This story was so great, I almost cried. This was really a great story. Please make more...
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you liked the story, and don't worry, I write a lot and have quite a few stories in store.
Gah! What an ending...that was totally unexpected. I had all my money on George for a while there and then BAM! It was wonderful though. All very emotional and accepting.. and kinky thoughts creeping into my mind. yikes. But being the nice person I am I will slip a tiny (poor krum) but still. OHHH and the whole Angelina and Kate being lesbian thing. Never ever would have seen that coming. Nice twist. Very helpful to Hermione too. :) I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: *giggle* I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, and yes I did enjoy writing this quite a lot. As for the kinky continuation...see my LJ (http://millieweasley.livejournal.com).
Awesome. Can't wait for further chapters. I love Hermione/Weasley twin fic. This is the best one
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it. This story is however completed, but if you are interested there are follow up stories that you can find in my LJ (http://millieweasley.livejournal.com)
Wow. Seriously, i don't know what else to say. I didn't necessarily agree with what you said about Harry before, but you've written it beautifully, and i just can't resist a good Hermione/Weasley twin fic, though normally it's only one!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the story, and while I know that a relationship between three people is a bit....shall we say unusual? *grin* I just know that I couldn't choose so I didn't want to force Hermione to. *giggle*
^____^ This story is awesome! I love reading Fred and George and Hermione fics! They are the best! I really like the story too. Nice plot and the story, I think, flows nicely. Update soon! I can't wait to see their reaction!
Author's Response: Thank you. That's so nice of you to say. And I promise I will try and update as fast as possible.
I’d like to begin with a simple compliment. That was really a wonderful portrayal of realistic emotions while staying completely true to Hermione’s character. You did exceptionally.
There were, however, little punctuation errors throughout. Most of them were places where a semicolon or a period belonged instead of a comma. If you have a Beta, encourage them to go through and correct/replace, keeping in mind the flow of the wording.
“…crying on Mr and Mrs Weasley’s sofa while the others found comfort in each others company at his funeral.”
Here is a rare incidence of forgetting an apostrophe in ‘others’.
“Hermione wondered how much of “this” he understood and how much Ginny had told him to understand.”
I loved this line because it is so utterly Harry. Hermione used to be the one to tell him how to deal with emotional matters, but because Hermione’s the one suffering, Ginny is likely guiding Harry’s actions. Unfortunately, Ginny also tends to be abrasive herself with emotions. What Hermione wants is sincerity, and while Harry’s trying his best to help, he has no idea what to do. Poor Harry. Hermione should cut him some slack.
“And if anyone would have asked her when she fallen in love with his brothers, she would have told them they were crazy, that such a thing wasn’t even a possibility, not to mention highly immoral.”
So perfectly in character here. She’s got the warm, fuzzy feelings that come with surviving a crisis – personal or otherwise – with someone else, and equates them with love when she’s really grasping at straws, mentally, to explain this feeling. Of course, she denies it because of the threesome connotations, but eh. Nice characterization there.
“And they did have the same large hands, so often cut and burned because of their experiments, just as Ron’s had been cut and burned do to all the dangers the three of them got into.”
And this is why I’m dead sure she doesn’t really love them – besides the fact that people will...well…what I said above about crisis situations. She’s subconsciously or consciously comparing their features and personalities, not to find the subtle differences, but to find the likenesses to Ron. What’s more is that she thinks of them as ‘them’ instead of the individuals, Fred and George. This is her mind’s way of replacing Ron, in order to avoid grief altogether. I think there’s a step in the grieving process called Bargaining. This is it.
‘“You know, Ginny tells me Victor Krum still thinks of you,” Harry then said tentatively, and she could swear she could hear him shift uncomfortably behind her back.’
Again, wonderful characterization of Harry. Poor thing.
Anyoo. You did a wonderful, fabulous job. I hope you’ll entertain us with more one shots. If you write grief so well, I wonder how you’d do at writing something more fluffy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to give me such a detailed review. I'm glad you enjoyed my characterizations, I tried hard to get them right. I have to say though, that this is not a one-shot, but only the first of three parts, so you will see more of Hermione's situation.
Again, thank you for the time you took to write that review. It made me happy to read.
This is my first Hermione/Fred and or George fiction. Actually, I have never read a fiction focused on the romance side of Fred and George....*wonders why?* So yes.. I think this chapter was an excellent start. It was awful that Hermione had to lose Ron and then feel like she was losing Fred and George. I loved your description of Hermione and what she was going through because it was really in depth and I could almost feel her pain. On the other hand I had to laugh at the twins reaction to Mrs Weasley talking about them being married haha. Wonderful *10*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review. I'm quite fond of this one myself, and I like exploring the 'what if' aspect of it.
Fantastic! I love the twins, and there aren't enough fics about them! You did a really good job, I felt Hermione's pain both times she had her heart broken. Twice in a chapter, poor girl. I look forward to your updates!
Author's Response: I love the twins too - and they don't get nearly enough action *lol*
I promise I'll update as soon as they'll let me *grin*
that was a good start. i would love to see where this story goes... Fred? or George?
Author's Response: You'll see eventually...:)
I'm glad you liked it.