickly with a Bang!, but otherwise I really think it was a good chapter, and overall a good story. In fact, I've been the most excited for this story to be updated compared to others. It's really clever how you went about the whole 'Mr. Prongs' thing. And the letters! I would have never been able to come up with things like that! I hope you had fun writing this story, because I had fun reading it. :)

Reviewer: Hogwarts_chick
Date: 02/02/06 16:01
Chapter: I do.

numero uno! I thought it was cute and I give you a lot of praise because I usually don't like anything thats one bit AU. But I really liked this story. It disguises James but not like a masquerade dance.

Reviewer: Sarah Kavanagh
Date: 02/01/06 10:52
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Really? Youre next chapter is on another website????/ Aaahh! Where?? I must read it, I must, I must!!! Amazing stuff!

Reviewer: GWeasley
Date: 01/31/06 14:15
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Wow!! I just read your next chapter on another website and All I have to say is BROVO BROVO ONCORE ONCORE!!!!!!!!! That was your best chapter yet now that this story is finished I hope you will update you other one, this one and that are my all time fav's :) :) 1000000/10

Reviewer: Lady Wolfine
Date: 01/30/06 22:04
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

GAHHHH!!!!! Update! *grumbles* I always pick the ones that have cliff-hangers at the end of them...

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 01/28/06 22:50
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

This is an excellent story, I rather fancy the idea of James writing Lily beautiful letters.... I congratulate you on your writing, it's very good. You didn't rush your story as so many authors do, but you didn't add in too much detail. In short, I loved it. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: JamesxLilyxForever
Date: 01/28/06 22:40
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Such a good fan-fic! I loved it, and can't wait for the next chapter! It's so interesting how you made it so they're identidys aren't know yet. Good writing (Your a personal favorite author of mine)!

Reviewer: HPchicA
Date: 01/28/06 21:58
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

PLEASSSSSEEEEE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! IT IS KILLING ME TO WAIT FOR SUCH A GREAT STORY TO CONTINUE!!!

Reviewer: wishiwereLily
Date: 01/28/06 19:51
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

Forget updating. WRITE A WHOLE NEW CHAPTER!! Do you love to torture us or something, ending with a cliff-hanger like that? Hurry and write more!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in queue. Thank you for the interest! :)

Reviewer: Lost Lily
Date: 01/28/06 19:30
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh you cant leave it like that!!!!!! what am i supposed to do now?!?! update update!!! HURRY!

Reviewer: Lost Lily
Date: 01/28/06 19:11
Chapter: Mr. Prongs, indeed.

wow a really good start. i think it should be Dear Lily too. the other title is just too long.

Reviewer: Innovelle
Date: 01/28/06 16:52
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! I can't wait much longer!!!!!

Reviewer: valerinaballerina
Date: 01/27/06 20:42
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

you siriusly need to update ( i luv that pun so much, its not even funny)SIRIUSLY

Reviewer: GWeasley
Date: 01/26/06 18:16
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

waht do you think you are doing ending it like that when is the next chapter coming I need to know!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cyber_bunny
Date: 01/23/06 13:38
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/18/06 15:03
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

wow, that was soo good.... and you definitely need to update really soon. It would be greatly appreciated :)

Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 01/14/06 9:30
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

ahh please update! i love this story ... i miss updates =(

Reviewer: GinnyLuvr
Date: 01/13/06 20:00
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

AHHH YOUR KILLING US!!! We're all dying of "no -update" disease. eeeeeeerrrrrrhhhhhhhaaaaaaa a a aa.......

Reviewer: Innovelle
Date: 01/07/06 16:30
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

I hate cliffhangers so much, but the story was great! UPDATE.... NOW!!

Reviewer: eerinw
Date: 01/06/06 23:24
Chapter: Gregory the Smarmy

What?! Your just going toe leave me a humongous cliffhanger like that for me to ponder on what the sight could possibly be?! Ahhh, well, *sigh* it's your fanfiction so I suppose you are allowed to do that. Please, please, update soon! I'm craving for more! This story is brilliant! Keep up the excellent work!

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